Mod Ren'Py Summer's Gone Season 1: The Uncut Edition [V1.2][alain8891]

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alain8891

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OK, I said V1.1 would be the final version, that I was done with it...but...there's just so much of the dialog to fix still that I felt compelled to go back to it. Won't give an ETA though...there might even be a couple of cinematics/scenes additions when I think of it. We'll see...
For my own sanity I will try to give statistics, such as "how many lines of dialog were fixed/changed" with the mod.
 

Desastrousman

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OK, I said V1.1 would be the final version, that I was done with it...but...there's just so much of the dialog to fix still that I felt compelled to go back to it. Won't give an ETA though...there might even be a couple of cinematics/scenes additions when I think of it. We'll see...
For my own sanity I will try to give statistics, such as "how many lines of dialog were fixed/changed" with the mod.
man you are a cool guy, thanks for your hard work
 

wilkwild6896

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I know it has been stated a few times this doesn't work with scrappy mod but will it work fine with the Universal Ren'py Mod?
 

Daddy-S

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I kept some of the older cinematics knowing Ocean was destroying the VN slowly, it has a different audio track playing and shows the end title, is this the original and the mod a later version?
 

alain8891

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Mod updated to V1.2...this will be (really) the final update.
Intensive proofreading including lots of rephrasing, variable checking, typos, grammar, etc...very intensive work. Quite a bit of dialog has been rephrased while keeping the intended meaning, because of poor english. One such scene in particular is the book club scene.

One new scene: MC and Nami watching a porno (Chapter 3). This was cut way early on (I think with Chapter 3.5), though the renders remained for some time in the game folder. The renders leading to that scene have not been reworked since so it made sense to have them back. It included screengrabs of real porn movies superimposed on the renders. It also allowed the player to choose which kind of porn to watch. Those have not been kept. It just didn't fit in the game. I was more interested in the whole narrative and situation of that scene and what it meant for the dynamics between MC and Nami. So it's a shorter version of that scene now...they're watching lesbian porn. The script has been adjusted later on in the game at the gym, where MC asks Nami if she's sure she's not a lesbian. This dialog now only happens if they've watched this porno together: she does state while watching that she's not a lesbian, so it would only make sense for MC to ask her that if they had indeed watched it.

Three new cinematics reintroduced: the introduction one with the raccoon, MC trying to prevent Vic's accident (happens right before the accident longer video with game title), and the fight in the classroom between MC, Sai and the other fellow whose name escapes me right now. The reason behind that latter cinematic making it back is there was a render glitch within the game that wasn't fixed by Ocean: one of the assaillants has some hair in all renders but one where he is bald.

I did some slight adjustements to the script as well. One example is in Chapter 4.5 where Vic asks MC if he would reconsider dating her (if not dating already). This happens after the "Vic teasing" sequence. If MC doesn't reconsider, she would just say "I understand" and cry, whether they've had that teasing or not. Right...they've just had some foreplay and she says nothing more? Didn't feel right. So I've adjusted the dialog (if the teasing happened) to be a bit more aligned to the situation and both of their personalities. See screenshots below.
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Aside from the script changes above, there has been no other alteration or "creation", I really wanted to keep it as minimal as possible to only fix obvious narrative issues.
 
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Desastrousman

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Mod updated to V1.2...this will be (really) the final update.
Intensive proofreading including lots of rephrasing, variable checking, typos, grammar, etc...very intensive work. Quite a bit of dialog has been rephrased while keeping the intended meaning, because of poor english. One such scene in particular is the book club scene.

One new scene: MC and Nami watching a porno (Chapter 3). This was cut way early on (I think with Chapter 3.5), though the renders remained for some time in the game folder. The renders leading to that scene have not been reworked since so it made sense to have them back. It included screengrabs of real porn movies superimposed on the renders. It also allowed the player to choose which kind of porn to watch. Those have not been kept. It just didn't fit in the game. I was more interested in the whole narrative and situation of that scene and what it meant for the dynamics between MC and Nami. So it's a shorter version of that scene now...they're watching lesbian porn. The script has been adjusted later on in the game at the gym, where MC asks Nami if she's sure she's not a lesbian. This dialog now only happens if they've watched this porno together: she does state while watching that she's not a lesbian, so it would only make sense for MC to ask her that if they had indeed watched it.

Three new cinematics reintroduced: the introduction one with the raccoon, MC trying to prevent Vic's accident (happens right before the accident longer video with game title), and the fight in the classroom between MC, Sai and the other fellow whose name escapes me right now. The reason behind that latter cinematic making it back is there was a render glitch within the game that wasn't fixed by Ocean: one of the assaillants has some hair in all renders but one where he is bald.

I did some slight adjustements to the script as well. One example is in Chapter 4.5 where Vic asks MC if he would reconsider dating her (if not dating already). This happens after the "Vic teasing" sequence. If MC doesn't reconsider, she would just say "I understand" and cry, whether they've had that teasing or not. Right...they've just had some foreplay and she says nothing more? Didn't feel right. So I've adjusted the dialog (if the teasing happened) to be a bit more aligned to the situation and both of their personalities. See screenshots below.
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Aside from the script changes above, there has been no other alteration or "creation", I really wanted to keep it as minimal as possible to only fix obvious narrative issues.
thank you for your work
 
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