Version: 21.0.0 wip.4468
Where to begin. 2 years without an update, and then its a rework. And its an odd bent of a rework at that. The improvements are not significant enough to justify the egregious amount of time taken. Then to the content included thus far. It runs damn odd. Adding the whole of Debbie and Jenny's storys without all the other stories they intersect with not only just comes off as odd, but it leads to these weird and unnecessary time gaps because you have literally nothing else to do.
As for the stories that have been included. The path with Jenny where you go dominant is written by a sub. Its completely fucking toothless. Even all the way at the end, she is still regularly insulting, she's still domme in the camshows, literally every aspect of their relationship is wrong. Paying her $500 a night for a GFE while your Dom? Thats nonsense. A Dom would fucking never. Which is not to mention that which she's kicking up her attitude all you'd actually have to do is stop participating in her camshows and she'd fold like origami, because she needs that money more than you do.
As for Debbie,the options around the house should really progress better along with her story. And once you get to the end with her, while sleeping in her bed you should still need to go through the whole progression of things to get to sex. There should be a new sequence where you can jump right in. She's already showing up in your own room at night just to have a rowe.
My very strong recommendation going forward is DO NOT continue this path of adding whole stories at once, but instead go breadth over depth. You've already written so much of it, and it all intertwines, it just hits wrong when you're skipping past things.
Also, i don't see how the game is even playable for anyone not choosing the easy mode, because there was never any prompt for any method to earn money. Nor any prompt to actually start improving stats so the charisma checks would fail.
Where to begin. 2 years without an update, and then its a rework. And its an odd bent of a rework at that. The improvements are not significant enough to justify the egregious amount of time taken. Then to the content included thus far. It runs damn odd. Adding the whole of Debbie and Jenny's storys without all the other stories they intersect with not only just comes off as odd, but it leads to these weird and unnecessary time gaps because you have literally nothing else to do.
As for the stories that have been included. The path with Jenny where you go dominant is written by a sub. Its completely fucking toothless. Even all the way at the end, she is still regularly insulting, she's still domme in the camshows, literally every aspect of their relationship is wrong. Paying her $500 a night for a GFE while your Dom? Thats nonsense. A Dom would fucking never. Which is not to mention that which she's kicking up her attitude all you'd actually have to do is stop participating in her camshows and she'd fold like origami, because she needs that money more than you do.
As for Debbie,the options around the house should really progress better along with her story. And once you get to the end with her, while sleeping in her bed you should still need to go through the whole progression of things to get to sex. There should be a new sequence where you can jump right in. She's already showing up in your own room at night just to have a rowe.
My very strong recommendation going forward is DO NOT continue this path of adding whole stories at once, but instead go breadth over depth. You've already written so much of it, and it all intertwines, it just hits wrong when you're skipping past things.
Also, i don't see how the game is even playable for anyone not choosing the easy mode, because there was never any prompt for any method to earn money. Nor any prompt to actually start improving stats so the charisma checks would fail.