VN - Ren'Py - Supermodel: Defenders of Desire [v1.0.0] [Belle]

Supermodel 1.0.0

At it's core, this seems to be a story about superheros that have very human problems/weaknesses (and I assume eventually helping them overcome them) which, while not exactly breaking new ground, is usually a template I like when executed well. After the playing through the introductory 1.0.0 release I've got very mixed feelings on the game. The (fully optional) collectable card game aspect I found to be well polished, fun, and addictive. Everything else just was just disappointing. The renders look dated, the characters are mostly uninteresting, and the writing/story has a laundry list of issues that made most chapters a painful slog to get through. This is a story that really wants you to think about it but simultaneously requires that you turn your brain off to have any chance of suspending your disbelief due to the way things are written. I really hope this is just a case of a poorly realized and overdone introduction because the ideas and the card game both have tremendous potential. I'll likely check it out again once the story is further along to see if it improves but for now this is a great card game attached to poor VN which I can't give a rating of higher than average overall. Do check it out for yourselves though (especially if you've ever played a CCG or think you might enjoy the card game aspect of it) as I think the writing style and story will still appeal to certain people and the author isn't someone lacking in skill or innovative ideas.

More detailed breakdown (includes some spoilers):

Interesting game.
More a 3.5 but i rounded up since there is actual gameplay here.

You have a somewhat unique superhero urban setting.
After a sectioned character and plot introductions you can play the card game against 2 of the fem. characters.

The card game has a 10 turn ramp up structure. You have to make the decision between setting cards in limited spots and upgrading them for ramping resources or using the same cards to negate the negative modifiers the "opponent" puts down.

Its neat but if you dont get your set-up going by turn 4 there is no come back.

The girls look good and its intriguing.
Its not really a porn game but a game with (a little) porn.

It says 1.0 but this is more 1.0 of the proof of concept.
I downloaded for the red haired nurse but she has no content as of now

edit: Oh yeah, one thing that i think could be improved on is the writing structure. Head voice + exposition should not be more than 15-20% of the overall writing. It is way more than that here. Feels less engaging to read "about" stuff than to see, or characters to refer to stuff in dialogue.

+Version - 1.0.0
I like card games and I am bias. So, I give this 5 stars because the developers actually put some effort into the card game itself.
Feedback for the gameplay, I feel like 10 turns are way too short for each match. Maybe 12~15 turns depending on the difficulty would make the game a little more enjoyable.
Other than that, VN and the story is ok.

You know what this is? It's a peanut butter and jelly sandwich.

It's like a mix of AVN, a collectible card game and a tv show script. And like a peanut butter sandwich, it depends on how well these parts are put together.

If you're not allergic to any of those elements, then here's my impression of them:

CARD GAME (10/10)
The card game minigame is good and hasn't bugged out on me yet. It's got several difficult levels and plays like a digital collectible card game. It's optional and becomes skippable if you fail enough times.

STORY (8/10)
If you're one of those people that 'play for the story', well there's an actual story here. None of this landlady nonsense.

1. It's very well written, and reads more like an actual novel or tv show script. I say that because so far, there have been zero choices and I do not think the dev intends to implement many. Expect a kinetic AVN and very little choice in the direction of the story.
2. However, it's told in a non-linear fashion, where players choose a character and see the story from their point of view. But don't expect this to affect the story.
3. The story takes place in New York and there's real fly by footage of the city that's been included to add to the feel of the story. The music really adds to the feel as well.
4. However, I'm not really into any of the characters. There's not much established about them yet and it's still very early in the story. They could all be killed off in the next episode and I wouldn't care.

Overall, it feels more like one of those superhero tv shows from a small streaming service.

VISUALS AND UI (7/10)

1. The menu and other interfaces look nice and work well.
2. The renders are ok. The lighting used is sometimes way too bright in the renders, like the janitor replaced all the lightbulbs with 100000w super LED bulbs. There's also very noticeable noise in the renders as well.
3. The developer also presents most of it like a Japanese VN, where the renders are just characters standing like a floating sprite in front of a background. It feels like there are less renders than the usual AVN.

WHAT ABOUT THE LEWDS?...WHERE'S THE A in AVN? (2/10)
Nothing worth writing home about on this. And don't go in hoping for a dating sim or romance either, given the lack of choices in game.

1. Currently, there's just one showing one of the ladies masturbating. The animation quality was ok. The lighting was more subdued and natural looking.
2. But there was no money shot, no actual footage of the kitty being pet. Instead, a tasteful angle was used, like this was a tv show produced in LA and the actress had a 'no vulva' clause in her contract.
3. Given the story's focus, I'm not keeping my hopes up for this area to ever improve.

The developer describes the game as a intricately crafted erotic thriller. So far, I'm just not into any of the characters.

You may find that disappointing, but ask yourself this: would you event want to jerk off using a peanut butter jelly sandwich?

tl;dr Play for the card game, avoid if you just wanna fap. 5 stars because of card game.

(v1.0.0)
Excellent first release. A few rough spots, but the card game mechanics are solid, the writing is good (other than a couple odd word choices that stood out to me), and it's a decent amount of content for a first release. Definitely worth playing, and with the dev's pedigree I'm pretty confident this will get even better with updates.