VN - Others - Surprise Visit [v0.5] [ENNO]

While the art is extremely unique and sexy, the story and the characters just make no sense to me. It's one thing to have sneaking NTR, but it's another to simply have the women fall in seconds flat with no build up or consequence to the action of cheating. Sarah especially, her fall makes no sense at all.

The plot and characters need a complete overhaul to truly flesh things out and make the corruption/NTR part of this worthwhile.

Also, since there was hints of it within this version of the story, a revenge plotline, or at least a plotline where MC is aware of the going-ons would work very well.

I'm actually one of the very few who enjoy NTR, but this... this just seems brainless and un-fun... as if none of the girls ever truly cared or loved the MC, that they were just there to fuck and that's it. Boring and kind of painful to playthrough, ngl.

So, I love sneaking NTR. Tbh, not many games have them because the big part of the sneaking is that the mc does not know but we as the viewer notice the things. For example in this game you being told your cousin is using the bath but then the girlfriend shows up from the bath. Love that.

Tbh, a lot of people want coruptions and stuff like that in NTR games and that can work for sure but don't like the whole corruption most NTR goes two routes, big dick, or blackmail.

But yeah the story set up could have been better like them getting tricked to help the cousin. You know the good old mc hurt me and now my arm hurt so need help. Silly for sure but works for these types of games.

Personly always play a sneaking NTR as the mc pov as the first time and then I view the scenes. And here is my problems.

The sex in this game is boring and it is not because it is not animated but it feels off to me. Too short and too much is the same and the giant tits and cock are not my thing. Like feel the tits get bigger the longer the game is going on.

While I mostly enjoy MomNTR a bit and generally have low expectations, this game is mediocre. There's not even an attempt at seduction which is the core aspect of a worthwhile NTR. It's all pornified and there's sex from the get go. The women are all bimbos which can be fun but I don't see the point of the MC then. Just make a harem game.
2.5 stars as the English is without errors and there's content for those who want this sort of game.

there you go. this game is what I'm talking about.
downloaded. tent build. relieved.
3 steps. no bullshit, no pretentious gameplay, no wannabe anime esque story.
Kind of light hearted towards ntr and not too much content in it, but quick to jerk through.

[v0.3]

[Writing]

- Standard NTR generic slop. MC is a gullible idiot and the heroines are all whores the second they take or look at cock.


[Plot]

- Your cousin comes over at exactly the right time to see your sister masturbating and the rest is history.
- Despite his GF being horny for him and trying to initiate sex he pussies out. Days later she comes over while MC is in the hospital, then starts masturbating watching sister and bull fuck and then gets fucked as well.

[Art/Porn]

- This game has an art style that reminds me of Hitomi's Sick Pleasure but with a bull that kind of reminds me of that one NTRMAN game with the mom who starts tutoring your friend. There is some moaning and other sound effects which are nice, but most of the scenes are through the bull's POV with a few voyeur scenes from MC's POV. Overall the art is good enough.

Speaking of NTRMAN, if you're going to fap to generic NTRSlop at least his stuff is animated and voice acted. This game is passable I suppose and has enough content currently for a quick fap or two. At least it doesn't pretend to be deep and gets right to the action in the first few minutes.

I'm not going to mention any of the characters names or motivations because they really don't matter. Everyone is just a caricature to move the NTR plot forward.

The artwork Is top tier, and I can't wait to see It improve, but the game could really use some more buildup to the whole NTR part, and a bit more content before I would really recommend anyone to play It. If I could give it a 3.5 I would. Overall Surprise Visit Is a really promising game with passable NTR story I suppose, and amazing art.

Finally a game that gets to the point fast, Highly recommend for NTR lovers, the MC gets cucked by his mom, sis, and gf. The artwork is good and story is funny. I particularly like the sister's design.

The artwork is incredible but the dialogue is really bland and it doesn't give much depth if any at all to the characters or story,
the NTR aspect of this game is also really lacking happens way too fast and seamlessly so if your looking for a heavy story gut wrenching story this game isn't it but if you're looking for a quick fap I recommend it love the artwork if it wasn't for the dialogue it'd be easily a 5/5

Really awesome work so far, really excited to see where this goes. I love ENNO's artwork, and the premise of the game, with Taro coming to disrupt the family is quite great as well. Please continue to make more, looking forward to Taro having some fun with that gf!