Azteca

Formerly 'Sergeichoya'
Game Developer
Aug 20, 2018
5
71
#1
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Overview:
After Henry’s lab was closed, he lived with his stepdaughter. He decided to do his experiment on himself. However, the experiment was interrupted by his grandson by the name of Richard. Now Henry’s mind with Richard’s mind are in Richard’s body. Henry’s body is in a coma. They have to make money and try to remain an excellent student at school.​

Thread Update: 2019-03-13
Release Date: 2019-03-13
Developer: Azteca
Censored: No
Version: 0.12
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
Genre:
3DGC, Animated, Male Protagonist, Big Ass, Big Tits, Groping, Teasing, Voyeurism, Dating Sim, Humor, Point & Click, Romance, School setting

Installation:
1. Extract and run.

Changelog:
70 characters animations,
310 renders

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djkunn

Well-Known Member
Apr 25, 2017
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372
#4
@Azteca sounds pretty good, can you tell us about what type of content can we expect in the future? what type of game will be? vanilla clasic love or you will include some "fetishes" that some people may or not like?
 
Likes: Azteca
Feb 28, 2018
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#5
Like the screenshots say Mom with the lady appearing in a cpl pics including one with her head in your lap
I feel there might be some incest there but, yush.
Even if that somehow is not the case, the game looks pretty good.

Some nice models and even a tomboy it seems.

Im going to try this one out tonight for sure.
 
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Azteca

Formerly 'Sergeichoya'
Game Developer
Aug 20, 2018
5
71
#6
@Azteca sounds pretty good, can you tell us about what type of content can we expect in the future? what type of game will be? vanilla clasic love or you will include some "fetishes" that some people may or not like?
Corruption so far don t sure about vanilla, and maybe mind control but not to soon right now im planning more locations and events in them, to better simulate school.
 

djkunn

Well-Known Member
Apr 25, 2017
468
372
#8
Corruption so far don t sure about vanilla, and maybe mind control but not to soon right now im planning more locations and events in them, to better simulate school.
vanilla refering to games like dreams of desire, dating my daughter, melody, milfy city where all the romanceable heroines only have sex with the mc, what im asking is if you will focus the story on the mc only or there will be other male npcs i guess invested in the girls we can have.
also btw is there incest? or landlady as it is called those days xD
 

Azteca

Formerly 'Sergeichoya'
Game Developer
Aug 20, 2018
5
71
#9
vanilla refering to games like dreams of desire, dating my daughter, melody, milfy city where all the romanceable heroines only have sex with the mc, what im asking is if you will focus the story on the mc only or there will be other male npcs i guess invested in the girls we can have.
also btw is there incest? or landlady as it is called those days xD
There will be others male npc interested in girls.
Only groping and voyeurism in this version of the game.
 
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djkunn

Well-Known Member
Apr 25, 2017
468
372
#10
There will be others male npc interested in girls.
Only groping and voyeurism in this version of the game.
well i hope those male npc dont have sex with rubi or any other girl close to the mc (y)

here is what i think after trying the game.

is kinda hard for me to get invested into the game because of it having 2 mcs at the same time, dunno if more people have this problem. Maybe in the future we can get rid of the kid or viceverse and be only 1 mc?
the english is pretty weird sometimes too, i guess you will need a editor in the future to help you.
also try in the future to avoid too much grind for stats or relationship points. (though we can always cheat the stats i guess some people enjoy playing the game with no cheats.)
So far i liked the game, the girls are pretty good looking (will see how you do in next updates;))
 
Likes: biloutte
May 30, 2017
226
943
#11
The synopsis really needs to be expanded. It's two sentences long and seems to have very little to do with most of the sample images. Who is Richard as a character? Who does he share his body with? Why is Richard doing weird body sharing experiments when he is a school kid? Which characters does he have an interest in? How does the body sharing work, in a basic sense - does Richard retain full control and have the other character speaking in his ear, does he have to fight for control, does he black out when he sleeps and the other character does shit on their own?

1.2 gig is a big download for a lot of people, many people around the world are still on data caps, giving them more than two vague sentences is important. You should also probably look at compressing your image files, 1.2 gig seems exteremely large for the number of renders you have. Your patreon page has even less info on the game than this page does. You should fix that as well.

But on the plus side, your patreon tiers are simple, reasonably priced, and don't gate content, so huge props on that. A lot of devs get that really wrong, and youve gotten it right on your first try which is impressive. The renders also look quite good, with the exception of some weird posing. The blonde girls arms are reallllly thin and lanky, and the way she uses them is odd. In particular how she sits at the school desk looks incredibly uncomfortable.

Last little nitpick. Unless youre talking people marrying into the family, most relatives are long time relatives ;)

Overall, best of luck on your game! It shows a lot of promise. All the issues I raised are easy fixes, for an otherwise really cool looking product.
 

Azteca

Formerly 'Sergeichoya'
Game Developer
Aug 20, 2018
5
71
#15
The synopsis really needs to be expanded. It's two sentences long and seems to have very little to do with most of the sample images. Who is Richard as a character? Who does he share his body with? Why is Richard doing weird body sharing experiments when he is a school kid? Which characters does he have an interest in? How does the body sharing work, in a basic sense - does Richard retain full control and have the other character speaking in his ear, does he have to fight for control, does he black out when he sleeps and the other character does shit on their own?

1.2 gig is a big download for a lot of people, many people around the world are still on data caps, giving them more than two vague sentences is important. You should also probably look at compressing your image files, 1.2 gig seems exteremely large for the number of renders you have. Your patreon page has even less info on the game than this page does. You should fix that as well.

But on the plus side, your patreon tiers are simple, reasonably priced, and don't gate content, so huge props on that. A lot of devs get that really wrong, and youve gotten it right on your first try which is impressive. The renders also look quite good, with the exception of some weird posing. The blonde girls arms are reallllly thin and lanky, and the way she uses them is odd. In particular how she sits at the school desk looks incredibly uncomfortable.

Last little nitpick. Unless youre talking people marrying into the family, most relatives are long time relatives ;)

Overall, best of luck on your game! It shows a lot of promise. All the issues I raised are easy fixes, for an otherwise really cool looking product.
The synopsis really needs to be expanded.
I agree with this
It's two sentences long and seems to have very little to do with most of the sample images.
Hm, I haven't thought about this problem before.

Who is Richard as a character? Who does he share his body with? Why is Richard doing weird body sharing experiments when he is a school kid?

- Richard goes to this experiment because he sees in the old man something like his hero, so he easily agrees. This is not fully covered in the story.


1.2 gig is a big download for a lot of people, many people around the world are still on data caps, giving them more than two vague sentences is important. You should also probably look at compressing your image files, 1.2 gig seems exteremely large for the number of renders you have. Your patreon page has even less info on the game than this page does. You should fix that as well.
- game size reduction on my to-do list
- patreon there also


The blonde girls arms are reallllly thin and lanky, and the way she uses them is odd. In particular how she sits at the school desk looks incredibly uncomfortable.

- I'll recheck it.

Overall, best of luck on your game! It shows a lot of promise. All the issues I raised are easy fixes, for an otherwise really cool looking product.

- Thank you for your detailed review.
 

crust

TCMS's Special Bunny
Modder
Uploader
Donor
GFX Designer
May 4, 2017
2,616
31,447
#17
Here is a compressed pc and mac version of v0.12!

PC (101MB): - - - -
Mac (98MB): - - - -

When Images won't load or show up, download, then install the right codec for your os.
MacOS:
Windows:

When movies won't load or show up, download the webm "DirectShow Filters".
DirectShow Filters:
 
May 30, 2017
226
943
#18
- Richard goes to this experiment because he sees in the old man something like his hero, so he easily agrees. This is not fully covered in the story.
See this is the issue, not having played the game I had no idea who was doing the experiment, where the experiment was held, that an old man even existed etc. Given the description only mentioned Richard, I assumed he was doing the experiment. A description needs to tell the player roughly what to expect from a game WITHOUT the player having to play the game. And like a previous commenter mentioned, having a list of planned fetishes is also usually a good way to get people interested in your game. Many devs include a dev note in a spoiler box at the bottom of their OP. That's a good way of telling people what you intend for the game to develop towards.

Points you should cover in the description:
- One sentence on who Richard is as a character: his age, that he is a student, and a couple of defining character traits (ie. he might be smart, or kind, or scheming etc.)
- A brief description of the setting: where does the game take place (a small town, a bustling city etc.), where does the character live and who with, what is his school called and is there anything unique about it
- A description of the experiment and its immediate results: who is running the experiment, what are its goals, why does Richard sign up, who else signed up/was involved, what did the experiment do to the characters
- Finally give the player an idea of the games direction: How do the characters react to their change, what are the first things theyre going to do about it, what is the tone of the game (serious, comedy, mystery, romantic etc.)

You can honestly do all that in two-three small paragraphs. Look at some of the other descriptions of the higher rated games on this site for inspiration. Your page here and your patreon page is about you selling your game. Your sample images do a good job of it, but some people care a lot about writing, show them you can do it! :)

PS. @crust is a god.
 
Nov 25, 2018
21
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#19
Nice renders, but I don't understand anything. Because...

Language: English
Well, not exactly. The weird word order and incorrectly used words probably points to some Slavic language spoken with English vocabulary.

When there's no back story and the text utterly broken, it makes the game unplayable for me. Sorry.
 
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Aug 17, 2017
25
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#20
As stated by others,
Am 3 mins into this and i haven't a clue what's going on, pity because it looks good but 3 mins in is as far as I'm going. I might check back after a few updates to see if the writing has improved
 
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