Ren'Py - Sweet Deviance [v0.1.1] [Pastel Venom]

The game looks good, gotta love femboy games. But so far the mc is an unbearable creep. Makes you feel second-hand shame just reading his inner dialogue. I hope the dev changes his mind about it. And the overall dialogue isn't much better either even for porn game standards. If the overall writing gets better it could be a pretty good game.

The game has a promising start and I love the visuals.

The only reason I'm not giving 5 stars so far is the ChatGPT writing. It's very blatant and distracting. It's not just the Em Dashes that give it away either.

This is a very short game so far, and it felt like every few sentences was like "I don't just feel X, but also Y", "It's not only X, but Y too", and so on. It was really repetitive and distracting. I'm not against people using AI to punch up their scripts a bit, but if you're going to do it, at least edit it to get rid of some of that annoying crap AI repeats over and over and over.

I've just finished 0.1, and Sweet Deviance is looking quite good as it promises to become a great choice of play for those of us who like traps/femboys.

Script is more than decent for a prologue or Ep 1, renders look fine and LI is disarmingly cute. It has one lewd scene thus far -which can be seen in OP- and it didn't feel like it was rushed just to get us fapping ASAP; the build-up was rewarding and its pace was plenty good.

The only downsides worth mentioning are: lack of skipping seen text and a "quest log"/notifications. No matter how much one presses Tab or Ctrl, text won't skip. Which might easily solvable yet it's quite inconvenient and pretty bizarre. What I mean by "quest log" is simply that: a quest log. Something one can refer to when not knowing what to do when all of a sudden there's a free roam and clicking on the phone will end it, even though you want to explore it a bit more. I did think the phone would give me directions, yet the first free roam ended after texting Noah.

All in all, a nice little promising start even after the ending. I'm really looking forward to seeing this getting more traction and for Alex's character to grow and be able to rectify himself after that disaster...

Cute character, some decent writing, probably could use a fast forward button if screwing up causes a game over though.

Really just needs more content over all, but a good start as long as things will be fleshed out alot more.

Promising game and well built first release. The game has nice artworks and animations thus it got marked on my watchlist. I hope there will be more content and regular updates and later more gurls for dating.