VN - Ren'Py - Sweet Home Magic [v0.1a] [FictionStories]

Pretty impressive start! Even for a first version, it looks really good. If you are looking for a MILF, you will get one of the best out there. No relevant cons so far, only Pros: renders, narrative (altough it just started), pacing (which could be a problem, but some hints and expressions here say otherwise).

Kinda hard to rate right now since there's little content and there's I think only one choice total, but what is here is really good. I'm digging the whole portal/other realmish thing. One thing I really have to credit here is the graphics and artstyle. The girls look very, very good but I also really like the art for the portal realm stuff. It looks like it's a blend of realism mixed with fantasy. I thought the leprechaun knight looked really really good. The writing is also pretty decent, but it's hard to know how good since there's not too much going on right now. Overall, a really strong start, looking forward to more.

I absolutely love the way that milf is made to interact with everything. The glances of other man, the way she represents herself (not too slutty, but a innocent and lovely "landlady"). 10/10 did way better than other games I've played (and I played probably 90 % of this type games).

Other characters are amazing too, but it's not what I'm interested the most.

I hope developer will explore more ideas with some kind of innocent flirting with other males than MC, and it's for him to decide if he do some NTR, but I think it would be amazing route (few routes for different folks , I would be interested in both). Also, it would get a lot of more exposure for this project.

There is a lot of potential to do it better than "AAA" games on this site. Just don't make it too fast with whoring and don't ruin it . I'll subscribe and don't forget to interact with followers, create a discord!

This is the type of games that I really like and it really hits what I want. REally good so far and hopefully it keeps up.
For a first draft, this game looks very promising.
Renders are beautiful, especially the female characters and notably Rachel who is one of the most gorgeous woman.

So far amazing! Focus on the story because it has suspense in it, make me wanna know more about the background story. Character models looks really well done! Keep up the good work and please don't abandon this like other dev's do!

The pacing is really decent, Gfx are very nicely done, the writing is decent and hope to see it gets frequent updates and not a lot of characters so thats a good point because too many characters and the game just feels lackster , this looks very promising.

Good luck to the dev, think you have a decent game.

0.1v

love it so far the story and especially the renders are fantastic not many games as such great renders like this one. realistic look and also looking great.
waiting for more keep up the excellent work dev

Renders look fine, no music or sound yet.

The story is filled with uncertainty and looks a bit unfinished. Dialogue switches in tone for the MC as if he is an extreme gen-z reject that suddenly lapses into normal interaction patterns back and forth.

MC is stated to be 18, but appears to be a dwarf with progeria. He simply looks like a 12 year old.. no way around it. Gives off too many creepy vibes.

The main fetish appears to be MILF... and the MILFs appear a bit worn out and around mid fortyish in age. Not much interaction nor interest is shown towards any of the other female characters other than older MILFs.

If anyone has a liking for middle aged MILFs and an MC that jumps from a gen-z poser identity to that of a relatively regular boy that appears to be 12.. so be it, but this one is not my cup of tea. I will leave it at average score for now as there is room for change and improvement.

In the future, let's hope that the story may actually go somewhere with more diverse LI interests that may be developed. The MC could age a few years visually and begin to stabilize in personality and dialogue without all the slang., that would help immensely.

0.1a Review

Great start.

The models and renders are seriously fantastic, and the story has enough hooks to keep me interested in where it's going.

Keep up the good work dev! Very excited to see what's coming next!

Renders:

Definitely carrying this story and the only highlight of the project to me.

Story:

The MC is a baby-faced midget with apparently a big dick and some kind of powers. He appears to have some kind of amnesia(Shocker!) about what happened to him. It looks as if he were in some kind of hospital for treatment before being released to his Landlady.

He's trying to come off as this Zen like person that's disciplined but it's just comical to watch. He then resorts to the usual peeking, spying on his "Landlady" within the first night. Just the usual rehashed garbage with a element of magic added to it. It's really heard to take this MC serious. Also nearly every model looks like they should try out for the WNBA as they all tower over him.

Characters:

Giants and a midget. Typical delulu Milf that's getting creeped on by everyone and is too stupid to release it. Typical pervy MC. Typical liberated side Milf/friend that's going to show the delulu, dimwitted Milf how to let it all hang out. Just more of the same.

Overall:

I'm good. Unless... the MC hits puberty, the story gets better and the MC doesn't creep on everyone he sees which I don't see happening. Best of luck to the Dev.

Lots of potential, reminds me of True Bond, let's hope it goes smoothly. I like the slow burn, I love the mother's physique, and hopefully the protagonist has a nice member for them, with lots of erotic scenes like erections under clothes or sheets, etc.

For a first draft, this game looks very promising.
Renders are beautiful, especially the female characters and notably Rachel who is one of the most beautiful MILFs I've seen in a game. The story also looks exciting, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep up the good work, developer.