Well i didn't expect anything and my intuition didn't fail me. Synopsis describes the story more or less, you can read it fully in like 20 minutes (not that you would want to) or skip the stuff in 5. Despite attempting revenge and all you only get a boobjob and a blowjob with two of the three girls, so there are 3 short scenes in total from which only one is actual sex.
Now the premise of the story is alright, doing revenge only to realise one of your targets actually became a better person and fall for her is honestly pretty alright. WOULD be alright in the hands of someone who gave a shit and didn't write this nonsense. Protagonist is a complete idiot and with first 2 girls it's enough to just do "hey i can show you a good time" and the girl go "oh yeah do then". It's all honestly written in a pretty awful manner, sentenses have no structure or flow, narrator intervention is pointless and entire thing evoke zero emotions.
It's ultimately an extremely poor attempt that does nothing for anyone, it's not a good revenge story, it's not a good romance story, it's not a good story period. You don't even get revenge properly really. Not worth downloading at all.
Now the premise of the story is alright, doing revenge only to realise one of your targets actually became a better person and fall for her is honestly pretty alright. WOULD be alright in the hands of someone who gave a shit and didn't write this nonsense. Protagonist is a complete idiot and with first 2 girls it's enough to just do "hey i can show you a good time" and the girl go "oh yeah do then". It's all honestly written in a pretty awful manner, sentenses have no structure or flow, narrator intervention is pointless and entire thing evoke zero emotions.
It's ultimately an extremely poor attempt that does nothing for anyone, it's not a good revenge story, it's not a good romance story, it's not a good story period. You don't even get revenge properly really. Not worth downloading at all.