RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.501] [Fujino]

[Infeno2.0]

why do they hate Kirito?

Poorly written character in the manga/LN and because Asuna is one the most used in NTR

 

[por12]

Poorly written character in the manga/LN and because Asuna is one the most used in NTR

most asian mc are either degenerates or doormats,psychopaths or saints

 

[4-kun]

That's a interesting side route and could work who don't want to see Asuna getting chucked.
But in the end we always need to keep in mind most of the Fujino fan base hate Kirito and this go against the flow.
The only thing in favour of that would be the extra sex scenes to the fans.
Hypothetical Lets say She manage somehow to take Kirito from Asuna then fast forward and who is back the bull, rinse and repeat.
At least I give that to Fujino a chick with agency in a NTR game is something you don't see much.
Until he make inoda fuck her with Asuna and Liz... Oh.... Where we already saw that again

That's one perspective of yours, but there’s no argument or evidence that she would end up with Inoda. Since she’s been with Hebishima, Inoda has nothing to offer her that she didn’t already experience and break free from on her own terms. In fact, it’s quite the opposite; she pretty much knows what she wants, and that’s Kirito with all his flaws. Additionally, her turning Kirito into her submissive slave, for example, wouldn’t make for a better outcome for him. In fact, I don't care for him, but her character has the potential to tell a unique story. I want to see what her yandere attitude can pull off. Lastly, she is a side character who isn’t bound to the main plot, unlike Liz and Kyoko, so her story can evolve in its own way. Those are the facts as of now, unless Fujino decides to completely overturn her character, which would make zero sense.

 

[kinglionheart]

most asian mc are either degenerates or doormats,psychopaths or saints

Author's self projection of themselves or wish fulfillment of what they want to be.

 

[qq393876747]

thx

 

[Infeno2.0]

That's one perspective of yours, but there’s no argument or evidence that she would end up with Inoda. Since she’s been with Hebishima, Inoda has nothing to offer her that she didn’t already experience and break free from on her own terms. In fact, it’s quite the opposite; she pretty much knows what she wants, and that’s Kirito with all his flaws. Additionally, her turning Kirito into her submissive slave, for example, wouldn’t make for a better outcome for him. In fact, I don't care for him, but her character has the potential to tell a unique story. I want to see what her yandere attitude can pull off. Lastly, she is a side character who isn’t bound to the main plot, unlike Liz and Kyoko, so her story can evolve in its own way. Those are the facts as of now, unless Fujino decides to completely overturn her character, which would make zero sense.

I agree with you that would be a nice and most needed break from the mold and make no sense her and Inoda , like I said before props to Fujino for making a female character in a NTR game with some agency.
That being said, he already put the scene in the game you can correct me if I am wrong but in the karaoke nightmare scene she was there wasn't she? So this is what I call foreshadowing.
Heck if Kirito mom wasn't dead Fujino wouldn't mind make Inoda bang her as well.

 

[Aniky Light]

Poorly written character in the manga/LN and because Asuna is one the most used in NTR

I thought they hate him for the fact that in all of Asuna's NTRs, Kirito never had any doubts about what was happening, it didn't occur to him to ask: who knows why he's taking so long, but instead he's standing there dazed

 

[Aniky Light]

Are you talking about the nightmare with Asuna and Liz near the beginning of Part 2? Inoda only met Suguha recently.


There is still Kirito's adopted mother, Suguha's mother.

that part should be in the recollection room

 

[4-kun]

I agree with you that would be a nice and most needed break from the mold and make no sense her and Inoda , like I said before props to Fujino for making a female character in a NTR game with some agency.
That being said, he already put the scene in the game you can correct me if I am wrong but in the karaoke nightmare scene she was there wasn't she? So this is what I call foreshadowing.
Heck if Kirito mom wasn't dead Fujino wouldn't mind make Inoda bang her as well.

It could be foreshadowing as you said, but there are three arguments against it. First off, we’re far into the game, and she has basically no connection to Inoda. Secondly, it was a dream sequence back in Part 1, I believe, not sure, I thought it was Liz? But back then, Fujino didn’t have plans to change Suguhas character. And lastly, dream sequences aren’t always foreshadowing, like the Asuna and the thugs dream; we know for sure that’s never going to happen. To sum up, Fujino isn’t the best writer, but I don’t think he’d put so much effort into giving her a unique story just to ruin it with some random, illogical twist. In the end, reverse NTR is still NTR, just her cucking Asuna, as long as we get scenes out of it, everything should be fine

 

[Infeno2.0]

Are you talking about the nightmare with Asuna and Liz near the beginning of Part 2? Inoda only met Suguha recently.


There is still Kirito's adopted mother, Suguha's mother.

I do remember 3 chicks in the nightmare karaoke scene or maybe I saw that somewhere, but I'm not sure either way thanks for keep me honest

 

[Infeno2.0]

In the end, reverse NTR is still NTR, just her cucking Asuna, as long as we get scenes out of it, everything should be fine

I see, a man of culture, very well sir

About the rest, looks farfetched I give you that, but not impossible,, one thing in common on Fujino work the heroines tend to fall hard he doesn't have any qualms about that.

 

[gaka200]

While I do agree that we are getting an XL-sized update, I would be more modest with my expectations regarding the amount of scenes.
A large event may include up to 4 or 5 CGs, while more humble scenes such as the bathroom event from last update was probably 3.
When we include the battle harassment cgs, there were more than 15 CGs for the update we just played.

Of course, that was due to the nature of the battle H-scenes that needed a lot of CGs, but I have played the counting CG game for a lot of updates and I always ended up exaggerating the final number.

I understand and wasn't really referencing the length of the scenes, but just that there are maybe 8 scenes based off the progress reports.

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[4-kun]

I see, a man of culture, very well sir

About the rest, looks farfetched I give you that, but not impossible,, one thing in common on Fujino work the heroines tend to fall hard he doesn't have any qualms about that.

Yeah, nothing is impossible with the Admin around.
Speaking of Witch, that's another argument: the Admin said while Kirito can't change Asuna's fate, he may do so for other characters.

As for his previous games, they are still different, with basically insta-corruption. This one is different; he actually put some thought and explanation into things this time.

 

[SixDates]

Are you talking about the nightmare with Asuna and Liz near the beginning of Part 2? Inoda only met Suguha recently.

Funny enough, Suguha was the first side character to have met Inoda, with Kirito and Asuna taking him to her coffee shop after they saved him from getting beat up by those random bullies in part 1.
Although I am not entirely sure if there has been any more encounters such as that afterward until their encounter recently.

But that encounter does bring up something that might be important.

It could be foreshadowing as you said, but there are three arguments against it.

The first time that I can remember in part 2 of Inoda meeting Sugu was with him thinking of how hot she was, with a heart emote flying about above his head and everything. And while I know that doesn´t necessarily mean anything, it was still an eye-brow-rising moment for me.

I will only be fully content when the piggy does not get closer than 100 miles from my glorious, incestual queen.

Since she’s been with Hebishima, Inoda has nothing to offer her that she didn’t already experience and break free from on her own terms. In fact, it’s quite the opposite; she pretty much knows what she wants, and that’s Kirito with all his flaws.

And this is the thing that worries me the most, because Inoda does have something to offer Suguha that Hebishima never did. After all, this is how he is going to get Liz at the end of the day, an offering to take away Asuna from Kirito, allowing anyone hungry for Cuckito´s inconsistent meat free-range at him after he supposedly breaks them up. (Even if we know that he isn´t planning in doing so.)

Would it be good writing for Fujino to basically do the same plot for Suguha as he did with Liz?
Not really.

Could I see a future where Fujino decides to ruin our best girl by throwing her to get bitten by the horny dog that is Inoda?
I totally can.

I have said this many times before, but the biggest issue with Suguha is her future in the many incoming updates until the ending. As a heroine in a porn game there is an obligation for lewd scenes to continue happening, and while there are certainly a lot of potential scenes she could have while maintaining her current plot, it is much more difficult for Fujino to handle an almost unique development path as the Reverse NTR, yandere set-up that Sugu has been building up, then simply going back to the easy "Big Dick Corruption NTR" plotline.

What do I mean after all this yapping?

I myself would be nothing but happy if during the next update Inoda´s doctor tells him he has 2 days left to live because he ended up catching a deadly STD from Asuna´s mom, spreading it Asuna and causing both of them to ´sadly´ pass away from natural causes as Suguha takes care of Kirito´s grieving dick at every opportunity.

But until Suguha doesn´t fully rapes Kirito, solidifying her character arc and future as someone with a tainted love for her brother, I won´t be able to rest easy.

 

[4-kun]

And this is the thing that worries me the most, because Inoda does have something to offer Suguha that Hebishima never did. After all, this is how he is going to get Liz at the end of the day, an offering to take away Asuna from Kirito, allowing anyone hungry for Cuckito´s inconsistent meat free-range at him after he supposedly breaks them up. (Even if we know that he isn´t planning in doing so.)

Would it be good writing for Fujino to basically do the same plot for Suguha as he did with Liz?
Not really.

Could I see a future where Fujino decides to ruin our best girl by throwing her to get bitten by the horny dog that is Inoda?
I totally can.

What do you mean, what can Inoda give her that Hebishima couldn’t? I was talking specifically about Inoda from a narrative perspective, not what Fujino as a dev can change in her story. There’s no point in arguing about the author; he could make Kirito get hit by a truck and end the game next update or let the Admin burn the world, even if it doesn’t make any sense storywise

 

[kinglionheart]

Funny enough, Suguha was the first side character to have met Inoda, with Kirito and Asuna taking him to her coffee shop after they saved him from getting beat up by those random bullies in part 1.
Although I am not entirely sure if there has been any more encounters such as that afterward until their encounter recently.

But that encounter does bring up something that might be important.



The first time that I can remember in part 2 of Inoda meeting Sugu was with him thinking of how hot she was, with a heart emote flying about above his head and everything. And while I know that doesn´t necessarily mean anything, it was still an eye-brow-rising moment for me.

I will only be fully content when the piggy does not get closer than 100 miles from my glorious, incestual queen.



And this is the thing that worries me the most, because Inoda does have something to offer Suguha that Hebishima never did. After all, this is how he is going to get Liz at the end of the day, an offering to take away Asuna from Kirito, allowing anyone hungry for Cuckito´s inconsistent meat free-range at him after he supposedly breaks them up. (Even if we know that he isn´t planning in doing so.)

Would it be good writing for Fujino to basically do the same plot for Suguha as he did with Liz?
Not really.

Could I see a future where Fujino decides to ruin our best girl by throwing her to get bitten by the horny dog that is Inoda?
I totally can.

I have said this many times before, but the biggest issue with Suguha is her future in the many incoming updates until the ending. As a heroine in a porn game there is an obligation for lewd scenes to continue happening, and while there are certainly a lot of potential scenes she could have while maintaining her current plot, it is much more difficult for Fujino to handle an almost unique development path as the Reverse NTR, yandere set-up that Sugu has been building up, then simply going back to the easy "Big Dick Corruption NTR" plotline.

What do I mean after all this yapping?

I myself would be nothing but happy if during the next update Inoda´s doctor tells him he has 2 days left to live because he ended up catching a deadly STD from Asuna´s mom, spreading it Asuna and causing both of them to ´sadly´ pass away from natural causes as Suguha takes care of Kirito´s grieving dick at every opportunity.

But until Suguha doesn´t fully rapes Kirito, solidifying her character arc and future as someone with a tainted love for her brother, I won´t be able to rest easy.

We all live by the whims of the creator. Like 4-kun said before, no one is forcing Fujino to do anything. The supporters can suggest but it is Fujino who decides. If he wants to sudden stop everything and end the game in the FU way possible to his fans, he can. Since he is Japan most of us can't hunt him down for vengeance!

Suguha has already made a unbelievable escape from being the stereotypical NTR bull's side piece. What a waste it would be if she goes back or doesn't do something something incredible like Reverse NTRing Kirito away.

 

[Infeno2.0]

What do you mean, what can Inoda give her that Hebishima couldn’t? I was talking specifically about Inoda from a narrative perspective, not what Fujino as a dev can change in her story. There’s no point in arguing about the author; he could make Kirito get hit by a truck and end the game next update or let the Admin burn the world, even if it doesn’t make any sense storywise

Storyline is simple, not wanting Kirito to know about her in the FOG as well about Hebishima simple blackmail. We know Inoda is following Kirito around incognito mode if he sees something about them in FOG and discover the blonde elf is her.
By the way he's banging kyoko right, who's was banging her before him? Hebishima. And who Hebishima was banging not long ago Suguha.
See they sharing something.
Blonde girl we believe is over Alice they were talking but maybe was about Suguha, time will tell

 

[SixDates]

What do you mean, what can Inoda give her that Hebishima couldn’t?

Inoda, if Fujino isn't against rehashing storylines, could offer Suguha ""help"" in making Kirito hers, much like he did with Liz.

Hebishima only offered Suguha sex and blackmail, with not much else that could be of interest to her. That's why now that Suguha doesn't need to fear his blackmail anymore, she only uses him for the occasional incest roleplay AV performance and to make a quick buck while in FOG.

On the other hand, while the pig is a shivering Coward, a stinking fuggly bastard, dick-for-brains pervert, and many other things. He is also someone in a position to influence not only Kirito but Suguha's biggest "competition", Asuna.



Again, I repeat, it would be an awful decision from a writing perspective but my pessimistic self could see it happening if Fujino just wants to rush or wrap Suguha's character at some point.

he could make Kirito get hit by a truck

You know, I wouldn’t mind an arc where Kirito breaks/ sprains a leg and he has to remained bed-ridden for a few days.

In fact, I would love it if he were to get sick once again.

A scenario where Asuna, in the future where she is more willing to fuck the braindead Inoda in real life, decides to stop by Inoda's place before going to take care of Kirito and ends up spending all day getting fucked by Inoda's probably unwashed cock. All while Suguha spends the day taking care of her Onii-chan on the apartment next door.

We could have a zoom out view of the apartment, like when Sugu was masturbating to Kirito raping Asuna in his feverish craze, but this time it would show both apartments with Sugu riding her brother while Asuna could be riding the only pig in history capable of speaking Japanese.
I think it would be a great scene to show the stark difference of the characters before and after getting even more corrupted in part 2.

I don't know how everyone feels of repeating story beats like Kirito getting sick again, but I think this could be peak fiction if Fujino were to so something like this in the future.

Since he is Japan most of us can't hunt him down for vengeance!

Now that you mention that, I wonder how expensive a plane ticket to Japan actually is nowadays...

I could visit not only Fujino in that case, but Gege Akutami is also there.

 

[4-kun]

Hebishima only offered Suguha sex and blackmail, with not much else that could be of interest to her. That's why now that Suguha doesn't need to fear his blackmail anymore, she only uses him for the occasional incest roleplay AV performance and to make a quick buck while in FOG.

On the other hand, while the pig is a shivering Coward, a stinking fuggly bastard, dick-for-brains pervert, and many other things. He is also someone in a position to influence not only Kirito but Suguha's biggest "competition", Asuna.
there.

Again, that’s already Liz’s route. Do you really believe Fujino would make Suguha follow the same story? And most importantly, what does he gain from it? Suguha can’t offer him anything that would help him with Asuna, which is his main goal, and all the FMCs around him serve this purpose. Not that he needs any more help, really. Also keep in mind, there should be at least one characters to distract Kirito. While I get what you’re implying, I just don’t see it happening given the situation right now.

 

[SixDates]

And most importantly, what does he gain from it? Suguha can’t offer him anything that would help him with Asuna, which is his main goal, and all the FMCs around him serve this purpose. Not that he needs any more help, really.

I actually hadn't thought about it, mostly because Inoda is the type of guy who would stick his dick in an electrical socket if it fit, but now that I think about it there wouldn't be much of benefit for Fatsoda in the same way Kyouko and Liz are means to further his conquest of Asuna.

i hope not. this will turn into those clichéd ntr corruption game, which would be the biggest low point for many(including me)

I don't know what you are expecting from the game, but while there may be some wiggle room for the side-characters, there is no way that Asuna won't get corrupted like that at some point.

Like, I really don't see how such a scenario could upset you when her focusing on Inoda's ugly cock over Kirito is basically a forgone conclusion.