RPGM - Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.85c] [Fujino]

It's an above average game, which isn't saying much giving the playing field.

Plot: 4/10 Really bland and unnatural NTR story? Both MC are so dumb to the point of having 0 brain cells and eyes or ears. Almost feel like MC is asking for it... I mean 2 of the most experienced players not knowing what the boss does, while some guy who never left beginner town was able to gather the info.
Scenes: 8/10 It might not be my art style but overall pretty hot setups. battle sex scenes are really good.
Gameplay: 2/10 I mean I gave points to the battle sex already, other than that it's just a waste of time. No gear, exp don't matter, no stats.

If Karryn's prison is 5 start for a good RPGM game, then this game probably fits in 3 stars. I believe the hardest and the hottest parts of NTR games is making corruption progression more natural rather than hit the MC in the head. Would also really do well if it had a pure route so battles affect outcomes, or like hints to avoid mandatory NTR.

This is one great creativity deliverance. The developer combined multiple platforms making it more 'fun'. RPGM + Koikatsu (I think it is koikatsu as there is one scene that points it that way) + VA (it is re-used but at least not heavily repeated on single instance). Sure it makes the game heavy (size and load) but if it is quality content, why not? plus these issues can be fixed/improved over time.

If you have enjoyed mmds or iwara contents then this might be something you would like to explore.

Would like to see more variety on the VA while being specific of one character using one voice. Kinda funny when you hear different natural voices of one character but I guess this can be a future investment. Hopefully dev does not stop, seeing that dev is in tough situation for growth.

First i loved the models used for the game and i loved the sex animations and the combat sex is amazing if im were rate this game just for this i will give a 10.
But the history is ridiculous bro kirito is the dumbest MC of the all ntr history asuna is dumb and weak minded the online part of the history is decent but the real world one is horrible bro how someone can accept that situation just random small events and asuna is giving a footjobs and boobjobs for a random ugly guy.

On my humble opinion the DEV made this game based on others normal ntr where the characters don't have a background history and just rush the history foward to reach the sex part.
If i would make a game like this i probably will start the corruption on the online world with events like the one in the sewers and in the thieft caverns and after some time win the trust of both asuna and kirito so he can meet in real world and start the corruption in the real world.
The dev could use even some thing from the anime to affect the memory or the body in the real world.

I would keep looking foward for games made by this dev because i love the sex scenes and the koikatsu models he use.

Possibly one of the best NTR games I've ever played. The art is really strong considering it looks like it was made in KS the translation is not the best but despite that it's clear the game is very well written by someone that really gets the fetish. There's a wealth of content here in the part 1 version of the game and it ends on a fairly cliff hanger ending. I don't know how often the dev updates his game but I'll revist in a few months time to check it's progress. This a serious one to watch for NTR lovers!

This game is awesome. Its a slow build to get to the really good stuff but its enjoyable the whole time. My only criticism is that in the current version it ends right when you get to the best parts lol. Cant wait for more

awesome developer and awesome game good scenario and good scenes you are kirito and your lover asuna playing sao in this game you can see asuna going slowly corruption and going ntr also asuna mothers , kirito's sister(suguha from sao) and asada in this game and they have lot of scene to

Part 1 review
This is my first review ever. Just loved this game! This is one of the best game ever. I was starting to lose interest, and then this game pops up and boom! Really loved it! And finally a SAO NTR game. Even if English translation was not perfect, mostly on the menu, it didn't matter. Dialog translation was really good. Can't wait for the next update! I've big hopes for part 2. I hope that the Dev will continue with the monthly updates, because this game must not die. Even if there is the star rating system here, I'm giving this game a full 10 out of 10. Excellent work Dev.

[2034-05-31 Part 1]

This is a nice NTR game that features some great "mystery NTR" progression.

The game features an oblivious MC (Kirito), and there are a bunch of veiled scenes that happen without him realizing that his girl is cheating on him. The use of the message board and phone is a classic. The rate of progression is just perfect, imo. Not too fast, but not too slow, and characterized pretty well.

Also, the entire atmosphere of the town is that of NTR. There are a bunch of little side characters who are cheating on their respective boyfriends and the player can find those events by exploring the town before advancing the story.

The Models are Koikatsu, which isn't my favorite, but it gets the job done. The animations are really great though.

The reason this game won't get full marks from me even though it executes the NTR story extremely well is because it has a few glaring issues.

1. The translation is pretty good for an ESL translatior or high quality MTL, but it's still not in fluent English. That said, it's definitely still playable even for someone like me who has a rather low tolerance for shoddy translations.
2. The combat design is absolutely shitty. Granted, the dev certainly seems to be using the combat as nothing more than another avenue to dispense the H content, but it still felt annoying. There are no items, no character building, no challenge, no nothing. The RPGM combat is just another "event" where sexual harassment takes place or it's just used to simulate the passage of time. I guess it fits the narrative that Kirito and Asuna are super OP characters, though.
3. The biggest demerit is the optimization of the game. It runs like shit. The animations take forever to load. There are memory leaks. It crashes often. At least there is a frequent auto save slot that will bring you right back if it crashes, but meh.

Overall, this will definitely be a treat for anyone into the oblivious NTR genre.

i really like it some people dont like walking or fights in the Game but the Dev make the game feel a real rpg game with a good gameplay and story nothing crazy or forces i love that about this game she fall for the D of the other guy in the game she fall little by little i like the pace of the game.

One of the best NTR games out there. The art is slick and animations are crisp. Kirito getting cucked is one of the most enjoyable content for me. Part 1 was really good and I am looking forward to the next parts. The MTL is not that much of an issue but t he translation isn't complete in a few scenes and controls. Overall, sure recommend if you an NTR fan.

Excellent NTR game

If you like such a genre - one of the best here.

Animation: 10/10
CG: 10/10
Corruption: 7/10 - to be honest it is much better than in other NTR games, but I can't forget their couple so it is hard to believe that she will corrupt so fast, cmon
Fun: 0/10 - because I wouldn't say I like male POV NTR, I love when I play from a female POV, but for NTR lovers maybe 9/10
Gameplay: f**k 10/10 I love how the author integrated in battle H-Scenes, it is genius!

It was painful to play, cause I like when I see everything, but this is one of the best games in the genre.

Reviewed at end of Part 1 which supposedly to be the first half of the story.

I absolutely love this game and its story.

It has structure the In-Game world of FOG and real world pretty good, the whole story is pushed forward by things happened in both world. And this concept has created some really good sex scene that could not happen otherwise.

The story fall into the type of slow corruption, not like some games where the FMC get banged unconsciously and get blackmailed into non-stop sex because of some simple photo/video. The story in this game is solid with logics(of course the MC(kirito) will be stupid sometimes). And everyone has their own motivation and purpose of their actions. No one in this story is just a trigger of something. Even some side characters that just show on the map has their story behind the scene, which you can tell by their dialog.

Even through this story is slow corruption, it's full of sex scene. Not to mentioned that Asuna had unconscious sex in the game world, but also sex scenes happened to side characters where Kirito encounters/peeks. There are also a forum that provide another PoV for sex scene happens on the map which you can check for in game daily updates. And the footage shop of in game sex in FOG game world is also a good part to add other PoV for thing happened to side characters and to Asuna.

The game has illustrate the concept of hidden cheating sex very well like other games from this dev. The MC(Kirito) has only see part of the sex or just shadows, but the scene is fulfilled with details by other PoV either from the FMC(Asuna) or from video of the forum or from the in game footage. This is probably the first game I have played that has used some many different ways to provide different PoV of the sex scene.

What make this game so different is key strike of Asuna's real world vaginal sex with antagonist(Inoda).

I would say even this story ends here with a few scene in Asuna and Inoda's PoV for the last scene, it's still a good game.

Really looking forward to see the second half of the story.

the game is literally unplayable because there's no translations and language options even though some parts of the menu are poorly translated into english.

Don't be fooled by the 5 stars and all that, the menu and Ui is completely jank and I thought Illusion games were complicated to mod.

Also your saves are impossible to find. Goodluck trying to search for it.

Controls are horrendous

Plot was also extremely bland for an NTR. 1/5

First the not so great. The translation isn't great. It gets the job done, but a real person translating this would do a much, much better job.

However, I'm not gonna knock off a star for that, because what we get here is fantastic. It's sexy, sexy Asuna getting tricked and corrupted by an ugly bastard. This is very much my kink and I absolutely love it.

We follow the characters in the “real world” and the “game world” FOG. In the real world the ugly bastard is tricking Asuna and preying on her pity. In the game world he uses various opportunities to molest Asuna's avatar.

I enjoyed the way the scenes are presented. We get flashes of the dirty things that are being done to Asuna, we get videos of her posted online and we can also see full scenes with her and the ugly bastard.

Loving the game so far and can't wait to see where it goes.

This game is such a waste of time it is unbelievable. Okay, so if you're a fan of NTR this might at first seem appealing. You have one of the word male leads ever and his hot girlfriend and the ugly bastard cucking Kirito. Actually...that's not that hot. Anyway, the sex scenes aren't that bad in this one. What makes it a waste of time is how slow the progression is, as well as how little control the player has. The combat is pretty normal for a JRPG, though the level-up system leaves a lot to be desired. But the formula is atrocious. You have rea-life events that work similar to Star Knightess Aura in the sense that they occur, you're along for the ride and they're slow as hell. Then the gameplay is also similar to Aura in that you get quests and they're also slow as hell and tend to involve the most trite things like...finding where Inoda and Asuna are standing on the map, talking to them, finding the entrance to the sewers, going through a maze there, and then getting the next day with similarly boring and tedious events. Is this a porn game? You sure spend an awful lot of time without getting any porn content.

I played for a fair bit before losing interest because it seemed like all the content so far was with random other characters and the fake asuna (as in her character in the game), like it's strange that we're nowhere near anything like the sex scene used to promote this game. I'm sure this will change over time but as of now there just isn't much of anything for me here

Models look nice and I can appreciate a porn game that realizes it's porn, the combat here is super simplistic just for the sake of moving the story along/ having some lite ntr groping happen. Getting tired of game devs who earnestly think I'm interested in rpg maker combat.

The story/ corruption is done well too imo, taking pity on a sad sack of shit who is actually a prideful sack of shit who will cuck you for pitying him is a tried and true ntr concept and it works well here, can argue that Asuna is a bit dumb but such things are usually required for ntr to work.

Every once in a while the translation will have a slip but it's still overall comprehensible, if a little bland.

All in all I think it's a promising project, just not much here for me atm (not even a SAO fan to begin with lol)

Edited after finishing part 1 and playing up to part2 6/10

This game is a masterpiece of disappointment.

Part1 started good, but then inconsistent Asuna`s character have broken everything.
Part2 started good (again).
Asuna feels incredebly guilty, she even almost confesses Kirito in cheating, she draws a line between herself and Inoda, prohibiting any physical contact. And then... she just gives him handjob while talking on phone with Kirito just because begins consider Inoda a reliable friend? Like this is normal and is not repeating of cheating she just regretted? Really? The stupidity of what is happening is astounding.

There was a great opportunity to build a plot around the fact that nothing is real in VR, and only after corrupting and development tolerance to cheating actions in VR add some action in reality. But this opprotunity was missed both in part1 and part2.

One star only for good animations, another for battle scenes.

it's really good but it could be better
+the combat is enjoyable unlike most other h-games made in rpgmaker I actually looked forward to combat because it's not tedious and over quickly
+ the sex scenes are very well done with really good animations and models are really good
+the build up with asuna getting courpted by Inouda is good
= a decent amount of content for the 2 to 3 hours you get to play
- the game menus are still in moon-runes
- the performance can be little ify in some spots it useally drops around certain moments
- it's also a bit buggy like i had the game freeze twice and asuna taking while to show up on screen .
with a little more polish and more content this game could end up being fave ntr game i played on the site

— Good RPGM, fighting system as well as story goes smooth, even when playing PC version through JoiPlay.
— Decent story, good situations created to drive the plot. (at least in first hours of gameplay).
— Dialogs making it easier to believe in story. Well written, adjusting the overall plot.
— Good 3D animations and drawings.
— Lots of additional mini events happening, expanding the "wolrd" of this game.
However, a huge minus comes to:
— Kirito(cuck) gets too stupid, the bull (Inouda?) doesn't even need to try to seduce anymore, it's all goes too easy.