RPGM - Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.702] [Fujino]

So if this was only Part 1, I'd give it an easy like 4/5

Part 2 is an absolute travesty though.

In Part 1, there was a main plot, and a sub plot.
Asuna and Inoda, and Suguha and Hebishima.
It was simple, short, scenes were pretty good. The final scene was great. No qualms about the first game.

Part 2 is really, really rough.
We have a bunch of characters who try to stay relevant in the plot but none of the new sub plots are interesting nor add anything to the plot (besides Lisbeth and Suguha). Asuna and Inoda, Suguha trying to steal Kirito, Sinon doing the same, Lisbeth doing the same, Klein and Alice, and then there is the administrator.

The game also has an obnoxious amount of dialogue between scenes. Like it's really bad and a chore to slog through. It's generally pretty poorly written and the characters don't really act in a believable way. That mixed with the extra subplots and it becomes really rough.

What people want to see is more Asuna development, we all want to see that main plot develop. The Lisbeth plot is good too since it ties pretty closely with Asuna and Inoda. Suguha is fine, but the rest is whatever.

It's purely linear like the first one, and you have no player agency really.

The best thing I can say about it, is that there is some really good scenes. Those carry the game. If the plot was half as long or shorter like the first game with no way less characters, I would easily recommend both.

There was one scene that felt bad though, some people might like this, but there was a genuine r*pe scene where the girl just wasn't into it and was actually crying afterwards. It actually made me feel bad for the character and just kinda ruined the game for me. If that character had genuine corruption and development into sleeping with the antagonist it would have been way better. Instead it's going to be rape into magically loving the dick and afterwards I just felt really bad for her.

I'd recommend part one to play through, but part 2 I would say just download it and use the mod Gatsu made and view the scenes.

It also would be nice if the creator would credit the scene creators too. I've seen them using a lot of scenes by animators without crediting them which is a shame.

It's certainly good, rare you'll find a game like this with as good art or story. Scenes are hot and the situations presented equally so.

I give it 4 stars rather than 5 for a few reasons:

• There is a frustrating amount of story/dialogue. If you read everything you'll be playing for hours without the story advancing at all, or seeing any scenes.
• Too many stories. I don't really care for the side stories yet even holding down the skip dialogue button, I have to wait a very long time between getting back to the main story.
• Game crashes a lot (luckily it constantly auto saves)
• The characters are simply too stupid to be believable.

Rating 2
I don't get the hype
Boring story
Tedious gameplay (walking simulator)
Half assed scenes where you barely see anything.

It's probably a waifu thing, i can't explain the overall rating otherwise.

Review for p1.

Game pacing is very good, every day is packed with content, every room you enter pretty much gives you a scene. And the game is not just few days. The story develops with Kirito/Asuna inviting problems on their own, being gullible and naive.

The corruption of a heroine is gradual. The only thing is the end (last scene) is rushed.

Game pacing and story flow is something other HGames should learn, you don't spend days and hours of gameplay skipping for the sake of a single scene unlock.

There is very little grind which is killing monsters in between of scenes.

It might have been indeed better, if we got to play for Inoda instead of walking around as Kirito pov.

The game has a lot of sudden crashes - errors, but somehow it manages to autosave before the crash so it is not a big problem, autosave slot is slot 5.

Part 2.

The game gets more slow overall with progression, the story starts spinning around. It's okay overall as instead of predictable and common troupe, you get more variety in scenes.

After playing many many hgames over these past few years, only a handful are gems. This is one of them. Powerful buildups, super hot scenarios.
You wanna fap? You gonna rip your dick off with this one. Enjoy.

Part 1 is near perfect. Part 2 has some problems, like FAR too much dialogue that doesn't do anything for the story, some technical difficulties (frequent crashes, performance problems), too many side characters which results in rather bad pacing overall. That said, the hot scenes are hot and that and all the visible effort spent in building this game easily warrants a 5 star rating.

Absolutely cinema, the second game is definitely worth a try. It is better than the first one although it is more focused on the heroine and the other characters in the anime, unlike the first game where the side character NPCs have a scene too. But don't think that matters too much

I so far the game is pretty good slow corruption and th animated scene is again absolutely cinema.

And a absolute play if you like hidden scenes and NTR

Probably the best corruption game in F95zone.

I myself i am not a NTR fan, but this game does not feel like it, why do i say that? because the main character is Kirito, and i dont give a fuck about him, it feels more like seeing a corruption story with a third person view.

The art, pretty good 3d and pixel art, i love that we have these two types of arts in the game, but besides the art, sometimes this game feels like the better version of Nymphomania Priestess, with that combat scenes where you get to touched and stuff with the FL.

This is a MUST if you enjoy the corruption tag, this is just perfect, i love the slow burn corruption and the diferrent mechanics where we can see that and OMG the PLOT is an absolute masterpiece i love the fact that the dev alternates the real world with the world game, the story and the writting is well done for me, love this freaking game so much

Very cool game, very addictive. Since the characters are familiar, it's quite unusual and interesting to watch them from this point in the plot. Update 0.701 It's not very big, but I hope it gets better.

Let me say this for a fan game this one really good well done even models amazing easly one of the good NTR games on site nothing bad thing to say for that reason but.

First part is pretty much even with minus things its good but when you pass to second PART game starts to dies out pretty fast Author adds more and more characters and story no one wanted or need Asuna becomes slut and pure gf with time its pretty random İnoda is one of the worst yet best NTR guy here.

So when we talk about game its yes good but bad like AUTHOR pulling too much hyping it too much some thins in this game sadly thats ruins it Asuna becomes retarded then boom sometimes smarth models feels changing too one scene looks amazing next one shit so i think easly 4 star for part one and for part two for now i give 4 star maybe in future more or less.

Well for updates ehh how i say ? lack of lot of content for development time ? i dont know when this gonna game end really even end feels like Author gonna go vanish thanks to this game burning Author down

good animations but I have bad experience, guess it's not my type of game, the story implies that the protagonist is too stupid which is probably why it's boring when it's a long game, if only I could play as the ntr guy maybe it's better

[Review for Part 1]

The renders are amazing. The animations are good as well, but this looks like Koikatsu or a similar engine, so the animations are probably not the author's merit here.

One nice point is that there are tons of side events occurring around. It's interesting to see the story of these side characters advance. Though sometimes it's a bit hard to keep track or recognize who's who, as the game doesn't make it easy to recognize or follow these characters.

The story is brainless, as expected, full of plotholes and nonsenses. This and Inoda's "special unique skill" serves no purpose at all besides making Asuna pity him and inviting him to their party. Maybe this will be more explored in the next part, but even though it was said that he was "lucky" to get this skill, it had no impact in the story at all. Or was it supposed to be that invisibility skill? If so, that's just a common thief's skill, not something "unique".

The battles are not annoying, surprisingly. Kirito has an OP 27-hit combo skill that just melts everything and his HP and MP regenerates every turn, so the battles are pretty quick and there aren't a lot.

That said, the fact that we can't skip text, speed up animations, or fast-forward battles is a big minus. The walking speed also felt slow after a while. Fixing those things would make the game's flow much better.

My other grip is that Kirito has no business being the protagonist of this game. Maybe I'm just not the target audience, as I've seen in countless netorare stories where the cuckolded ML seems to find it more exciting not knowing/seeing everything.

But for me, seeing only tids and bits of the scenes made the game less enjoyable. The fragmented scenes felt like I was watching a Youtube shorts or Tiktok videos, it just shows you some out of context video without beginning or end, no connection. It feels lacking. In my eyes, it comes across as lazy storytelling. It's like those 10~20s short animation porn videos: "why are these characters having sex?", "how did they get here?", "what's their relationship?". For a lone, short video, it's fine not going into the details, but that's unforgivable for a game that plays almost like a visual novel. I'm willing to believe that this is a genuine subgenre, though.

In my opinion, Inoda should have been the protagonist. He's clearly (surely?) an OC and became a main character in the story, I can't find logical arguments to make sense him not being the protagonist. The game would have been much more engaging seeing things from his perspective. Watching Asuna's gradual fall, fully fleshed out and unfiltered. That would have been 10 times better. Instead, we're forced to watch Kirito play in the arcade with his other cuck friend while Asuna is blowing Inoda in the park... We're forced to help Kirito make a cup of ramen while Inoda is balls deep in Asuna on the other side of the wall.

The only merit of having Kirito as the protagonist is Suguha's side story, as Hebishima fits the mold of a typical netorare villain, and the plot follows the "Netorare Plot 101 Guide" almost step by step. However, even Suguha's side story feels secondary, with fewer events than the random encounters around town. Kirito could have served better as a deuteragonist, only taking center stage during these specific moments.

All in all, the strong point of the game is the renders. Every girl that appears is quite hot and the animation is nice, they're even voiced. But the scenes are lacking. Few, if any, are fully presented, showing from the build up to the climax. This may the cup of tea for some, though.

It took me around 6 hours to finish. It didn't feel like a chore—it was a nice ride, despite all the flaws. But you could just get a save file and watch all the scenes in the gallery room and you won't be losing a whole lot of context (there isn't a lot to begin with).

The best, I am literally Here only for this game now.

I can't wait for more! Slow corruption is the best!

Wish Fujino well being and hope he can dish out more masterpiece like this.

Asuna scene is the best because of the emotion in it.

Liz is second best for me now.

Worse might be Asuna mom scene since she's too easy.

I hope some extra character also get their scene that let us peek at them. Fujino is good at Voyeurism genre after all. I do hope we got 2 POV though.

And before I forget, please add the scene if Kirito didn't join the bath with Asuna and Inoda. Felt kinda empty there.

I see a lot of negative comments and reviews for this game, the pacing is slow, the game consists of going here and talking to this person and repeat blah blah blah. Isnt that what an rpgm game is normally anyway?
Regardless, this is one of, if not my favourite game on this platform currently. Sure its not the 10/10 game ever made but in my opinion for someone who releases monthly content the sex scenes are surprisingly nice. Personally I disagree with a lot of the complaints i've seen (maybe not disagree per se but more like willing to overlook or dont care about) but every update has me counting down to release time in hype. Alas you can't please everyone but this game, for me, is goated when it comes to NTR. Can't wait to see what happens in the coming updates and god forbid if the game is ever abandoned then it will truly be a loss to mourn.

Fujino cooks.

Loves the writing on this game it move a bit too slow on game play for me so I play it like a VN in recollection but by far my fav game that I don't play and go straight to VN style I STRONGLY adv anyone that does not care for the play style to give the rec room a try

The Game set's an excellent premise to start the story, the protagonist(krito) here is made clueless not completely brain dead but someone with low EQ and with his own little world of thougts, Heroine(Asuna) is written in just a way a good Netorare should be not some mindless bitch in heat who orgasm's just after looking at the guy's cock, the story moves in a good flow justfies the action and change in heroine and hero's behaviour, Little by little the heroine and Hero are getting corrupt but Hero is still a bit subtle nonetheless Heroines pace is just about right.

Talking about content in the game, the game has ample of content and a varietey of them at that, the animation's do justice to that which makes this more exciting to play. Though the gallery system can be a bit annoying to some people but that can be bypassed with cheats and stuff.

Maybe it's my personal choice, but there should be choices and consequences for Hero ignoring Heroine for too long and Heroine is taken advantage of and vice versa, adds immersion to the game, otherwise so far in my opinion it's a good game.

The game itself has some bugs in part 1, and in Part 2 the game is a bit wonky as it randomly crashes, hopeful the dev will look into it.

Tldr: the game is a fantastic NTR story not mindless wombo jumbo a decent story and fantastic animations. Would Highly recommend anyone interested in NTR.

This rating reflects my opinion of part 2, part 1 is the game I fell in love with at the beginning, it had an easy to follow story, some side content but not too much, clear progression and a nice corruption up to the final climax night where inoda and asuna fucked till morning. Part 2 however is just a large disappointment.

First of all the entire corruption is somehow reset, like they fucked their brains out a minute ago and now Asuna doesn't even recognize Inodas existence which weirded me out at the start. Inodas weird "gf" and all these side characters imo just felt way too distracting for the main story and added little to no value. The whole anxiety system is really bad (especially since this is still a completely linear story, why overcomplicate the systems?), same with the status screen being way to overwhelming. The performance and bugs worsened quite alot in part 2 and the story progression seems to only really include scenes between Asuna and Inoda in FOG as if she is just randomly being corrupted again? It doesn't make any sense and I feel like the dev should've just closed it off in part 1 and moved on with another project.

I wanted to hold off writing this review until part 2 completely releases but I feel like the story is going nowhere. I can recommend playing part 1 but part 2 is way too much of a mess, can not recommend that one.

This game was so good in my opinion that it made me watch the anime and now I am hooked with both. Good job dev can't wait for more updates, the character progression, new ones and maybe future projects.

THe three stooges raping simulator.

The typhoon scene is the breaking one for me.
You seriously want me to believe Kaito doesn't bring his OWN god damn keys with him?! Sure bruh

Who is dumber.

#1 The MC who apparenty won a Battle Roayl MMORPG, but in real life walks around oblivious to his surroudings.

#2 The GF with a Golden Heart which turn out to be a magnet for BS, cause she lacks the ability to think logically.

#3 A abused kid who most likely did something to his parents, and his only idea of solving a problem is raping.

THe plotholes in this game are so big you can hide Dave Blunts in them.

-A convenient coincidence. The MC was about to visit AKina, but suddenly has to do errands for a teacher? Seriously!? And he is too stupid to figure out he should bail and really visit his GF?!
-Akina shouldn't even bother visiting Inoda! She supoosedly wanted to break up...Why even bother visitng him.
Instead she spends a whole day with him?!
-Why is she at his house to begin with!?
-She waits until IT STARTS TO RAIN. Doesn't ring him, doesn't bang on the door. Why aren't the lights on?!
-Why are they wet?! Those japanese houses always have a roof above the corridors.
-Inoda ALWAYS there when MC meets Akina. ALWAYS.
-How did he know to take the spare?
-Why does the MC blabber to himself about hiding the spare key?!
-Why doesn't she have a spare of her own to begin with?!
-Typhoon is coming. The whole city knows excpet her. Too stupid to figure out on her own.
-Kaito calls her to tell her after it starts to rain...Why didn't he call her earlier?!
-One day flu LUL

Definitely the worst writing I have encountered.

The game is just sad...
The only enjoyable part of this game is the relationship betwen hebishima and the MC's sister. Whatever the hell her name was.
Actual NTR. Also all the small NTR encounters around town. Unfortunately there weren't enough scenes of...you know...THE ACTUALL SEX. Show me more of Akina's mom, all those school girls. The web scenes are too short. Show us all the depravity in it's glory.
Also there should be more commentary from the MC about all the cheating going on around him.
You have to get off on the idea of everyone fucking each other behind their spouses backs. We know it's happening, yet all behind the screen, off camera...
The only character and story progression moments worthy of praise are Kaito slowly realising a connection betwen Inoda and Akina, and his talks with the priest. Unironicaly the Akina/Inoda relationship which should be the strongest part of the game, is just a poorly written dumpster fire.
So like, what's the point?

One of the goats when it comes to NTR games, extra credit since this is SAO. Part one started off pretty slow but once it picked up speed, it does not stop. Considring this is a NTR game, the story is pretty good. But where it shines the most are the character model and the sex scenes. The female models are 11/10 and so are the sex scenes.