RPGM - Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.832] [Fujino]

This is my first review in this site so it might not be relevant.

Part 1 was great NTR CGs, gameplay is just unlocking type scenes. Story it's sad to say very no consistent.

Part 2 was great NTR CGs, gameplay is not likable. I like the Anxiety Meter makes you wander around the map and look for sub events. The problem is what is the point of the Anxiety meter if you are forced to progress linearly. In my opinion it would be great to have some freedom.

My suggestion is make that players can move freely and not forced interaction. Like not make the player tied by the time. Let the players play on there own pace of the events. This will also give you alot of NTR moments as this make Inoda makes move on Asuna while the player are busy exploring the world. Now this will make the status camera relevant, and will make alot of anxiety producing moments in the story. Probably make it so that while Inoda makes move Asuna lust go up. Then when lust is high enough the Asuna fucking happens. right not the Status cam, Lust Counter, Anxiety Meter. Is too useless.

This might change in the future great work. Will the try the next update.

FIRST PART is ★ ★ ★ ★ for me. Acceptable levels of grind and consistent, satisfying progress in the corruption of the main heroine ("Asuna", who you could rename in this Part 1). And a unique twist to the game engine.

SECOND PART is a single ★ for me. It kicks off as an ambitious "reboot" of Part 1 by adding a ton of new mechanics, reworking the assets, and map. Good, right? Wrong . Here more is less, and much more is much more less. After 2 HOURS only seeing a brief boob fondling cutscene between two gals in a tub is Omega-level grinding.

I checked out of the experience altogether (rare in my case). I downloaded the "Save" for Part 2 to see the animations. There's some good stuff in there, but the game and character cast now feels bloated and slow (like happens to many promising games here in this platform - cough... Cyberslayers... cough... Twisted Memories... cough cough....) You've been warned

Absolutely a fantastic game, but the developer ruins it trying to make it more than it is. The scenes are above average, the dialog is tolerable (which for a porn game is a win), the plot is cliche but a cliche well done.

Now the game ruins it by the pacing of everything, and how long it takes. I get it, he is trying to build tension and give a background and reason to make it more enticing, but its way way way too long, you can easily spend 7h without getting to the "good" part of the game in the seccond part, and that for me is unnaceptable. He also adds a lot of different mechanics and severely underultilise them, making the game feel bloated.

Not to mention that when things start happening in this game, it breaks everything he was building, because instead of moving too slowly, things move in lightspeed.

A amazing game ruined by pretentiousness.

Genuinely baffled to see all the 5*s. Sure if you based 100% of your rating on the art/animations I can see that being the case, but how do you guys just ignore the boring as hell gameplay, awful character interactions , god awful character development, and the awful writing? I'm being serious when I say you could find someone doing those four things better in a A/B/O fanfic on Wattpad. That shouldn't even be possible but here we are.

The epitome of "Just unlock and watch the gallery instead".

My heart always bump when I know something happen with Asuna, but it felt crazy to me because I really want to know what really happen.
Too bad Kirito is clueless.
This game is top tier to my personal. I play the first part only for the sex scene but in the second one, I really took a time to read the text. The second one absolutely what I really looking into. Hope this game will continue.

10/10 NTR
10/10 Feel bad for Kirito

Art: 10/10 top tier
Story: 10/10 Worth it to play if you like NTR, but I felt bad ko Kirito
Sex scenes: 10/10 damn Inoda bang Asuna like crazy!!!

This game is one the best game you could ever find here, especially you are NTR fan and likes RPGM, I totally recommend this.

I liked the game, but I don't understand why to make the main character of the anime a playable character, it would be better to have an Inode acting right away, in my opinion it was more interesting to perform tasks to debauch Asuna and other presages of girls. So it would be possible to come up with more scenes of Inode and Asuna, a task where we develop a plan for corrupting Asuna for Inode, and Kirito is so purely a background puppet. as an example, it would be great and I hope such a scene will be work-related when Kirito goes to a cafe to get a breakfast for Asuna, returns to work and meets Inode there, he says that Krito has a gift for Assuna, and Krito does not have access to the upper floor and he gives him Inode that betrayed or that offers and Inode with Asuna is a new picaresque scene at work, well, something like that And it would also be good to combine the first and second parts into one game and optimize the plot, but how strange it turns out in the first part, Inode slept with Asuna, but from the second part we learn that all relations between them collapsed, returning to the starting point, so, in the end, in the current update the relationship between them is still not developing any further than in the first part.

The animation quality is top-tier, and the sync stats page is very well-made. It reminds me of the NTR Loop Japanese game. Overall, I’m impressed with the attention to detail and the seamless experience.

Very good game, very well written. I wonder where it will go.
I would say it is the best NTR game I've played, the only game where I didn't skip most of the dialogue.
I am an old fan of this series and I approve of this Asuna. Some people may not understand certain conflicts within the heroine's heart, and others may complain the slow progression. I think I like the pace so far. Kirito has to be nerfed in some aspects and other things about Asuna exaggerated in order for NTR to happen, I understand. I've played the previous games this author made (also old fan of Fate series), and I see him improve his writing. For me, those NTR games where the protagonist is quickly cucked (the typical ones that don't stand a chance) doesn't get to me. I want to see fights and drama, twists and turns, plots and conspiricies, especially those delicate moments are the most interesting to me.
If I were to say a few things to improve upon, 1. offering clearer guidances as to what the protagonist should do 2. improve graphics by using Honey Come to make the CGs 3. add choices that may lead to different routes (NTR vs. NTRS ending, lesbian route?) 4. add in more scenes of Asuna swaying and delicate moments between her and Kirito, not just her doubting infidelity. Could add in minute details here and there about the true state of the relationship. Maybe consider making Inoda more handsome, smarter and even outperforming Kirito at some moment later. If Fujino could read my comment, thank you very much for the game. I may pay you when I have the money.

My little opinion on the game:

Overall I found the game good. The graphic style of the game is really worked (especially the second part) and the gameplay remains pleasant to play.

However, I found that the game was seriously lacking in control. The game would have been more enjoyable with the choice of Asuna's partner or several routes and the possibility of cockblocking certain characters. Sometimes we feel like our character is quite stupid. In fact, the game only follows a forced story and the only possibility of control is on the level of "consciousness" of Kirito in relation to the surrounding events.

The fact that these are Koikatsu scenes is not disturbing and even more enjoyable than a game with PNGs and no animation. Although some scenes are purchasable scenes (Hongcha for example) the author masters the Chara Studio and managed not to make the scenes he made look "cheap".

The affection system is also a bit useless or at least useless as it stands. Make sure it has an impact on Asuna's behavior towards Kirito. The possibility of doing actions that lower Asuna's love for Kirito (like catching him observing an erotic scene for example) which unlocks certain events or ntr scenes.
Because I remind you that Asuna gives in too easily to Inoda which is justified too easily by the plot. (Even if you feel indebted to a person, pretending to be a girlfriend and performing sexual services like that is not justified)

Inoda is also a bit poorly written. Initially in the first part I thought he was a great manipulator who had planned his entire relationship with Asuna. But the second part just showed me that he was just really lucky.
What is also annoying is the gap between the first and second parts. The second part is really better worked. But especially with regard to relationships, it's different.

After several hours of the first part Inoda had finally managed to sleep with Asuna (irl) but we learn from the second part that the whole relationship between the two collapsed, returning to the starting point so that in the end on the update Currently, the relationship between the two has still not evolved any more than in the first part.
The second part would have been better if it had been a remake of the first part with the sequel offered by the game currently.

Special mention to Alice's route which I really like. But overall the game is really good for its genre. I hope future updates will surprise me
Try other games based on Koikatsu, it's amazing how low the level is.

CG: Fap-tastic. Model are good, Animated and not awkward.

Game: VN Style. [Part 1] is shorter but more 'action/battle' phase which is also quite linear, but the build-up to "unseen" ntr action is superb. [Part 2] however STARTED very slow, as of v0.40, you have choice to unlock gallery to check your taste, then jump back to 'Play' it for once.

It’s slow corruption. A shame in this case, since many unnecessary scenes could be established by just a few sentences instead (considering MC’s naiveness and the cliché elements giving the permission to do whatever). I guess the author treats corruption as a puzzle justifying the power dynamics with plenty of back and forth; you may notice it in the details. Yet it still makes the scenes more complicated than they actually are. As a consequence, characters appear as outdoing one another and themselves through “logic” way too much, so, while the author at least follows his concept of corruption, he misses out on a more overall harmonic approach.

Nevertheless, you wait longer, highlighting the sex scenes. It even reminds me of the grind you gotta do in Asian MMOs.
Speaking of which, before this game, I believed RPGMaker games to be a really bad choice for erotism. Yet here, sexual actions are sometimes flashing in while MC is being distracted by something else (even during combat) and half of the setting as an online video game is an exciting idea in itself, so much so it tricks you a bit into believing you’re in an actual one by RPGMaker. Lol.

I think the sex descriptions are sparse and pretty good. In addition, the few climactic scenes are presented in an almost poetic way.
MC is also getting two admirers, which uplifts the situation and perhaps makes your psyche open up more.

Unfortunately, interesting ideas aren’t brought up again so far (example: mysterious footages received; the according S.O.), and I think even a side character needs some form of emotional entanglement with the player before corruption or scene reviews, otherwise, it's rather irrelevant.
A few events get stuck, most often because of your activating position. On top of that, Part 2 crashes frequently. Slot 5 is a good autosave.

I know that art in this game is a Koikatsu things, but damn, it's so good made that i dont care, even if that's a no-no for me in many other projects.The main route is great, sister's route is hot. Combine with great overall design, what else do i wanted to ask?
The most satisfying NTR game (one of them from the top at least) that i EVER play. Thanks dev.

I just gotta say the part 1 is one of the best netorare games I have ever played, the story is solid, the characters are really good and the visual art is just perfect.

Then, the second part looks really good, and has the potential to be so much better than the first one, it has more content, more mechanics and that excellent visual art.

In resume, this one is aiming to be the best ntr game out there, or at least, top 5.

Part 1 is how i say this theres problems here but first game of the series so i cant say thats a bad compared to second part scenes better theres no forced gameplay and more scenes less fighting i like it very very much.

Sure theres some problems here like some scenes only happen in Kirito POV like swamp or thief fight ones that appear on scene and believe me after seeing them again in rec room mod i wish we have full scene of that.

Part 2 is mess really mess ratio is like %70 gameplay % 30 scenes not even joking and theres many male and female characters here that Author pushing for no reason this is started with Asuna and İnoda that was good their action was not rushed or boring but for Sugu and Hebi its just drugs and whoring MC sister nothing more and to this day i dont know why this is even in game i wish all characters gets f by İnoda not this stupid classic copy paste of NTR characters.

Dont get me wrong its same for other characters too like Alice or that chick i cant remember name they either using hypno or drug lames thing in Hentai story cheap and boring.

Liz is how i say why even she is here ? i know reasons of Liz but she is annoying and meaningless really after 6+ month this much content is really lacking for Part 2 and dont get me wrong here okay ? Part 1 is good and i dont hate Inoda but second part is just gameplay gameplay and feels like you missing many scenes because theres no Asuna-Suguha-Liz-Alice POV yeah theres some but thats not even count as POV like Author needs to add POV real one not that broing watch from gallery POV really thats worth like 5-10 min scene nothing more.

After seeing many positive thing about part 2 i tried but my disspointment is beyond anything this is just like everybody turning into HOE without reason theres no back story or corruption nope its just happens really boring only character worths to praise is Asuna nothing more.

PART 1 5 star for me.
PART 2 hardly 4 star for me.,

Asap we need real POV not some fake ass gallery one i dont wanna play Kirito here he is pathetic and boring compared to Part 1.

great art, AMAZING WRITING. without spoiling anything, there's a lot of scenarios that are perfect for both the ntr genre while keeping with the lore of the game.

each update takes forever but its very very worth it. love this game so so much

There's not really anything unique story wise that you wouldn't have seen from other NTR games. Which isn't a bad thing, that's totally fine. It's hentai. The models look nice as far as Koikatsu goes and it's animated so that's nice. I'd have like to see more what the game had to offer, but it seems like the game struggles to load the 3D models. So much so that it slows down or even crashes. It's even worse during battles. I ended up giving up on the game and just used the provided gallery saves. To illustrate how bad it is, I had the game open in the background to check my notes for my review. I went to load up a scene and my entire PC started freezing. I was scared shitless that it was hogging all my PC's resources and would crash my browser; erasing what I had written down for my review. My PC may be crap, but this is an RPG maker game. It shouldn't do this.

The worst part, unless they got the OK that I don't know about, this game's creator stole the map design from SORAUE's, another NTR dev, Daily Life in Jeopardy. The school and apartment's map layout are basically 1:1. It's the same for this guy's Chainsawman game. The premise and maps are from SORAUE's 5 Days of Separation. I would not be surprised if other maps were taken from other games.

I don't know why this game is rated as high as it is while it's guilty of the same things (and more) as other NTR games and yet they get shafted. Why does this get a pass? Is it because it's animated? It looks like basic Koikatsu. Is it because it validates some people's hateboner for SAO or Kirito? That doesn't make the game good. If you MUST play this game, don't bother and use the provided saves.

pace way too slow, too much yapping with little to no meaning which typical for a chinese porn game devs
no creativity in making the Koikatsu scene, they just grab whatever online and no originality whatsoever.

So far another certified Fujino NTR game, no pretentious bullshit, a parody full of content (almost every character with a name is either fucked or cucked) with the classic 0 IQ protagonist completely oblivious to it, the gameplay is same old RPG stuff you can just pass right through it with an instakill attack of the MC and it has some sweet features that are common for these kind of games (both POVs, sex stats, etc)
The issue with this one like most of Fujino games is the instability and bugs you get pretty often due to myriad of issues with the engine, so I recommend saving a lot
Suffice to say, I look forward to this one and you should too because as a bonus Saikey Studios is doing the translation, so no MTL or poor translation (if you are familiar with F95 you know how awful it can get)
So, if you like dumb but fun NTR and porn with Koikatsu models, this might be one for you, I won't give it 5 stars until we get the final product

If finished, it could be one of the greatest games of all time. Better than anything tripple A Studios released in recent years.

The plot is kinda slow at the beginning, but that's what makes the content greater later on.

I hope after the SAO game Fujino decides to work on a Highschool DxD or To Love Ru game. He's the new goat of h-games.