RPGM - Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

It’s slow corruption. A shame in this case, since many unnecessary scenes could be established by just a few sentences instead (considering MC’s naiveness and the cliché elements enabling whatever). I guess the author treats corruption as a puzzle justifying the power dynamics with plenty of back and forth; you may notice it in the details. Yet it still makes the scenes more complicated than they actually are. As a consequence, characters appear as outdoing one another and themselves through “logic” way too much, so, while the author at least follows his concept of corruption, he misses out on a more overall harmonic approach.

Nevertheless, you wait longer, highlighting the sex scenes. It even reminds me of the grind you gotta do in Asian MMOs.
Speaking of which, before this game, I believed RPGMaker games to be a really bad choice for erotism. Yet here, sexual actions are sometimes flashing in while MC is being distracted by something else (even during combat) and half of the setting as an online video game is an exciting idea in itself, so much so it tricks you a bit into believing you’re in an actual one by RPGMaker. Lol.

I think the sex descriptions are sparse and pretty good. In addition, the few climactic scenes are presented in an almost poetic way.
MC is also getting two admirers, which uplifts the situation and perhaps makes your psyche open up more.

Unfortunately, interesting ideas aren’t brought up again so far (example: mysterious footages received; the according S.O.), and I think even a side character needs some form of emotional entanglement with the player before corruption or scene reviews, otherwise, it's rather irrelevant.
A few events get stuck, most often because of your activating position. On top of that, Part 2 crashes frequently. Slot 5 is a good autosave.

I know that art in this game is a Koikatsu things, but damn, it's so good made that i dont care, even if that's a no-no for me in many other projects.The main route is great, sister's route is hot. Combine with great overall design, what else do i wanted to ask?
The most satisfying NTR game (one of them from the top at least) that i EVER play. Thanks dev.

I just gotta say the part 1 is one of the best netorare games I have ever played, the story is solid, the characters are really good and the visual art is just perfect.

Then, the second part looks really good, and has the potential to be so much better than the first one, it has more content, more mechanics and that excellent visual art.

In resume, this one is aiming to be the best ntr game out there, or at least, top 5.

Part 1 is how i say this theres problems here but first game of the series so i cant say thats a bad compared to second part scenes better theres no forced gameplay and more scenes less fighting i like it very very much.

Sure theres some problems here like some scenes only happen in Kirito POV like swamp or thief fight ones that appear on scene and believe me after seeing them again in rec room mod i wish we have full scene of that.

Part 2 is mess really mess ratio is like %70 gameplay % 30 scenes not even joking and theres many male and female characters here that Author pushing for no reason this is started with Asuna and İnoda that was good their action was not rushed or boring but for Sugu and Hebi its just drugs and whoring MC sister nothing more and to this day i dont know why this is even in game i wish all characters gets f by İnoda not this stupid classic copy paste of NTR characters.

Dont get me wrong its same for other characters too like Alice or that chick i cant remember name they either using hypno or drug lames thing in Hentai story cheap and boring.

Liz is how i say why even she is here ? i know reasons of Liz but she is annoying and meaningless really after 6+ month this much content is really lacking for Part 2 and dont get me wrong here okay ? Part 1 is good and i dont hate Inoda but second part is just gameplay gameplay and feels like you missing many scenes because theres no Asuna-Suguha-Liz-Alice POV yeah theres some but thats not even count as POV like Author needs to add POV real one not that broing watch from gallery POV really thats worth like 5-10 min scene nothing more.

After seeing many positive thing about part 2 i tried but my disspointment is beyond anything this is just like everybody turning into HOE without reason theres no back story or corruption nope its just happens really boring only character worths to praise is Asuna nothing more.

PART 1 5 star for me.
PART 2 hardly 4 star for me.,

Asap we need real POV not some fake ass gallery one i dont wanna play Kirito here he is pathetic and boring compared to Part 1.

great art, AMAZING WRITING. without spoiling anything, there's a lot of scenarios that are perfect for both the ntr genre while keeping with the lore of the game.

each update takes forever but its very very worth it. love this game so so much

There's not really anything unique story wise that you wouldn't have seen from other NTR games. Which isn't a bad thing, that's totally fine. It's hentai. The models look nice as far as Koikatsu goes and it's animated so that's nice. I'd have like to see more what the game had to offer, but it seems like the game struggles to load the 3D models. So much so that it slows down or even crashes. It's even worse during battles. I ended up giving up on the game and just used the provided gallery saves. To illustrate how bad it is, I had the game open in the background to check my notes for my review. I went to load up a scene and my entire PC started freezing. I was scared shitless that it was hogging all my PC's resources and would crash my browser; erasing what I had written down for my review. My PC may be crap, but this is an RPG maker game. It shouldn't do this.

The worst part, unless they got the OK that I don't know about, this game's creator stole the map design from SORAUE's, another NTR dev, Daily Life in Jeopardy. The school and apartment's map layout are basically 1:1. It's the same for this guy's Chainsawman game. The premise and maps are from SORAUE's 5 Days of Separation. I would not be surprised if other maps were taken from other games.

I don't know why this game is rated as high as it is while it's guilty of the same things (and more) as other NTR games and yet they get shafted. Why does this get a pass? Is it because it's animated? It looks like basic Koikatsu. Is it because it validates some people's hateboner for SAO or Kirito? That doesn't make the game good. If you MUST play this game, don't bother and use the provided saves.

pace way too slow, too much yapping with little to no meaning which typical for a chinese porn game devs
no creativity in making the Koikatsu scene, they just grab whatever online and no originality whatsoever.

So far another certified Fujino NTR game, no pretentious bullshit, a parody full of content (almost every character with a name is either fucked or cucked) with the classic 0 IQ protagonist completely oblivious to it, the gameplay is same old RPG stuff you can just pass right through it with an instakill attack of the MC and it has some sweet features that are common for these kind of games (both POVs, sex stats, etc)
The issue with this one like most of Fujino games is the instability and bugs you get pretty often due to myriad of issues with the engine, so I recommend saving a lot
Suffice to say, I look forward to this one and you should too because as a bonus Saikey Studios is doing the translation, so no MTL or poor translation (if you are familiar with F95 you know how awful it can get)
So, if you like dumb but fun NTR and porn with Koikatsu models, this might be one for you, I won't give it 5 stars until we get the final product

If finished, it could be one of the greatest games of all time. Better than anything tripple A Studios released in recent years.

The plot is kinda slow at the beginning, but that's what makes the content greater later on.

I hope after the SAO game Fujino decides to work on a Highschool DxD or To Love Ru game. He's the new goat of h-games.

Certainly one of the best if not the best NTR game I've ever played. 5 stars well deserved.
The first part is certainly better than the second, but with the latest updates the second part is on track to exceed all expectations. The scenes, the animations are beautiful, the story is well thought out and written

Dear Fappers and Fapperettes,

Do you hate characters who are the embodiment of good, perfection, peace and harmony? Do you hate people who, unlike you and I, have found true love? Do you hate a very specific little pencil necked black haired nerd who inexplicably always prevails no matter the obstacles and is frustratingly revered by all the girls he encounters and goes by the name of Kazuto Kirigaya AND is also simply known as Kirito? Then this game, my friends, brothers, sisters and everything in between and beyond... this game is for you. Because through it, you will see and experience everything that will please you and then some. Finally we can see Kirito LOSING!!! HA-AH!

It is a most exquisite game of the greatest tier of NTR. Inoda, the main antagonist, is a slimy, manipulative, devious little piggy-faced bastard and he is so great at being all that and more. He enters Kirito's world like a nasty, smelly and horny snake and twists around Asuna's body and constricts her heart and soul with such unholy grace that even I, arguably a sick individual, must recognize the genius behind this wonderful game. I simply felt compelled to write a review. You don't understand: I HAD to. My first one in YEARS on this board. It's that big of a deal.

The author of this game knows Sword Art Online very well, uses the lore and its probabilities like a mad scientist mixes volatile ingredients. The result is of course a wondrous explosion of superb lewd scenes, linked together by a plausible, quite lore-friendly scenario. The dialogues are often times cute and funny - characters will sometime lose themselves in strange but rather humorous drivel, especially Kirito - and it is a pleasure to read them if you have the patience for it. When I say humorous, I do mean pathetic. To me, pathetic characters are always hilarious. I find misery very funny to gaze upon. I'm not sure if that's a good thing, socially and humane wise. But anyway...

Because yes indeed, this game brings more than just simple sex scenes. It is overall very well orchestrated from beginning to end. I dare call it "Porn Art Online".

The second part, which we should consider a sequel, is even better in my perspective. The overall visually quality of the game, notably, is expanded greatly. Yes, maybe the horny moments are a little more on the seldom side, but the inner thoughts of Kirito, slowly decaying due to suspicion, are so fun to read. Maybe I get more horny reading a cuck's train of thoughts than when I see boobies. We shall investigate this further as the (quite regular) updates roll in.

Decidedly, it is my favorite anime-based porn parody of all time. There is nothing that even comes remotely close to it. Now, I can only roll my thumbs ( and balls ) waiting for the next update, and the next after it, then the next after the next and so on. Verily, I am addicted to this game. Help me.

As a matter of fact, I dread the moment when the developer finishes it. What will I do then? Probably something that'll get me in jail.

But until then... Itadakimasu!!!

Pros:

1. Asuna as a Central Character: In my opinion, Asuna is the best character for NTR. I've always viewed her as an ideal waifu, whose main flaw is her association with Kirito. She is often utilized as a plot device for his character development, which diminishes her own agency.
2. Character Appeal: Asuna is visually very appealing and is characterized effectively, making her a compelling character within the game.
3. High-Quality Scenes: The game includes well-crafted H scenes that are engaging.
4. Diverse Content: There is a good variety of content including hidden scenes, voyeuristic scenes, combat scenes, and more. I have yet to get turned on as much by any other H game.
5. Engaging Storyline: The story develops at a measured pace, rewarding the player's patience. The plot is coherent and well-structured, with Asuna's character development being a focal point. Inoda exploits her good nature, and she gradually becomes more corrupted in a way that makes sense (within the logic of H games and Asuna's character).
6. Enjoyable Combat Mechanics: The combat aspect of the game is engaging and adds to the overall experience. While being easy, that is exactly what you want, as it allows you to focus on what's happening to Asuna.

Cons:

1. Technical Issues: The game may experience occasional bugs/crashes/etc.

This game has been a standout experience for me in the H game genre and has led me to explore more games of this type. I have played it multiple times due to its replay value and overall quality. I am eager to see if the creator, Fujino, develops more games like this.

5/5 – This game was the catalyst for my interest in H games. It remains my favorite in the genre, captivating me more than anything else in the realm of H content throughout my entire 31 years on this planet.

5/5 for the first part, 3.5-4/5 for the second. Pacing is good in the first one. Feels like a short NTR story with good build up and scenes.

Don't know what happened with the second game. Seems like the developer had a lot of personal problems going on in their life. Pacing is terrible. Endless exposition and tons of pointless dialogue. More than 50% of the game is just characters talking. Seriously boring. Was pressing the skip button the entire time. Not only that, the build up just feels weird and unrealistic compared to the first game. Relationship with Asuna starts building up really slowly and then all of a sudden it progresses incredibly quickly. Scene in last chapter was good but didn't make sense.


Other negatives are that Asuna's reasons for cheating are completely nonsensical and protag is an oblivious dumbass. Would also be nice to have a non-NTR route or one where he gets with someone else, but considering how much the developer made fun of Kirito's small genitalia don't see that happening. Solid game though compared to what's regularly posted on this site.

I'm not really an NTR guy, i'm a slow build up scene hunting guy who wants at least passable art and this game just hits those note really well. Each day has something to find to keep you going while turning the switch on for the extra angles creates a lot of slow build tension.

That being said the ending is stupid and sudden and you never return to the SAO world. Also the girls motivations make no sense and it's all "so this must happen". So, try not to read the text too much, and also there's not as much content as you would think, but it's animated well so that's good.

I used to think I was okay with NTR, but after experiencing a scene in part 2, this game made me depressed for a few days. So this story definitely did the NTR part properly, I'm not complaining about that.
For context, I've nutted to SAO NTR doujins before without any issues.

The personalities of the characters in this game really match well with the original SAO story. Kirito is a really good outstanding citizen but he's stupid and oblivious as hell. And man, it sucks to see that he doesn't have a single ally in this story. The entire world is out to get this man when all he wants to do is make things right.

I enjoyed the story in Part 1 a lot. It was kinda slow but I enjoyed watching Asuna get more corrupted each day. You can skip text by holding the S key and it really helped for scenes that you knew that were dragging on for too much. The game crashes now and then but the auto save feature helps a lot.

For part 2, the game made a lot of improvements mechanics wise. Such as opening up the menu to see if any sexual thing is happening to Asuna. I also really like the dream mechanic that's used to view behind the scene events that you wouldn't be able to experience normally from just controlling Kirito. As for the story in this part, i just can't help but feel like Asuna is just more unrealistically stupid in this part. Some of the dialog in this part drag on a lot more than part 1 with the worst thing being that you can't skip text.

This paragraph is gonna contain minor spoilers if you're interested in hearing about the scene that made me reevaluate my thick skin for NTR. Essentially in this scene, Kirito is working his ass off to surprise Asuna, but Asuna takes it as him being an asshole towards her and Inoda. Inoda gets attacked by some tiny ass bird and Asuna thinks he's gonna die from that shit, so of course, she feels bad for him and listens to whatever he wants. They end up fucking. Seeing Asuna being so consensual to fuck Inoda and lie to Kirito so much while Kirito is working his ass off for everyone's sake really left me bitter. I really wished Kirito was more of an asshole so that I wouldn't have felt so bad for him.

As for the moment, I've quit the game. I might come back when part 2 finishes or when I've gotten over the scene. I used to think I was fine with NTR, but I'm not too sure anymore.

This game is beautiful.
You can feel that the creator is really trying his best. He is really delivering. This gave has only been out for like a year but there is so much content. Much more content than other creators has put out in 2-3 years. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I love the slow progress of corruption on the targets. Its not too fast, not too slow, just perfect. And the chapter/part finals are always so satisfying to finally see. Its just peak content and delivery for me.
And the start of part 2 was also handled really well. And how slowly the "mc" creeped himself into their life again was also funny to see. The Best part are the scenes behind the scenes. When you go to sleep and see in your dream world, just what really happened while you werent present..
The internet blog updates are also a very nice addition.
I love this, its really well done.
The dev gets better and the quality isnt worsening.
Im also feeling for the dev after reading his heartful message at the end the current content but am wishing him the best happiness in the life and enough wealth that he doesnt have to suffer. (yea NTR enjoyer and creator are no monsters xd)
Anyways, I genuinely enjoyed this game and am putting this up in my top games list. 12/10

Part 2 v0.32

One of the best ntr games I've played so far

Pros:
+Visuals are well made and hot...
+Story is very well written, has plenty of side chars, and there is an interesting plot twist that I have never encountered in other games before.
+Hidden ntr keeps you excited
+slow corruption, so you can bond with the chars
+battle system has events and no grind.
+exploration is very good, there are lots of exploration scenes and little events,

Cons:
-Just like in almost every ntr game, the mc's are stupid and naive.
-You have no influence on the story. While you can still enjoy the story, this kills the realism and immersion of the game.

Amazing game. Brilliant for NTR fans. Well written plot too.
I wish the pacing was same as that of part 1 but no complains.

Plot -10/10
Scenes -10/10
Game play - 8/10. ( Still very good for an RPMG )

It´s a really good game, so entretaining.

The CGS is nice and the tension in the game is exciting.

The new version of the episode 2 is really great, theres is a well thought-out job.

I can´t wait to play the new content.

Definetely the best NTR game i have played, and i have played/read a ton of ntr.

OK so IMO....
+Fantastic animated H scenes
+ Good and well deployed slow pacing NTR
+ Great dreadfull story, defintely not for soft hearted people
+ Well written characters story and events
+ Asuna is hot and the sex dialogues are actually good
+ MC is not a complete idiot, he knows something is going on but "love" and also he cant believe a fat fckr is ramming his girl
+ Really good battle animated H-Scenes
+ The second part is way better... but you need to play the first one
+ the First part last H scene is sooo good. And the Second part intro and Trehouse Scene are really good too


- WAY Too much unnecessary dialogue and side events
- the world against the cucked is something i dont find appealing
- maybe way too slow paced.
- The First part has no sexual intercourse, just one but is really meh, if you want a quick fap play the second part, the prologue has a great intro


Personal thoughs.....
My first ntr was Scars of summer so it leaved a mark on me and was top for me .. it was shocked for a long time but then you start to find more fckd up ntr's and you realize that "scars" is just babysteps into these sht.....
Shibafu, Castella and Hiromitsu have pull me full into this abyss.
But their ntr's are missing some little thing that make them feel more... "real".

This fkcng koikatsu rpgm game has that little thing. i played the first part and the entire corruption and ntr events are so well done and written that you can actually feel awfull for Kirito. its very rare for me to feel bad for the cucked. Asuna is such a lying wh#re you can actually feel anger reading her lies, and the fat bastard...... *clap clap*.... well done.... i really hate that fckr. i was so invested in the first part i spent like 3 or 4 hours playing till the end it it was a nightmare but the H scenes were totally worth it.... the "fall" of Asuna is perfect.
So the first part is fantastic

Now the second part....goddamn.... the new system of character thoughs and small conversation system is fkng fantastic. I actually had a small anxiety attack when seeing the fat bastard again making his moves on this bitch again... he is way more evil and more bold.
i actually despite asuna now... i think this novel totally ruined asuna and kirito for me. But thats good it means the novel and character /scenes writting are really good.


Overall: if you enjoy hard soul and mind hitting NTR's, this novel is for you and will get you there... just dont tunnel it, read it give it time to fck your mind.