RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ2 Fix1] [Fujino]

[Arya12345]

I have a 5$ sub mainly because I thought the quarantine was getting really good...but in the end it turned into a lover story xD keeping the 5$ sub for now, next update will determine if I continue it

 

[mos555]

Since Fujino said he calls himself Inoda

I still hope it was a joke...

 

[mos555]

I have a 5$ sub mainly because I thought the quarantine was getting really good...but in the end it turned into a lover story xD keeping the 5$ sub for now, next update will determine if I continue it

Well, I don't know, to be honest, I have doubts about the expediency of a sex scene on the street without any moral preparation for Asuna. Asuna doesn't have an exhibitionism fetish and she hasn't had sex scenes on the street (either in the game or in the real world), but she agrees to have sex in a residential area, right on the street. I see some inconsistency in this, one might say ignoring the conditions and rules that Fujino himself came up with for corruption in this game.

Or is Asuna's brain so damaged? Or do the perks have no meaning at all? Or does Fujino just not care about such conventions, he just wants to make this scene? I don't know which question would be the right one.

 

[gaka200]

Why do you call it "complaining"? "Complaining" is when express dissatisfaction with their problems related to people or events. That is, if a person said, "playing the game of Fujino makes my ass hurt," these are complaints. And when a person discovers and expresses his opinion about the advantages and disadvantages of any work or creativity, using analysis or comparison, this is called criticism.

I could have complained earlier that when I paid 7 bucks for a subscription (before version 0.70, after the new year my frustration exceeded the limits of patience), I wrote Fujino several questions and he never answered me.(what kind of arrogance? I do not know if the subscriber level is displayed on the Patreon, but for 7 bucks I could answer). But now that my conscience is at peace and I don't spend a single penny on stolen content, all I can do is criticize. In general, I just have nothing to complaining about. And by the way, where am I wrong? Everyone writes that someone is "complaining," but no one has ever responded to criticism with any kind of rebuttal or their own arguments.

Or does no one read what I write?
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The line between criticisms and complaints blurs pretty often. If someone is constantly criticising something over and over, someone else might end up interpreting it as a complaint, especially if the same criticism is on repeat. Said criticism also tends to make look more like a complaint because someone will bring up the criticism to debate/argue with someone about how they disagree, which in your case can imply they are expressing their "dissatisfaction" with the other person's opinions.

You could indeed have complained earlier about paying and having Fujino not respond to you, and that's probably where that specific line of thought ends.

And by the way, where am I wrong? Everyone writes that someone is "complaining," but no one has ever responded to criticism with any kind of rebuttal or their own arguments.

I think a lot of people have responded to each other's opinions with their own arguments, so this isn't something really worth saying. And I also don't know what you mean by "where am I wrong?", wrong about what? I don't think I'm accusing you of being wrong of something that you have to defend yourself for at the moment.

Or does no one read what I write?

In regards to this, I'm referencing to a few days ago, but I did infact read what you wrote and responded accordingly. So it's best to not make blanket generalized statements like this. Granted I'm going to give the benefit of the doubt that having to deal with a translator is going to make you unintentionally say things that rub people the wrong way, and thus they're going to not fully understand what you're talking about. So I'm also referring to how you pointed out to me the whole creator vs originator thing, and that cleared up my general understanding on what you were talking about, so I was all cool with it.

 

[mos555]

The line between criticisms and complaints blurs pretty often.

I think it would be better if people consciously keep a clear line between these two definitions, otherwise the accusation that someone is "complaining" looks somewhat pejorative. It was like someone had tapped me on the shoulder and said, "Okay, stop it and go to your room, kid".

And I also don't know what you mean by "where am I wrong?", wrong about what?

This is a semi-rhetorical question. It's just that rarely anyone responds to criticism directly, but rather uses epic counterarguments (sarcasm), such as "Fujino is the creator and he sees it that way", "everyone uses other people's ideas and Fujino too", "you complain all the time and it's not good", "Fujino suffers for your sins" (this is a joke, but on the issue of ass licking, some people have already lost their tongues). But no one even answered the banal question - "what will be left of the game if you remove everything related to SAO from it?" no one answered.

So it's best to not make blanket generalized statements like this.

I'm sorry, I'm sorry. This question was not asked specifically to you, rather it is a cry (whisper) of the soul.

 

[Arya12345]

Well, I don't know, to be honest, I have doubts about the expediency of a sex scene on the street without any moral preparation for Asuna. Asuna doesn't have an exhibitionism fetish and she hasn't had sex scenes on the street (either in the game or in the real world), but she agrees to have sex in a residential area, right on the street. I see some inconsistency in this, one might say ignoring the conditions and rules that Fujino himself came up with for corruption in this game.

Or is Asuna's brain so damaged? Or do the perks have no meaning at all? Or does Fujino just not care about such conventions, he just wants to make this scene? I don't know which question would be the right one.

I agree, it seems we are going straight into raw sex and outdoors....I personally don't see Asuna tackling these barriers at the same time....maybe its actually Asuna's mother? Since they already had sex in the car if I remember correctly lol

 

[Uaena]

I just noticed that Monitoring has been added.

 

[kinglionheart]

I agree, it seems we are going straight into raw sex and outdoors....I personally don't see Asuna tackling these barriers at the same time....maybe its actually Asuna's mother? Since they already had sex in the car if I remember correctly lol

Yea no. It is Asuna. Everything points to her and Kyouko has not been seen for a while. I am pretty sure it is not raw sex. Both outdoor sex and raw at the same time so soon seems too quick.

 

[Matt1877]

What does changeing to the "Real" view do, comparred to having it on "Original"? im not really sure TBH?

 

[darkbatVX]

The line between criticisms and complaints blurs pretty often. If someone is constantly criticising something over and over, someone else might end up interpreting it as a complaint, especially if the same criticism is on repeat. Said criticism also tends to make look more like a complaint because someone will bring up the criticism to debate/argue with someone about how they disagree, which in your case can imply they are expressing their "dissatisfaction" with the other person's opinions.

You could indeed have complained earlier about paying and having Fujino not respond to you, and that's probably where that specific line of thought ends.



I think a lot of people have responded to each other's opinions with their own arguments, so this isn't something really worth saying. And I also don't know what you mean by "where am I wrong?", wrong about what? I don't think I'm accusing you of being wrong of something that you have to defend yourself for at the moment.



In regards to this, I'm referencing to a few days ago, but I did infact read what you wrote and responded accordingly. So it's best to not make blanket generalized statements like this. Granted I'm going to give the benefit of the doubt that having to deal with a translator is going to make you unintentionally say things that rub people the wrong way, and thus they're going to not fully understand what you're talking about. So I'm also referring to how you pointed out to me the whole creator vs originator thing, and that cleared up my general understanding on what you were talking about, so I was all cool with it.

I've got no problem with criticism in general. But when the same complaints keep getting repeated, or the standards people use just don't feel fair, that's when it starts to rub me the wrong way. It's like going into a McDonald's, ordering a meal that costs less than ten bucks, and then complaining that the beef isn't Japanese Wagyu and the drink is Coke instead of an '82 Lafite.
Sure, Fujino's stories aren't perfect, but I think they're interesting enough. At the very least, almost every update gets people talking and keeps tens of thousands of fans engaged and coming back for more.
From what I've seen, a lot of the long-running gripes basically come down to Fujino not taking the story in the direction someone personally wanted.

 

[Uwukz]

What does changeing to the "Real" view do, comparred to having it on "Original"? im not really sure TBH?

Inoda and Asuna's point of view. "Original" is Kirito's perspective. If you don't have a cuckold fetish and you've already read what Kirito said at that moment, feel free to switch to "real".

 

[darkbatVX]

Also, if someone really has feedback for Fujino, they'd be better off posting it on Ci-en or Patreon. Judging by the recent announcements, he actually reads those comments. But I seriously doubt he sees those super long essays on F95. Yeah, Fujino does respond to plot-related questions most of the time—just not by replying directly to comments. Instead, he collects them and addresses them in announcements. He's done that at least two, maybe three times now. But he’s also admitted that his time and energy are limited, so if you want to leave feedback, it’s better to do it in his dedicated Q&A or suggestion threads rather than somewhere else.

 

[darkbatVX]

What does changeing to the "Real" view do, comparred to having it on "Original"? im not really sure TBH?

Choosing "Real" will make some CGs clearer—mostly ones that were intentionally blurred during gameplay. Also, in certain events, you can see Asuna's inner monologue.

 

[lehoangthang]

Cho tôi hỏi tại sao đến phần gặp asuna lại bị uot ra menu vậy

Hết game rồi bro

 

[mos555]

I agree, it seems we are going straight into raw sex and outdoors....I personally don't see Asuna tackling these barriers at the same time....maybe its actually Asuna's mother? Since they already had sex in the car if I remember correctly lol

Unless Kyoko changed into Asuna's clothes... But if we take the initial screen from the game, then it's Asuna, because she was wearing these clothes at the beginning of the quarantine and probably brought them with her.

Yea no. It is Asuna. Everything points to her and Kyouko has not been seen for a while. I am pretty sure it is not raw sex. Both outdoor sex and raw at the same time so soon seems too quick.

Futjino, in my opinion, has never made a scene that directly repeats the animation from the game's home screen. Therefore, I think the abrupt ending with the animation from the main menu is more likely to provoke the players, but scene is next update, itself will look different. Well, that's if Fujino, after all, will do everything consistently, and not just start doing scenes at random, for no reason.

 

[Mr Technician]

Only one character i am interested in is Administrator. Simply because - she is like a mystery unsolved. Quinella as they say. But that's my fecked up brain which have seen too many NTR games on F95 zone. From the RPG-mind side of it - i am interested to see if she will be acting character. For now - she is being pretty much non-active. And she only talks... I hope she will be playable character. Or like NPC to join. And instead of Asuna-biatch and her perk skills - i would have her. That would be nice and refreshing. At least for me. Yep, i am bored...

 

[timurotbasaroglu]

If this game had been fully released on STEAM, I think most would have just refunded the money, simply because there is nothing in it worth leaving in the game library or even remembering its existence. The fact that the game is coming out gradually is a fraudulent move by Fujino. If he used to do instacorruption and the players knew that what they saw in the first update would be in the last, then in the story game, what Fujino is doing is just a deception of expectations. Of course, that's if you expect anything from the game other than sex scenes with Asuna...

This is exactly why I don't pay and won't pay for this game. It's just a cliched and overused generic NTR game, especially if you don't know anything about sword art online, and game's story is utter crap. If I want a game like this, I can easily find a completed generic NTR game which exactly follows same plot. There are dozens of that. Heck, even FMC may be better than Asuna for my taste, as I don't like her hair color.
So... Why would I pay monthly for a game I already know its story - how it will unfold and end? I don't think Fujino deserves a monthly subscription, if he can't bring something new (plus, the worst thing is he even can't write a proper generic NTR story, as we can see in this game MC and FMC relationship is terrible, FMC doesn't love and care about MC, while MC is just a brainless idiot who sometimes does lewd stuff with other girls and honestly this is the best treat about him).

Since Fujino said he calls himself Inoda

So he calls himself as a fat assed raper who can't do anything other than humping? Fujino could face some serious problems in life if he doesn't change his standpoint

 

[Aniky Light]

This is exactly why I don't pay and won't pay for this game. It's just a cliched and overused generic NTR game, especially if you don't know anything about sword art online, and game's story is utter crap. If I want a game like this, I can easily find a completed generic NTR game which exactly follows same plot. There are dozens of that. Heck, even FMC may be better than Asuna for my taste, as I don't like her hair color.
So... Why would I pay monthly for a game I already know its story - how it will unfold and end? I don't think Fujino deserves a monthly subscription, if he can't bring something new (plus, the worst thing is he even can't write a proper generic NTR story, as we can see in this game MC and FMC relationship is terrible, FMC doesn't love and care about MC, while MC is just a brainless idiot who sometimes does lewd stuff with other girls and honestly this is the best treat about him).


So he calls himself as a fat assed raper who can't do anything other than humping? Fujino could face some serious problems in life if he doesn't change his standpoint

More or less, I have the feeling that Fujino created Inoda as if he wanted to challenge us players, otherwise why did he create Kirito who doesn't have 5 senses? It's obvious that he's afraid of losing.

 

[mos555]

This is exactly why I don't pay and won't pay for this game. It's just a cliched and overused generic NTR game, especially if you don't know anything about sword art online, and game's story is utter crap. If I want a game like this, I can easily find a completed generic NTR game which exactly follows same plot. There are dozens of that. Heck, even FMC may be better than Asuna for my taste, as I don't like her hair color.
So... Why would I pay monthly for a game I already know its story - how it will unfold and end? I don't think Fujino deserves a monthly subscription, if he can't bring something new (plus, the worst thing is he even can't write a proper generic NTR story, as we can see in this game MC and FMC relationship is terrible, FMC doesn't love and care about MC, while MC is just a brainless idiot who sometimes does lewd stuff with other girls and honestly this is the best treat about him).


So he calls himself as a fat assed raper who can't do anything other than humping? Fujino could face some serious problems in life if he doesn't change his standpoint

Well, I used to pay because it made some sense and the game kind of followed the rules of slow corruption, even considering that the whole second part is a soft reboot, after the raw sex between Inoda and Asuna.

The game peaked at 0.45, the scene in the treehouse because Asuna's actions had an explanation (flower pollen), Kirito didn't have to be dumb because he went off to kill the boss and then defended the treehouse, and Inoda didn't have to be a "manipulative genius" because Asuna just fell into his hands because of the pollen.

Then, in version 0.50, questions began to appear. If earlier in the battle scenes there was some explanation for why Kirito didn't notice anything - being blinded by an enemy or Asuna being in another place, then the battle scene in update 0.50 doesn't give any options at all. Why can't Kirito just look back? Just because Asuna told him to pay attention and focus? And this rape scene of Asuna in the real world somehow gets out of the narrative ( Why did Inoda put on a condom? Asuna would have gotten pregnant and found out in a couple of months, when she wouldn't have resisted. I think it's a good idea ).

Then there's version 0.55, which just ruins the whole atmosphere. Kirito suddenly became blind and deaf to Asuna's feelings and behavior. Asuna herself used to be someone who was ashamed of her infidelities and felt guilty, now she's a righteous girl who helps relieve pressure from her boyfriend, but in fact she's just taking revenge for Kirito's infidelity in a brothel (judging by how quickly she agreed that Kirito is a loser with a small dick. This has never happened before. So Asuna was just hypocritically retaliating instead of relieving the pressure). Inoda suddenly became a cool manipulator.

And then everything goes downhill into the pit, Asuna completely loses interest in the relationship with Kirito, stops resisting. The hospital would still be an acceptable arch if it weren't for Liz's absolutely psychopathic rape, but it's just my personal heavy dislike of rape, because my wife has told me several stories about what such actions do to women's minds and lives.

Quarantine arc is the worst move, because long-distance relationships in the NTR game, in which there is already no choice and the MC can't do anything, destroys the atmosphere instantly. Kirito watches as Asuna gets fucked by Inoda and doesn't even react or understand anything. Is this an NTR or a voyeurism game? So sometime after version 0.70, I canceled my subscription, simply because the game became too mundane, the characters stopped being characters from SAO, but simply became characters from any NTR game, and the game itself completely followed the path of the worst representatives of the genre. Well, that's just my opinion, of course.

So he calls himself as a fat assed raper who can't do anything other than humping? Fujino could face some serious problems in life if he doesn't change his standpoint

Fujino, before he wrote about Inoda, wrote that he wanted to go to a therapist. But apparently he didn't have time... and he turned into Inoda. In general, what's the point of going to a therapist if you can't tell him the whole truth? "I lost my mind because of the porn game and now I consider myself one of the characters."

 

[Aniky Light]

Do you know why Kirito is blind to everything Asuna does with Inoda? Because he told Asuna, "I trust you blindly."