Dazed kind of said it in the first post. It's instant slut for very poor reasoning and a story that is barely held together at all. To the very least though, the game doesn't take itself overly seriously or try to go over the top too hard into the comedy side of things or the tragedy side of things.
For what it is, it's a quick, cheap gimmick to get into some quick eroge. However it's missed several opportunities to make several things a ton better.. One of the ones that initiates turning her into a slut is constantly with her fighting these monsters through the story with her. Could have easily had places where the antagonist was trying to fondle, caress, grope, or otherwise corrupt the female lead.
I have yet to beat the game, though I have played it fairly far. There's nothing amazingly overwhelming awesome about the game itself.. You get the boring NPC Husband, the "Prideful" swordswoman who is quickly doing shit she shouldn't even entertain. Refusing to talk to her husband or anyone else about things and allows for things to escalate in a way that is all too predictable.
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To the part Dazed wants us to review. The Translation is actually very on point. I will confess to glazing over a number of text boxes, but I read a great deal of it and I didn't really see nearly any errors.. Not even a misspelling.. There are situations in which I would have perhaps said a phrase or line differently, or even used different words, but that's kind of being knit picky at that point.
The Translation job done I'd easily give a 5/5
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TLDR:
Pros:
+ The CGs are nice to look at and provide nice sound to go with the images given.
+ The game seems to try and expedite the process to start getting into the good CG's, but considering that it's an RPG maker game that includes combat, quests and tries to make you jump through hoops to get to the next scene.. I'm not entirely sure this can be a good thing
+ The Translation was very well done.
Cons:
- Game is overall a rather big miss.
- Should have included sex themes in the combat if it was gonna go the route it went.
- Would have benefited from granting the player some free will.
- Falls into the trope of including a stat tracker, but for no reason.. as all scenes are scripted. (this is more a pet peeve of mine. Because it implies freedom that doesn't actually exist)
- The story is non-existent. The Husband may as well be an actual NPC. The Corruption is instant. The Girl falls in the stupidest of ways.
Overall
This is a translation.. Not really a posting from the author or game dev.. The game is also completed.. For what the game is.. I feel like saying it's a 1 is being a bit harsh. The game is average, and there's tons of missed opportunity, the CGs are nice and hunting them isn't a convoluted mess.. There's a lot that they could have done worse, but there's a lot more they could have done better
But I always feel bad rating translations low, when it was just the translator toiling away at getting us another translated piece of work out for us. It's not their fault if the game they take to translate ends up being more mediocre... So I'll grant the game 3 stars. I was gonna place it at a 2 for the game itself, but the game itself doesn't really do too much all that awful, it just comes off as uninspired, meanwhile the translation given is fairly well done.
I know people mainly care about the gameplay itself and when looking at a review/rating would expect the rating to reflect the game itself as opposed to the translation.. But the people who check out these types of games usually check them out for their tags anyways, at least from what I've seen.
