VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Symbol of Tanit [v0.1 Silver] [Mars Dog Invasion]

  1. 5.00 star(s)

    Cumknuckles

    Cute and humorous visual novel about a guy in ancient Rome trying to get her new sheltered tsundere wife who he was forced into marrying to get along with him better and be more sexually open.
    Slowly teaching her to enjoy bondage and sex is great I just there were more events between the current sex acts you do with her(and that they focused more on how you're sort of corrupting the way she sees sexual stuff), ie. it'd be great if leg massaging had more stages and the massage including her pussy wasn't glossed over and included you giving some excuse why that isn't weird at all.
    There's also a heretical sex cult that you two are investigating which nicely gives you a reason to suggest she try some of the weirder things.
    Letting her give you a blowjob and sort of claiming that it's just to make her happy was great.

    The art is simple but charming.

    There are some simple minigames for dealing with certain situations but they're optional so won't be an issue if you don't care about them.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    exiliz2

    Promising project. It could use an art overhaul though. The character look cute but are very blurry. The story itself has potential so as long as the art quality increases, the game could end up amazing.
  3. 1.00 star(s)

    Zippity

    The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.26...

    Ok, this game so far feels more like a proof of concept with bugs, then anything meaningful or interesting...

    The visuals of the 2 characters are hand drawn 2D... They look cute and slightly original, but there's really very few pictures of them at the moment... The backdrops are horrible... They are basically real life photos doctored with various filters... That includes the dog scene in the forest, with a real dog photo doctored... Little to no effort was placed on the visuals...

    The script is a mixed bag, full of spelling/grammar errors and some broken English... There are even moments when the story text is not even in English at all, which is probably a coding mistake... 2 options for localization are made available in the beginning, one for English and the other for German… The main menu is half in English and half in German prior to making a choice, which makes menu navigation precarious...

    The poorly written plot revolves around a male protagonist who wakes up after a heavy night of partying with alcohol and drugs to find out from his female servant girl, that he is going to marry a politicians daughter... After a very quick marriage ceremony the relationship grinding begins... Of the two relationship story lines made available, only the Romance line has any content... You do a few repeating choices over and over again to increase the relationship with the protagonists new wife... As it progresses she loses some of her clothing and is open to progressing further... Not much further though, before the content ends... There was literally maybe 3-4 minutes of game play after the very fast introduction... There are attempts at humor during the introduction, but they were corny and not really funny...

    Overall, this feels more like a new developer trying to get his/her feet wet with a test run, just to see if he/she can get the basics of a relationship grinder going... The story telling is of poor quality, the visuals are poor as well, and it's full of translation issues... I understand this is extremely early into development, but for a first public release, it should have been pre-tested for bugs, and outside of the few female character pictures, there is nothing else that makes this VN/Game standout... For the moment, it appears to be building itself up as yet another porn fest relationship grinder... Will I revisit this one? Only if it gets it's act together and redoes a lot of things before continuing on...
  4. 4.00 star(s)

    Promojo

    You can clearly see that the game is still in development.
    There are supposed to be 2 Storry routes, a Love and a BDSM, but at the Monent you can only play the Love Rout. and the Storry is very short.

    I like the art and the concept.
    I think the game has potential.