VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Syndicate [v0.2.3] [Jack Corvo Co.]

Played the demo a while ago, came to it the other day to see the updates.
Unfortunately, I am still not convinced that this is going to be a good game. It has some potential, but I cannot overlook some details.
First of all, I'm not a fan of the female characters in this game. The blonde girl looks best, but her face is weird.
Also, I dislike the fact that you cannot skip the Raven part (blowjob) even though she is an interested character.
the biggest issue for me was the grammar and the writing. The story is not original, and there are almost no sex scenes.
The renders are the best part of this game even though I don't find the girls as attractive.

Story might be okay, but the grammar and way it's written make it really hard to follow. It seems somewhat disjointed due to this and I had to really try to figure out what was going on. The renders are nice, but the writing could use some help in my opinion.

I'm loving what I see so far, but I'm also a big fan of Futa on Male, so I might be a bit biased in that regard. If that's a primary feature of the game in the future I think it will be very successful. The spelling and translating is also very good for someone who isn't a native english speaker.

The general story setup and renders are nice, but the grammar is pretty poor and sometimes hard to understand what is meant by characters and hard to take certain scenes seriously because dialogue is pretty stilted.

[v0.1]
Okay.

Has potential and I am interested.

I don't think there are h-scenes (Saw only 2 pictures with "big-bad-prison-boss"), hopefully they will be good.


-Story, Originality
Plot, so far, is okay. You make a prisonbreak, find criminal, give him to police, drink and touch boobs and that's it.
No significant differences from choices.

-Renders
The art is okay.
One of the standart 3D artstyles nowadays.

-Sound
Some music plays and nothing else memorable.

-Playability
Simple Ren'Py VN, plays like standart Ren'Py VN.

-Performance
Works as intended.

-Bugs
Didn't see any.

-Animations
As far as I remember there were only still images.

-Voice Acting
No voices.

-Grammar
Didn't find mistakes.

-Amount of content
Bare minimum for an alpha version.

0.1

you literally see ALL The sex scenes in the game in the provided pictures. yes some still pictures of groping, and with correct choice an aftermath picture of what happened between a futa and 3 guys. no other pictures are with the 3 guys no animation.

this game has near zero sexual scenes. some groping which may or may not have happened actually according to the story.

good thing is you can skip through all in 1minute so you don' t waste your time. maybe later the game will be better but so far i don't see anything worthwhile in this. but it's only a 0.1 version.