[v0.4.1]
This visual novel is quite fine in every aspect and is of a high quality when comparing to most of the Koikatsu slop out there. The writing is competent, the animations are fluid, the visuals are nice to the eye, girls are attractive, but it's missing some spice and character depth. All the girls being magically influenced to perform sexual acts with the protagonist right from the get go feels cheap, like there is no corrupting or romancing going on, just straight up mind control. We don't even know most of these girls before succubus makes them all horny and submissive for the MC. The author claims that this is a "harem" path, but is it really a harem when we don't even know whether these girls (except glasses girl) even like the protagonist in the first place? I think this could have been handled better. Also this sleazy grin on MC's face every time it's happening makes me want to punch him.
The incest censorship is a little inconsistent at best and BS at most. You can change "Eve" for "Mom" but I think the game half expects there to be her name still. That's besides her always being addressed as guardian, and killing all immersion whenever it comes up. Why has Dahlia addressed Astrid as younger "friend" when they are clearly sisters? Why is William calling Owen his younger "friend", when they are clearly brothers? He also talks about their mother being their "guardian". I think the dev doesn't understand how to apply censorship to their game or are too afraid of the Patreon ban hammer so they removed ALL family ties between EVERY character, even those who are not in sexual relationships just in case (unless there is a gay bromance in the making between the two blonde brothers, but I seriously doubt that). The dev really needs to chill with this unnecessary censoring or the game will require an I-patch going forward.
Right now I'm giving this game a 3/5 but it doesn't mean that it's bad or mediocre, the dev just needs to fix censorship and properly establish their characters.
This visual novel is quite fine in every aspect and is of a high quality when comparing to most of the Koikatsu slop out there. The writing is competent, the animations are fluid, the visuals are nice to the eye, girls are attractive, but it's missing some spice and character depth. All the girls being magically influenced to perform sexual acts with the protagonist right from the get go feels cheap, like there is no corrupting or romancing going on, just straight up mind control. We don't even know most of these girls before succubus makes them all horny and submissive for the MC. The author claims that this is a "harem" path, but is it really a harem when we don't even know whether these girls (except glasses girl) even like the protagonist in the first place? I think this could have been handled better. Also this sleazy grin on MC's face every time it's happening makes me want to punch him.
The incest censorship is a little inconsistent at best and BS at most. You can change "Eve" for "Mom" but I think the game half expects there to be her name still. That's besides her always being addressed as guardian, and killing all immersion whenever it comes up. Why has Dahlia addressed Astrid as younger "friend" when they are clearly sisters? Why is William calling Owen his younger "friend", when they are clearly brothers? He also talks about their mother being their "guardian". I think the dev doesn't understand how to apply censorship to their game or are too afraid of the Patreon ban hammer so they removed ALL family ties between EVERY character, even those who are not in sexual relationships just in case (unless there is a gay bromance in the making between the two blonde brothers, but I seriously doubt that). The dev really needs to chill with this unnecessary censoring or the game will require an I-patch going forward.
Right now I'm giving this game a 3/5 but it doesn't mean that it's bad or mediocre, the dev just needs to fix censorship and properly establish their characters.