RPGM - Completed - TakenoteR [v1.0] [HNStudy]

Nice art, nice story.. what else... I will wait this nudist beach now

Hope in the future some ntr scenes... Husband seems encourage his wife in his writting note

Wait and see next episode but sure it will be very good

[Rev @ TakenoteR [v0.5]

...how did that backronym fail? NoteTakeR is so obvious...

Art's fine. It's better than I could do.

Writing is hokey. Scenario's been done, narrative is more than a bit contrived, characterization is one-note.

Porn's boring and vanilla thus far.

I dislike these games that are stuck squirming on their back between VN and RPG; unable to right themselves and move to one side or the other. It's made in RPGMaker for future scenes of Clueless Dork Husband being Near but Not Near Enough to his wife getting railed, but so far the game is presented as so hand-holdy that it not being a VN feels like an obtuse effort to stretch play time.

TLDR: This has potential, but this version is rough.

Quite good game if you like NTR content. I pretty like the art-style and the story is good enough. Absolutelly recomended if you like NTR and 2dcg.

The development is not slow, but still could be faster. I'm not complainning, just a constructive criticism.

I see potential here, but as most games when they start off that's pretty much all it has. You see that one image of some other girl riding a dick? That's where the vaginal sex tag comes from (there's also some scene of another random woman), there isn't a whole lot the PC does as of now

Art is...serviceable, even has it's own charm to it...at least for women can not get behind the way dudes look here. The scenarios in it are pretty hot tho which makes up for the art, although there's some scatterbrained writing behind some of them (as in the corruption of the PC is off in pacing between imo)

As a game it completely falls on it's face. It's a scene hunting game where you have to find specific npcs to talk to but there's nothing indicating which npc is the one you need. And sure you could say "well just use context clues to figure it out instead of needing the game to have flashing lights for you" but not only do some of these npcs make no sense for the current objective but there's no quest log to remind you what you should be looking for. Also there's a part where the game wants you to find a pumpkin that moves around the map 5 times for some reason before you continue...fucking what?

There's a computer that functions as a gallery but it feels awkward the way it's implemented, towards the end of the current version and using the movement keys to move the cursor to select the scene you want to view which you first need to spend notes to unlock for some reason (this isn't a grinding problem as you'll have all the notes you need, just seems like an unnecessary step when you can just simply have the scenes unlocked from the get go after seeing them during the course of the game). Also it only has 2 of the...8(?) scenes currently available for rewatching.

Oh and as a little side note ig the translation isn't 100% there, it's not MTL bread by any means just the occasional slip up.

tl;dr: I see potential for the game, needs more time in the oven and not much reason to get it as is

Great game! One of my favorites currently. The story is good, solid build up and I really like the art.

The game could use some sort of a quest log so you know what to do, but the map is small enough that it's pretty quick and easy to figure out.

Keep up the great work!

The story is interesting, I hope the drawing will be better in the future, but even now it is good despite some details. Sometimes you don't know what to do and there's not enough quest sheet, but still a score of 5!

Very promising project for a first game. Although art looks kinda janky i really enjoy it. It's still in early development so i's a little lacking in amount of scenes but that's obvious. I'm 100% going to comeback to this one when more content comes out.
Art 3/5
Story 4/5
Gameplay 4/5
Fapability 4/5
Originality 4.5/5

This game has a lot of potential. i love the art style, the female protagonist is super cute and the atmosphere is on point. sure, some things are missing right now like a gallery but im positive that this will be implemented!

I really liked this demo. It looks promising. The art was actually quite nice. As the other reviewer said, a journal would be really nice. A few more poses before we get right into a lewd scene would be great too. Overall, liked the demo and can't wait for more.

There are very few skills that truly matter in life, and one of them is the ability to deliver on commitments despite life's challenges.

HNStudy, you have truly demonstrated this by delivering a high-quality game while navigating the demands of your studies, and you’ve managed to impress the entire audience.

Congratulations to you, sir. With this kind of skill and determination, you will succeed in whatever path you choose.

Amazing game, and an amazing developer.

The game is high quality, the art, the story the delivery pace.
Everything is just great!