VN - Ren'Py - Taking Advantage [v0.04] [SSHGAMES]

Taking Advantage [v0.04] Well I guess I'm going to hell . This is so taboo and so up my alley that I had to subscribe to it. Most of these are slow starters but not this one it immediately gass. The renders are pretty good and plot is kind of cliché with horney adult guy who wants to have sex with everyone of his female realities. You always have to be careful with these because sometimes the renders make the girls look too young but he does a good job of making them look at least 18 so I didn't feel uncomfortable. I'm really looking forward to V0.05 to see what happens.

The writing in this VN needs help. Father/daughter stories are the trickiest to write, too often dad comes off as just a creeper. This one is an example of that.

You play as an MC who is morally bankrupt. There is no semblance of romance or any real emotional attachment, it's just a guy willing to do or say what ever he has to in order to screw pretty much every female he sees including naive daughters who certainly don't come across as 18.

There is no real story to speak of and it also suffers from more characters than needed making things convoluted.

Not one I would recommend.

The visuals are fine (not great, a pass), but the writing is clearly the biggest issue. Adding the ability to pick the age doesn't work when you write these characters as clearly meant to be much younger, but at least you can choose whether to have the scenes or not.

For something that is clearly designed just to be sexual, the fact it pretends to have any semblance of a story is utterly ridiculous. There's no reason to have so much dialogue when every single character is extremely empty and there purely for porn.

This one is what I'd call a 'mixed bag'. Some VNs have a deep story, with characters you can relate to and scenes that are relatively plausible. Others, they're clearly a porn game attempting to include various kinks. This leans very much towards the latter but tries (and frankly fails) desperately to be the former. And people aren't lying about it being wordy. Like SUPER wordy. Like LOOONG conversations where they say the same things 4 or 5 times over, just with different flowery words. Not to mention most of those long conversations, including right in the middle of a sex scene, is a bunch of over the top mushiness.

However, redeeming qualities is that the characters are all quite appealing, the animations are pretty good, UI is pretty typical and thus good. It could also use a better english proofreader or translator but it's not an absolutely terrible story (for a porn game).

So to sum up, it's not one you'll regret having a playthrough but its definitely not one I'd consider top-tier.

Version 0.03
Pretty good one: nice renders, amusing story, enough of "content", a bit raw animation however.Also there quite a bit o choice so anybody can trim some staff or choose alterative paths with some small consequences. Still looking forward to how it will progress.

I've played games that were shallow and poorly written before and still enjoyed them. That's because they knew what they were, they were porn with mild setup for the sake of sex. This on the other hand is shallow and poorly written but it tries to pretend it isn't. The writer puts 4 paragraphs back to back saying the same one sentence over and over in different ways. The characters are all contradictory, "He's/She's so caring and family oriented" seconds later that character is cheating and doing awful things to family members. Every aspect of the story telling is bad; I can't even describe it all.

There's one single upside, there are plenty of sex scenes, just skip the dialogue cause this one isn't just written poorly, it also drags on and on and on and on and on.

TL;DR: I play these games because there's a story. If I wanted immediate fap material, I'd just watch porn. This ones a hard pass for me.

Kinky and pervy game that is brought down by way too much dialogue. It's not just that there's too much dialogue, but it's heavily repetetive. Full blown conversations during sex that really takes down the mood. Good amount of sex scenes so there's no blue balling going on. Other than that, MC doesn't have much of a personality other than fucking everything on two legs.

I really like this game and wish I could give it a higher review. I like all the girls and the story, so far, has kept me interested and engaged. There are a few things that lower the rating. The first is that there is too much dialogue. I don't mind devs trying to flesh out the characters with dialogue in games, but this was just too much. A conversation is stretched too long by repeating the same thing in three or four slightly different ways. During sex scenes there can be literally a full on conversation that repeats the same thing over and over. Also this game is a bit confusing on how they want to characterize the MC. At first, it seems like he is the type to take charge and just fuck women.
Then he literally has a long (useless) conversation asking repeatedly if he can fuck and then cum inside a girl, while he was already inside her. There was no point to that and it contradicts other parts where either he wouldn't care about asking or just ask once and then pressure them into doing it anyway. The dev needs to either make multiple routes or decide how they want the MC to be.
I do really like this game and it actually has a decent amount of choices. It just makes it kind of tedious to be going through conversation after conversation where the same question is asked over and over or the same statement is said in multiple different ways for no reason. The more it's done the more it seems like it's only to pad the game and make it seem longer. Scenes that should only be 3-4 minutes on average go on for like 5-6.

This is fun. I almost didn't play because of the reviews and lack luster description. There's a lot of content for a 0.3 .

This starts off seeming like it's going to be netori and milf heavy, but quickly shifts focus to the younger characters.

MC will change between charming/creepy/rapey without warning. The game suffers from too many characters syndrome and no direction, but the the side characters and distractions have been fun. There are signs of a larger story, but that feels forced and unnatural and I don't want to judge it yet.

story 5 (I don't read most of the dialogue but I like the general idea)
characters design 3.5 (I prefer big tits over lolis)
animations 4
kinks ? (the story is still short but if possible I hope the developer add more threesome scenes, anal, lesbian, bdsm (punishment) and armpit licking)

Definitely has issues, as described in the thread - dev could use a dialogue editor - and not everyone's cup of tea due to the nature of half the LIs. But some solid scenes despite all of that. Worth keeping an eye on.

Excellent cast of characters, writing, and plot. The differing levels of corruption add a nice variety to it as well. The tension building done during certain scenes is expert level and keeps the reader engaged throughout. Also the realism of the life situations adds to the surprise element with choices.

Animation: Solid, nothing crazy model wise and they animation are fairly fluid.
Story: Light hearted, direct, fun. No need to take this seriously just go along with it.
Scripting: Not too bad, a little robotic at times.
A crowd pleaser game. This isn't pushing boundaries but it's fun to enjoy. I hope the creator continues with the plot. Loving it so far

Good game with alot of potential, still not a fan of silent games which is why i cant give the 5th star, it would need some music to set the moods in scenes for that one.

Right now its still short but whats there is good, and story is fine so far.
there is one weird thing about MC, when ever he thinks about the "brothers" kids he constantly thinks of them as hes nieces and him self as uncle, even though he knows it really is hes own daughters, it feels a bit idiotic.

Girls looks good and by the picture it shows alot of promiss if they are all planed to come in to the game.

Story 4/5
Might become better or worse we will see as the game comes along.

Animations 3/5
they arent the best but not bad either

Music 0/5
Well there is none

I will update my review once this game gets more updates.

[v0.02]

An extended incest game, where MC has been cuckolding his brother for years and is now starting to give it not only to brother's wife, but his biological daughters who think he's their uncle. It's a welcome difference in premise from the usual incest games, where you try to seduce your own family -- in this case, you don't even see your own wife in the existing version. +point for the premise.

The writing and plot are rather clumsy, but you can get to fapping quite fast, so it's a bit more on the side of a porn game than VN. Which is quite OK to me.

The renders and loops are decent.

There is quite a noticeable disconnect between what MC says about loving his extended family and the lewd thoughts (and actions) he is having. He is sorta dominating and blackmailing the family, but sorta not; the domination side is very shy at the moment. There is a definite potential for corruption, blackmail and male domination tags, which are currently so mild they are almost nonexistent. For my 2 cents, it would be a nice change of pace.

Something to bookmark and see how it develops.

STORY:
You ever play that blue ball game? GOOD news this is not IT!! after quick download.. playing this 0.02v i manage satisfied my JohnY!! twice!! And if you into Uncle fetish boink your brother daughter... Sir this is your game! what include in this uncle fetish.. a lesbo niece.. Check! abandoned middle child Check! Over friendly promiscuous liltle one.. CHECKED ! this is i call 3in1 Epstein LOVE fest!! only missing Serial rapist.. hm maybe future update ?? well devil only DREAM!!
Graphic:
GOOD is not Cyberpunk... but is good / model look cute.. is VN and Free
Sound/music:
eh i don't think got sound or music.. i just put on cat miow meow from youtube... i dunno why but make me feel good! playing this game.

Well, this is a fuck everybody kind of game. The dialogue is dumb. The characters are dumb and the circumstances are dumb. You get to creampie all the girls, so that's positive. Plenty of chances to knock them up.

Honestly, if someone went through and rewrote the entire script while using the same graphics, you could get a decent game out of it.

This much content on a first release is always a good sign.

Writing is a little over the top but not bad actually. Sometimes it's a good thing if done in the right way. After all this is a porn game.

Very promising game. Eagerly awaiting to see what the dev comes up with next.

What a weird story.

I get it.... it's a porn game. There's some suspension of disbelief. But come on, man... This is just bizarre and lazy.

Renders are fine. Animated, which is good. Needs a rape tag, though. That's a pretty serious omission for some people.

v.0.01

The protagnium and rationalizing is strong in this one. It feels a lot like someone telling a shortened and glamorized version of what they claim happened to some friends over drinks.

That said, it does make *some* sense.... sentence to sentence. If you think about it more realistically or scene to scene, ...well, it's going to seem outlandish. It's a porn game. It's already outlandish. xD

If you don't take the story seriously, it's pretty much just a short story with specific kinks
Characters: 3/5
Models: 4/5 (mostly for variety)
Story: 3/5
Writing: 3/5 Sex: 3.5/5 Lewd frequency: 4/5 (short game, so not very telling)
Game length: 10 minutes to *maybe* 1 hour if you read every word, and slowly.

6/18 characters on the front page were shown so far.
Take that how you will.

I look forward to coming back to this when content has been fleshed out.

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