VN - Ren'Py - Taking Advantage [v0.06] [SSHGAMES]

This is fun. I almost didn't play because of the reviews and lack luster description. There's a lot of content for a 0.3 .

This starts off seeming like it's going to be netori and milf heavy, but quickly shifts focus to the younger characters.

MC will change between charming/creepy/rapey without warning. The game suffers from too many characters syndrome and no direction, but the the side characters and distractions have been fun. There are signs of a larger story, but that feels forced and unnatural and I don't want to judge it yet.

story 5 (I don't read most of the dialogue but I like the general idea)
characters design 3.5 (I prefer big tits over lolis)
animations 4
kinks ? (the story is still short but if possible I hope the developer add more threesome scenes, anal, lesbian, bdsm (punishment) and armpit licking)

Definitely has issues, as described in the thread - dev could use a dialogue editor - and not everyone's cup of tea due to the nature of half the LIs. But some solid scenes despite all of that. Worth keeping an eye on.

Excellent cast of characters, writing, and plot. The differing levels of corruption add a nice variety to it as well. The tension building done during certain scenes is expert level and keeps the reader engaged throughout. Also the realism of the life situations adds to the surprise element with choices.

Animation: Solid, nothing crazy model wise and they animation are fairly fluid.
Story: Light hearted, direct, fun. No need to take this seriously just go along with it.
Scripting: Not too bad, a little robotic at times.
A crowd pleaser game. This isn't pushing boundaries but it's fun to enjoy. I hope the creator continues with the plot. Loving it so far

Good game with alot of potential, still not a fan of silent games which is why i cant give the 5th star, it would need some music to set the moods in scenes for that one.

Right now its still short but whats there is good, and story is fine so far.
there is one weird thing about MC, when ever he thinks about the "brothers" kids he constantly thinks of them as hes nieces and him self as uncle, even though he knows it really is hes own daughters, it feels a bit idiotic.

Girls looks good and by the picture it shows alot of promiss if they are all planed to come in to the game.

Story 4/5
Might become better or worse we will see as the game comes along.

Animations 3/5
they arent the best but not bad either

Music 0/5
Well there is none

I will update my review once this game gets more updates.

[v0.02]

An extended incest game, where MC has been cuckolding his brother for years and is now starting to give it not only to brother's wife, but his biological daughters who think he's their uncle. It's a welcome difference in premise from the usual incest games, where you try to seduce your own family -- in this case, you don't even see your own wife in the existing version. +point for the premise.

The writing and plot are rather clumsy, but you can get to fapping quite fast, so it's a bit more on the side of a porn game than VN. Which is quite OK to me.

The renders and loops are decent.

There is quite a noticeable disconnect between what MC says about loving his extended family and the lewd thoughts (and actions) he is having. He is sorta dominating and blackmailing the family, but sorta not; the domination side is very shy at the moment. There is a definite potential for corruption, blackmail and male domination tags, which are currently so mild they are almost nonexistent. For my 2 cents, it would be a nice change of pace.

Something to bookmark and see how it develops.

STORY:
You ever play that blue ball game? GOOD news this is not IT!! after quick download.. playing this 0.02v i manage satisfied my JohnY!! twice!! And if you into Uncle fetish boink your brother daughter... Sir this is your game! what include in this uncle fetish.. a lesbo niece.. Check! abandoned middle child Check! Over friendly promiscuous liltle one.. CHECKED ! this is i call 3in1 Epstein LOVE fest!! only missing Serial rapist.. hm maybe future update ?? well devil only DREAM!!
Graphic:
GOOD is not Cyberpunk... but is good / model look cute.. is VN and Free
Sound/music:
eh i don't think got sound or music.. i just put on cat miow meow from youtube... i dunno why but make me feel good! playing this game.

Well, this is a fuck everybody kind of game. The dialogue is dumb. The characters are dumb and the circumstances are dumb. You get to creampie all the girls, so that's positive. Plenty of chances to knock them up.

Honestly, if someone went through and rewrote the entire script while using the same graphics, you could get a decent game out of it.

This much content on a first release is always a good sign.

Writing is a little over the top but not bad actually. Sometimes it's a good thing if done in the right way. After all this is a porn game.

Very promising game. Eagerly awaiting to see what the dev comes up with next.

What a weird story.

I get it.... it's a porn game. There's some suspension of disbelief. But come on, man... This is just bizarre and lazy.

Renders are fine. Animated, which is good. Needs a rape tag, though. That's a pretty serious omission for some people.

v.0.01

The protagnium and rationalizing is strong in this one. It feels a lot like someone telling a shortened and glamorized version of what they claim happened to some friends over drinks.

That said, it does make *some* sense.... sentence to sentence. If you think about it more realistically or scene to scene, ...well, it's going to seem outlandish. It's a porn game. It's already outlandish. xD

If you don't take the story seriously, it's pretty much just a short story with specific kinks
Characters: 3/5
Models: 4/5 (mostly for variety)
Story: 3/5
Writing: 3/5 Sex: 3.5/5 Lewd frequency: 4/5 (short game, so not very telling)
Game length: 10 minutes to *maybe* 1 hour if you read every word, and slowly.

6/18 characters on the front page were shown so far.
Take that how you will.

I look forward to coming back to this when content has been fleshed out.

p.s.

So.. wow.. where to even start with this one? How about the fact it's missing a rape tag for one.. or the fact that within 2 min the woman forgives the MC and becomes his secret wife? And that's just the start of how much of a shitbag the MC is..

The story doesn't get any better after that and the dialog is just painful to read. I guess the one good thing is the English is actually coherent so.. yay proper English?

Oh and props for having the whitest "Indian" girl ever.. at least she had the brains to run away (though I'm sure she'll be back.. poor girl)

Grading on prologue curve.

The story is basic, but that is not what this game is about. It is a harem game and man I am liking the early preview of the harem. Lots of good looking LIs and fun ahead at this pace.

Graphics are good, but not all star level. Currently no real animation, so hopefully that will be on the roadmap.

Overall a good start to a fun game.

Normally I hate to rate something before .03, but I thought this was good enough to do now AND with it currently being over-rated I had to do it. This was a lot better than I thought it would be. Based on the thread you would think it was horrible. Yes, there are some spelling and grammar mistakes, but this is just the first version and can be fixed easily. Is it a 5 star, no, but with animations and steady updates it could be IMO.

You know what you get yourself into playing this type of game and the dev totally understands that. A straightforward, guilty pleasure of a game with decent renders, and somewhat entertaining writing is enough for me to give it 5 star. Sorry, I just happen to be the target audience.

Gameplay : ✭✭✭✭✰
Story : ✭✭✭✭✭
Spelling : ✭✭✭✭✰
renders : ✭✭✭✭✰
Potential : ✭✭✭✭✰
Overall : ✭✭✭✭✰
Girls physique : ✭✭✭✭✰
Graphic : ✭✭✭✭✰
Creativity :✭✭✭✭✭

over all 4.5 ,
I see plenty of potential, the family seem a bit of a mess so far , but it seems fun.