VN - Ren'Py - Taking Advantage [v0.05] [SSHGAMES]

[v0.02]

An extended incest game, where MC has been cuckolding his brother for years and is now starting to give it not only to brother's wife, but his biological daughters who think he's their uncle. It's a welcome difference in premise from the usual incest games, where you try to seduce your own family -- in this case, you don't even see your own wife in the existing version. +point for the premise.

The writing and plot are rather clumsy, but you can get to fapping quite fast, so it's a bit more on the side of a porn game than VN. Which is quite OK to me.

The renders and loops are decent.

There is quite a noticeable disconnect between what MC says about loving his extended family and the lewd thoughts (and actions) he is having. He is sorta dominating and blackmailing the family, but sorta not; the domination side is very shy at the moment. There is a definite potential for corruption, blackmail and male domination tags, which are currently so mild they are almost nonexistent. For my 2 cents, it would be a nice change of pace.

Something to bookmark and see how it develops.

STORY:
You ever play that blue ball game? GOOD news this is not IT!! after quick download.. playing this 0.02v i manage satisfied my JohnY!! twice!! And if you into Uncle fetish boink your brother daughter... Sir this is your game! what include in this uncle fetish.. a lesbo niece.. Check! abandoned middle child Check! Over friendly promiscuous liltle one.. CHECKED ! this is i call 3in1 Epstein LOVE fest!! only missing Serial rapist.. hm maybe future update ?? well devil only DREAM!!
Graphic:
GOOD is not Cyberpunk... but is good / model look cute.. is VN and Free
Sound/music:
eh i don't think got sound or music.. i just put on cat miow meow from youtube... i dunno why but make me feel good! playing this game.

Well, this is a fuck everybody kind of game. The dialogue is dumb. The characters are dumb and the circumstances are dumb. You get to creampie all the girls, so that's positive. Plenty of chances to knock them up.

Honestly, if someone went through and rewrote the entire script while using the same graphics, you could get a decent game out of it.

This much content on a first release is always a good sign.

Writing is a little over the top but not bad actually. Sometimes it's a good thing if done in the right way. After all this is a porn game.

Very promising game. Eagerly awaiting to see what the dev comes up with next.

What a weird story.

I get it.... it's a porn game. There's some suspension of disbelief. But come on, man... This is just bizarre and lazy.

Renders are fine. Animated, which is good. Needs a rape tag, though. That's a pretty serious omission for some people.

v.0.01

The protagnium and rationalizing is strong in this one. It feels a lot like someone telling a shortened and glamorized version of what they claim happened to some friends over drinks.

That said, it does make *some* sense.... sentence to sentence. If you think about it more realistically or scene to scene, ...well, it's going to seem outlandish. It's a porn game. It's already outlandish. xD

If you don't take the story seriously, it's pretty much just a short story with specific kinks
Characters: 3/5
Models: 4/5 (mostly for variety)
Story: 3/5
Writing: 3/5 Sex: 3.5/5 Lewd frequency: 4/5 (short game, so not very telling)
Game length: 10 minutes to *maybe* 1 hour if you read every word, and slowly.

6/18 characters on the front page were shown so far.
Take that how you will.

I look forward to coming back to this when content has been fleshed out.

p.s.

So.. wow.. where to even start with this one? How about the fact it's missing a rape tag for one.. or the fact that within 2 min the woman forgives the MC and becomes his secret wife? And that's just the start of how much of a shitbag the MC is..

The story doesn't get any better after that and the dialog is just painful to read. I guess the one good thing is the English is actually coherent so.. yay proper English?

Oh and props for having the whitest "Indian" girl ever.. at least she had the brains to run away (though I'm sure she'll be back.. poor girl)

Grading on prologue curve.

The story is basic, but that is not what this game is about. It is a harem game and man I am liking the early preview of the harem. Lots of good looking LIs and fun ahead at this pace.

Graphics are good, but not all star level. Currently no real animation, so hopefully that will be on the roadmap.

Overall a good start to a fun game.

Normally I hate to rate something before .03, but I thought this was good enough to do now AND with it currently being over-rated I had to do it. This was a lot better than I thought it would be. Based on the thread you would think it was horrible. Yes, there are some spelling and grammar mistakes, but this is just the first version and can be fixed easily. Is it a 5 star, no, but with animations and steady updates it could be IMO.

You know what you get yourself into playing this type of game and the dev totally understands that. A straightforward, guilty pleasure of a game with decent renders, and somewhat entertaining writing is enough for me to give it 5 star. Sorry, I just happen to be the target audience.

Gameplay : ✭✭✭✭✰
Story : ✭✭✭✭✭
Spelling : ✭✭✭✭✰
renders : ✭✭✭✭✰
Potential : ✭✭✭✭✰
Overall : ✭✭✭✭✰
Girls physique : ✭✭✭✭✰
Graphic : ✭✭✭✭✰
Creativity :✭✭✭✭✭

over all 4.5 ,
I see plenty of potential, the family seem a bit of a mess so far , but it seems fun.