VN - Ren'Py - Tale of Two [v0.3] [KushAI]

Review based on version 0.3
This is definitely a 5 out of 5 game, and for me, it isn't just a standard 5/5; it has gone straight into my list of highly favored games
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Writing:

• In this game, you savor every line of dialogue. This is one of the reasons it completely grabbed my attention. Every line is packed with deep affection, tension, teasing, and the intimacy between Ash and Mila. There is no trace of filler, dry, or emotionless dialogue

Characters and Personality:

• Both Ash and Mila are excellent. Ash isn’t a clumsy, insecure, or weak MC; he knows exactly how to handle everyone. I thoroughly enjoyed playing as him. On the flip side, Mila isn’t a brainless slut; her entire focus is on the MC. This intense focus heightens our affection and love for Mila, which in turn will make future sharing scenes carry more sensitivity, excitement, and pleasure

Music and Atmosphere:

• The atmosphere and the sense of immersion have been implemented correctly, combined with music that is very good and fitting, which together caused me to get lost in the experience

Art and Model Appearance:

• Although art is subjective, I am sure most people thoroughly enjoyed it. It’s high-quality realistic art that enhances the characters' lifelike feel. The models are all very hot and lovely. A point I’d like to highlight regarding the characters is their originality; it’s my first time seeing these models, they aren’t repetitive, and this contributes to the freshness of the experience

Relationships:

• All relationships in this game are engaging, especially the most important one: Ash and Mila. It is a very intimate and romantic relationship that has implemented romantic elements correctly, making the player fall more and more in love with her. We are definitely dealing with a great relationship here, not a toxic one like many NTS and sharing games seem to think is necessary

Everything was great; I personally enjoyed it to the fullest
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Suggestions:

• A suggestion regarding the future of the game, not its current state
  I hope there will be a Sharing path with a strong MC, or a Vanilla path where Mila is only with us and won't be with another man
  Don't get me wrong, I am a fan of NTR and NTS as well as Vanilla, but I definitely want us to have a path where Ash never turns into a loser. This could be a Love path or a Sharing/Swing path with Ash in control
  This would make me play this path first and consider it the main path. After finishing it, if there are NTR or NTS paths, I would play those too since I’m a fan of them as well. But in my mind, I would consider the first path (Love/Sharing/Swing) as the main one. This allows the player to fully enjoy the game while avoiding the distress that might come from certain events and changes later on

Wishing success for the game, and I am definitely looking forward to the next update

Surprisingly better than expected. There is a lot of reading but it's well written and it's possibly the most important contribution to creating the excitement. The pictures alone wouldn't be as effective, despite being visually impressive.

A good start, excellent characters. An interesting and dynamically developing plot. I definitely think the game has great potential. The addition of animation will liven things up even more. I'm very interested to hear from the developer how regularly they plan to update the game. I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel; the third installment has heightened the suspense. Good luck to the developer.