Oslows Hi, it would be nice to have an option to make the textbox/namebox transparent.
Usually I use a personal mod that has worked on every renpy game I've played, but for some reason it doesn't work on your game.
After playing a bit I have to say that all the *annotation* at the beginning of a sentence feel very weird. It feels like something you would see on a screenplay script to help actors bring the author's vision to life.
Depending on the annotation, it would be better to replace those with the following:
-renders
-character sprites
-a separate line of dialogue said by a "narrator character"
I think it has already been reported but I'll say it just in case you missed it. When clicking on the load button in the main menu, it opens the save page instead of the load page.