So the only problem I really have with this KN so far is the way it's being written. There's a bunch of repetition, and it feels like some text is out of order. After "And for that, well...you'll have to trust me." it's all discombobulated.
Also, instead of ERP style of typing actions, I think it would be better to type something like "Nova's eyes glowed with dark ambition." or "The [insert adjective here] demon's eyes glowed with dark ambition.". Especially since action is typed in non ERP style throughout the dialogue.
Art's pretty decent, especially by AI standards. Looks like *some* effort was put in to stylizing it.
Also, instead of ERP style of typing actions, I think it would be better to type something like "Nova's eyes glowed with dark ambition." or "The [insert adjective here] demon's eyes glowed with dark ambition.". Especially since action is typed in non ERP style throughout the dialogue.
Art's pretty decent, especially by AI standards. Looks like *some* effort was put in to stylizing it.
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