Looking at it right now, I do kind of feel it is a little early to review this. I only say that because the scope the Dev has for this is too large and overly ambitious. "Episodic" is a very strange story to strive for when episodes of every episode are put out sporadically themselves. And It's not bad, I guess, but so far it's boring. And I don't say that because of the amount of sexual content, I say it because the story so far is boring, banal everyday nothings. The characters' only traits so far are that they like the MC. And that includes the MC. There are only three people in the story at all, at the moment. So if nothing else you should write decent interactions between them, but nothing's there.
It starts out the MC returning home after university to live with his family again. His dad and stepmom and step sister. Dev has him visit the grave of blood related females to cement that it's not real incest. Which I appreciate, but I'm still tired of that fetish. Anyway, MC bumps into his flirty neighbor, Grace. He flirts with her, she flirts with him, she's a lonely housewife that's lost attraction to her husband. And that's her whole story. Then he gets home and his step sister is there, she happily greets him then both of them suddenly think "wow they're attractive now." The sister is in her last year of high school, studying hard and is in love with MC. That's her whole story.
The inbetween moments in this is the MC watching VTubers. Or scrolling through reddit. Or he says "I made money in crypto." because he's already planned to leave home again, to meet other girls whose only trait is they find the MC attractive. These kinds of things aren't fun, interesting, or even worth reading. I wouldn't talk about this if it only happened once to illustrate the point that MC "is just existing" his own words. But to repeat the point and advertise dumb VTubers or just have MC essentially saying "I'm already done with this place and looking for something else" why should I care about this myself? I could understand if the WHOLE first chapter was done and a preview for things to come was there. But it's not and once again, it's boring.
I think I see a little bit of where it MIGHT be going, MC has weird dreams and he was in an accident that gave him edgy white hair and DevianArt mismatched eyes. But he's still a self obsessed KPop soft boy. And every interaction exists in its own tiny world based on the fact that the only two other characters are already making excuses to not interact with each other. I WANT to like this, don't get me wrong. It's not written in broken english, the UI is customized a bit, and it's not some messy sandbox that has no end in sight. But at the same time, it's a boring read, the UI is very light on top of bright and washed out colors that make it hard to read, and the scope is already a little too large.
I would like the Dev to if not rewrite things, at least in the future, write the characters to be interesting. MC is supposed to be a self-insert, so it can be a little excused, but the rest of them should be more than schoolwork, housewife, and "gosh he's so cool" whispered under their breath.
TLDR it's boring but inoffensive, written by someone that actually speaks english, and I guess it looks okay. I was gonna go with three stars but that was for its potential and not what's there so I went down to 2 because I didn't really say much good about what's here. I might come back to check it out in the future.