2D Tell me what you think about my illustrations!

[Sanguine1104]

I'm not a developer, nor am I good at writing. I just love to paint.

But uh, yearh! Tell me what you think about my works, or what you'd like to see me paint!

 

[FromOtherSpace]

That's not bad!

On first pic the left hand shouldn't be made of such straight lines.
And the shiny effect on the cock is way too strong. Make it also wet or only create some highlight on its shape, here it seem made of a flesh colored glass/metal.

On second, it's odd to see the outline "dissapear" around the butt, look more like an edge detection than an actual choice.