At this point I do not even care about DAZ anymore. I am just here for the story, and it keeps getting better with every update. I honestly did not expect to get this invested, but now I am checking in just to see what happens next. The plot is really getting good!
VN - Ren'Py - Tempest [Prologue v1.1] [Lone Hermit Productions]
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motseer
There's already a four star review, but I'm gonna go a little further out on the limb. One of the biggest reasons is the dev's willingness to accept constructive criticism. So, without further ado...
I have to be honest. It's not the best graphic art, but it's not bad. The animations are pretty basic, but damn, what a story! The writing is excellent! You may get some complaints that it's a bit verbose. Ignore them! The story telling is exceptional! I recommend it highly! I'd recommend you make a few signatures. It's one of the best ways to attract more folks to your title. My only criticism is the semi-transparent text box. Put a black outline around the text and do away with the text box or make it 100% transparent. The text will stand out just fine and the dark box won't detract from the view of the renders.
The prologue is an excellently crafted backstory and I can't wait to begin the adventure in the next update!
10/10 on the story.
, no choices in the prologue