VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Temptation [v0.1] [Rashok]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

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    The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.1...

    This is a new visual novel/game by a new developer, but do not expect it to have a meaningful or deep story for the moment...

    The visuals of the characters are ok, with a few shout out characters from other VN/Games as students... There are a few animations, but they are very basic... The backdrops are almost all ones we've seen before in other VN/Games...

    The script is ok, but it has some occasional broken English as well as some spelling/grammar errors... The plot (what little there really is) revolves around a male protagonist who lives with his girlfriend... He very quickly meets his new female neighbor who he has the choice to build a relationship with... He is also a school teacher, who is presented with some possible relationships with students as well, and I mean right off the bat, once he goes to work... A cheerleader hits on him right off the bat, and several opportunities arise to have a sexual encounter with that character... After work is done, he then goes home where he has another sexual opportunity with his girlfriend...

    Overall, this is pretty much a porn fest without a story with any actual meaning outside of sexual conquest... There is both Love and Lust relationship stats for the women he meets up with (to include the girlfriend)... Which will most likely open up content as this VN/Game develops, depending on stats acquired... There is little to no depth to the story either, as all the choices feel very cliché, and with the cheerleader student, her personality is a bit over the top... For the moment, the current content is very short, with a few minor changes depending on choices... I'm not really impressed with the story aspects so far, as they seem rather generic and not very creative... I understand it's the developers first time, and this may just be an experiment VN/Game for all we know... But it needs some more polish in both the text and the overall story... Will I revisit this one? I don't know right now, so I guess we'll just have to wait and see...