Nono127
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Why is the fucking quest so broke? The first collect mushrooms is so fucking broke. You can't pick more than 3. It should be based on damn energy. Dev fix your fucking broke quest system! 30 energy should be able to pick more than 3 damn mushrooms. This is a very stupid way to do a quest system. As it stands why do you even have damn energy in the game for?
The strength training is just as damn fucking broken. I can train it to 5 at level F but when I try to train to level 6 it says I need to raise my Guild Ranking? WTF I already did I am at Rank E.
Please make the stats and energy make some fucking sense?
The strength training is just as damn fucking broken. I can train it to 5 at level F but when I try to train to level 6 it says I need to raise my Guild Ranking? WTF I already did I am at Rank E.
Please make the stats and energy make some fucking sense?
the mcs personality is crap. like literally i wish the goddess would've killed him plus she told him repeatedly its a DIFFERNT world and he can see its medieval yet is confused by slaves and shitty living? hes lucky he arrived in a town that isn't big or hed would have ten diseases in 2 days and most likely sold as a slave.
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I always figured she was the one who left us the stuff when we first arrived and gave us the counter-blessing.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
That's it, i'm on the Bront best girl train till i'm proven otherwise
sanshisan
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The best thing in the recent updates so far is that the developer seemed to make the MCs cock bigger. Thats the first sign of a developer that understands porngames. Most developers are just fucking retarded or cater to retarded audiences, but this one knows whats up. From the stylistic choices to the setting and the characterizations this is top tier shit. This guy even makes japanese porndevs look like imbeciles.
I have to say, the writing of the main character began getting worse and worse as time went by. The general writing of all the characters is so well done that somehow the downward spiral of the MC getting a harem feels almost generic and bland. The biggest bummer is that the main character is now purely S&M focused, but some of the very hot training scenes make up for it. I hope there will be more developments with Violet. Finally a game that understands the deeper things of what people want from a porngame, so maybe becoming more extreme is part of the points the developer wants to convey.
Theres another piece of criticism, theres not many repeatable scenes. I want to go back and repeat some of the scenes, most of them are hotter than the repeatable ones. Also the game needs more shower fucking scenes and more tittyfuck, especially if its involves Violet.
The Violet training parts where she was asleep were well made. I'd love to do it again but this time shes awake and horny and submissive.
I have to say, the writing of the main character began getting worse and worse as time went by. The general writing of all the characters is so well done that somehow the downward spiral of the MC getting a harem feels almost generic and bland. The biggest bummer is that the main character is now purely S&M focused, but some of the very hot training scenes make up for it. I hope there will be more developments with Violet. Finally a game that understands the deeper things of what people want from a porngame, so maybe becoming more extreme is part of the points the developer wants to convey.
Theres another piece of criticism, theres not many repeatable scenes. I want to go back and repeat some of the scenes, most of them are hotter than the repeatable ones. Also the game needs more shower fucking scenes and more tittyfuck, especially if its involves Violet.
The Violet training parts where she was asleep were well made. I'd love to do it again but this time shes awake and horny and submissive.
I want to like this game, though it has terribly slow pacing. I like the characters and am interested in the story. MC is a bit annoying. I kinda feel the devs are trying to make a "Western Style" typical dipshit isekai protagonist. However, I can't say more than this. The shitty attempt at a QTE sequence in the snake chase section is so absolutely broken for me. Half the attempts the options didn't even load before the bar disappeared, and then when I could get them to load it would hangup so hard that it would then speed jump through three options before I could register that I clicked too many times. This is a massive demerit for me. I despise when developers try to shoehorn game systems meant for far better engines into RenPy. Youre using an engine built on an interpreted language. Stop trying to make it act like something it isn't. I seriously want to go on a multiple paragraph rant on what I think of the developers intelligence, but Im sure the 8000 variants of absolute moron I can come up with, in every possible human language (and some fantasy languages) would find some combination that violates forum rules.
Bob Jared
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Yeah James deserved it and Violet wants it. Everyone else should include a non-dominance route imo. Especially since that training seems to keep overwriting the personalities I liked to begin with and replace them with sex-obsessed masochism. And yet there is somehow still so much I like about the game.
SergejGamer73
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play defense style then will you see don t attack if you lost your sword is ok too !
SergejGamer73
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I am stuck on the one final rest quest. I have 10000 gold, Lily's love at 100, and I have spoken to Violet about the slave collar but nothing is triggering. Am I missing something?
There i had a little problem too but i don t know what i have maked then read the text by the main quest i think so i have found out what i have missed
have you looked by Bronk i think you need a collar for the main girl
make a screenshot from the quest with the text then i can read it i will not begin from new then i can help better
Oh boy there's a lot of issues with this game's script. I didn't start taking note until I was in act 1 but there's typos and grammar issues all over the place. As well as an inconsistency in whether the dialect is supposed to be American or British and how it seems like it switches between the two mid-sentence let alone mid-cutscene. I wish there was a discord where I could throw what I've found but seeing as I'm not being paid, I'll throw what I got here.
There's no hyphen or dots in between the CC.
Good job*
This doesn't have the format of other sighs and it reads as if he's just saying the word sigh.
While I enjoy Bront's dialogue and the shake up in presentation, it doesn't fit the standard dimensions and has this bleed over into the next line.
I am very confused as to why *Sniff*, an action, is broken up by these dots.
begin*
patron*
measurements*
can*
This is a double negative and gives the opposite meaning of Lily's intended statement.
reminded*
Less spelling mistakes and more like terms that don't make sense in this setting. You're going with the average peasant living to 40, despite this world having healing magic and potions, so a retirement home and a modern term like deleted is weird. A good replacement for deleted would be "erased".
apology*
This is less a spelling mistake and more of a confusing dialect thing. This would be fine if Lily had an American Southern drawl indicating her lack of education. Though first off, that's an offensive stereotype and secondly, I'm not sure that is what you're going with considering she speaks well enough in every other scene.
You don't use temporarily in most instances. Also I forgot to highlight it, the last image needs to be corrected to a part*.
apologize*
noticed*
could have* carried
Alternatively, carry* could have been used.
While not objectively wrong, this can be clunky depending on dialect. switching it to truly are* would have it make sense regardless of chosen English.
every*
upset*
one*
While there's an excessive use of misused commas throughout the entire game, this one annoyed me the most. Seriously, I could fill an entire thread with pages of screenshots showing commas that shouldn't exist.
As mentioned earlier, it keeps switching back and forth between British and American English. Regardless, this is a poor use of the term bloody.
Bloody is also a term similar to the American term "fucking".
Example: "I don't fucking care!" and "I don't bloody care!"
Leng's favorite word is "fucker" when it comes to describing monsters so it seems off.
Speaking of which. He uses bugger. So far this is the only instance I've noticed. Bugger has a long history of development that I won't bore you all with but it essentially serves the same purpose as calling monsters "fucker" so it's odd that he only uses this once.
I haven't got confirmation but I don't think Leng is older than 21. Calling an old man "mate" doesn't make sense socially. Especially "old mate" as that is more to describe a long term friend, not someone's age. It's also confusing since other characters have used the term "bro" and "dude" so far.
hadn't*
You don't need the "if" here.
known*
I'm max image limit for this post.
There's no hyphen or dots in between the CC.
Good job*
This doesn't have the format of other sighs and it reads as if he's just saying the word sigh.
While I enjoy Bront's dialogue and the shake up in presentation, it doesn't fit the standard dimensions and has this bleed over into the next line.
I am very confused as to why *Sniff*, an action, is broken up by these dots.
begin*
patron*
measurements*
can*
This is a double negative and gives the opposite meaning of Lily's intended statement.
reminded*
Less spelling mistakes and more like terms that don't make sense in this setting. You're going with the average peasant living to 40, despite this world having healing magic and potions, so a retirement home and a modern term like deleted is weird. A good replacement for deleted would be "erased".
apology*
This is less a spelling mistake and more of a confusing dialect thing. This would be fine if Lily had an American Southern drawl indicating her lack of education. Though first off, that's an offensive stereotype and secondly, I'm not sure that is what you're going with considering she speaks well enough in every other scene.
You don't use temporarily in most instances. Also I forgot to highlight it, the last image needs to be corrected to a part*.
apologize*
noticed*
could have* carried
Alternatively, carry* could have been used.
While not objectively wrong, this can be clunky depending on dialect. switching it to truly are* would have it make sense regardless of chosen English.
every*
upset*
one*
While there's an excessive use of misused commas throughout the entire game, this one annoyed me the most. Seriously, I could fill an entire thread with pages of screenshots showing commas that shouldn't exist.
As mentioned earlier, it keeps switching back and forth between British and American English. Regardless, this is a poor use of the term bloody.
Bloody is also a term similar to the American term "fucking".
Example: "I don't fucking care!" and "I don't bloody care!"
Leng's favorite word is "fucker" when it comes to describing monsters so it seems off.
Speaking of which. He uses bugger. So far this is the only instance I've noticed. Bugger has a long history of development that I won't bore you all with but it essentially serves the same purpose as calling monsters "fucker" so it's odd that he only uses this once.
I haven't got confirmation but I don't think Leng is older than 21. Calling an old man "mate" doesn't make sense socially. Especially "old mate" as that is more to describe a long term friend, not someone's age. It's also confusing since other characters have used the term "bro" and "dude" so far.
hadn't*
You don't need the "if" here.
known*
I'm max image limit for this post.
understanding*
Compassion used in this context is extremely outdated and since you haven't used outdated dialogue anywhere else, it stands out.
There's no spelling mistake here but in this part of the scene you have silly music playing for only two pages of dialogue which has it end far too quickly.
Yawn*
determined*
a part*
some*
You're missing the word "feel" here.
quests* or questing*
This entire page is weird.
"Lily, there is no real way I can tell you this without upsetting you." would be the best way to remake it.
The current phrasing is both grammatically incorrect and comes off as if he's blaming her for being upset.
I*
Not a spelling mistake but a formatting one. I'd suggest replacing the character name with "HE".
calms*
turned*
Remove the "an" entirely.
One of the very few instances where you use a hyphen for stuttering rather than your use of an ellipsis.
our*
Not a spelling mistake but this is the only instance of British English that I've noticed Lily use so far.
She has used "bum" but while Americans' go to word is "butt" in that context, it is occasionally used for instances intending to make it sound silly or cute. So if the script is intended to be more American in reading I'd suggest keeping Lily's use of "bum" because it'd also contrast well with the main character's use of "ass" and other vulgar language.
stroll*
knows*
Another instance where it should be temporarily*.
Having them both say "you two" is awkward.
was*
managed*
Finally. I have and will to continue to enjoy the game. There's just an abuse of commas and ellipses. As well as a lot of spelling mistakes and what seems to be confusion in thinking that both American and British English can blend together.
More personal feedback.
It's more noticeable early on but I'm not sure why the character slots are so out of order compared to when you meet them.
This man is amazing and he needs to show up in the story a lot more. I know he's basically become the dev's face but the guy is so supportive and I love his kind encouragement toward the MC to improve.
More personal feedback.
It's more noticeable early on but I'm not sure why the character slots are so out of order compared to when you meet them.
This man is amazing and he needs to show up in the story a lot more. I know he's basically become the dev's face but the guy is so supportive and I love his kind encouragement toward the MC to improve.