HTML - Abandoned - That Girl [Ch. 10] [Orion Games]

The story is nonsensical, the dialogue is awkward as hell (especially using emojis to express emotions), and I can't really tell if the choices do anything other than opt in and out of sex scenes. None of the characters have even an iota of personality.

The porn, weirdly enough, seems to consist primarily of the main character randomly picking up chicks and meeting girls at random rather than anything to do with the story. Overall, I just don't understand what's going on with this game.

Ending ruined the game and kind of made it so all the choices became irrelevant. Felt like a massive waste of time in the long run. Had so much potential.

Also there are some constancy problems with the ending of the story where the character takes 3 months to get from america to africa. More details would've been given as to where she was because it's not like they didn't have time to do so. You had like 20 sentences between the characters in the lap just as you ditch for Africa. Better detail could be given for directions in that time.

The story is rather confusing.And all our choice doesn't even matter.The story should be well writen,but most of it not even linked together and I just feel more confused than enjoying it.This game originally have 2 route,non NTR route and NTR route.But,Dev just mix both of them and make it a single confusing storyline which is disappointing for a so called multiple route and ending.Some of the tag are misleading (virgin tag)and some of the sex gif aren't match with the situation in the story.

There no winning in this game. if you left the "girl" alone or simply took weapon along option puts you in bad place.
There no option to play her?
If loose 8 times make it possible option.
I recommend it as possible play means it be interesting.
Playing a dude sucks.
If was chick driving back would it be any different?

I'm enjoying it, can't wait for more! Thanks for keeping it updated. Glad you can avoid content you don't want, seems to be plenty of choice already. I'll have to play through a few times to see how much it branches.

The game surprised me. I avoided playing it for a while because the overview presents the story like bad NTR. I'll explain later.

The good:
--Interesting story though it did get confusing
--good fap content. though not all the images match, the Dev did a better job than most
--You can play loyal for your wife and easily avoid the NTR or avoid the NTR and fuck everyone, including your wife and the girl, or any combination of the above

The bad:
--Tho the story is interesting it can be confusing
--I'm not really clear how it all fits together.

Neutral:
--The NTR is sometimes just NTR for the sake of NTR.

Initially, there's no good reason for its existence other than to appeal to ppl that like NTR. It's clearly marked if you want to avoid it. That said, though the NTR was not very believable at first, it lands on more solid ground if the MC makes the wrong or, depending on your perspective, the right choices. Regardless, it didn't bother me as much as other lamer NTR stories with nonsensical justifications, so for me, it was a wash. I did the NTR path once, found it interesting enough tho I'm puzzled where it's going to go.

All in all, I give it 4 stars. I found it surprisingly enjoyable for what it was.

I rather enjoyed this.
There's an issue with animations representing the girls with different actresses, however, this is made up by using higher quality animations. It was apparent throughout the game that the dev actually gave a shit.
Not a big fan of the dead-end choices, but at least it sends you back to the choice that got you there.
The game is shrouded by NTR kink shamers so it's hard to tell if the game is good or not by reading around. I recommend this game to people who are looking for a fap. The dev teases and delivers images and animations aimed at people looking for a good time.

Version Reviewed: Chapter 6

Overview: A good Samaritan finds himself thrust into a world of murder, mind control, immortality, and crazy horny women.

Story: You are an ordinary guy with a decent job who spots a woman being abused and decides to intervene. Amusingly you can choose not to intervene and lead a normal happy life. If you do, you end up of course inviting this blazing hot 21 year old adult to move in with you, without consulting your wife. In a twist that can only happen in a porn game your wife is cool with this and immediately decides that they need to go clothes shopping together. What looks like it's going to be a creeper corruption game with you getting options to peep on your new ward immediately turns on its head as the guy who was manhandling her immediately finds your house, kidnaps them, and forces you to get the police off of his back.

At this point there is a fair bit of branching in the story. Characters start dropping dead, other characters come to you in confidence with conflicting stories. It delves into high-concept sci-fi and deep fantasy a little bit. I have to admit I started having trouble keeping all of the plot threads straight. Oh and also you'll occasionally meet completely random women who have mysteriously developed an unquenchable thirst for cock and if you so much as give them time of day they'll jump right on your dick and get themselves knocked up. I'm not sure yet if this is some sort of mind control thing or if it's just the porn game deciding to add some porn.

The story seems to be getting only more bonkers as time goes on. I wouldn't be shocked if in two or three more chapters we find ourselves on the secret Nazi base on the dark side of the moon fucking an immortal Eva Braun or something.

Gameplay: Mostly VN, but there are some choices and most seem to be important. It is possible to end up in a soft-lock situation where you have no options to continue because of choices you made earlier. All in all I think the dev caters mostly to the jealous alpha male asshole playtrhough.

Graphics: Real porn. They're all animations, but annoyingly it suffers from the real porn problem where you'll have three different animations on the screen at once and they're all different sets people in different places in completely unrelated scenes. Continuity is a real problem for real porn games. On the plus side the scenes are not overly compressed or too short.

Conclusion: This game isn't terribly long and does at least keep itself interesting. It's certainly worth a try. I can't give it 5 stars because it has the real porn continuity problem as well as some early indications that the story is going completely off the rails as the dev adds more chapters.

great story with loads of paths I can't wait for more it feels well paced I've found a lot of games are extremely slow so this is a nice change of pace the characters are good and it genuinely feels like your choices have a affect

The story is very immersive and the game in himself is neat ! Well only is you like this type of content (pregnancy, ntr), the paths are clean to, sadly the game still short but Orion is pretty active on his game so the next uptades will be coming soon (I wish).

I wanted to like this game. I like the premise, of an ordinary guy intervening in a domestic dispute and getting drawn into a much darker world. Unfortunately, said premise has not been properly used, IMO.

The pacing needs work. Like, in my play I had the guy arrested, and he was out, knew who MC was, and had a plan on how to deal with him overnight. This needed to take another day or so, in order to flesh out Alice and Nicole some more, and make us care about them as more then just a couple of randos that we're supposed to care about.

The story seems rather incoherent, in a way that suggests English may not be the Dev's first language. I had a fair amount of trouble grasping exactly what was going on most of the time.

Player Agency is lacking. Two examples of this are the MILF in the parking lot and the hitch-hiker. If you want to be a nice guy and help the MILF with her bags, she propositions you. Refuse because you don't want to cheat, and when she calls you later, if you pick up you are forced into a threesome with the drunk MILF and her equally drunk sister. You should have the option to refuse them, especially because MC is supposed to be worried about his wife.
As for the hitch-hiker, why does picking her up to be nice mean you make it clear she's paying for the ride with her body? I mean, you pick her up, start groping her, and get the choice between blowjob, anal and vaginal, and if you pick vaginal you break her into your breeding slut. No chance of just being a nice guy doing a nice thing, again while MC is supposed to be freaking out over his wife.

All that said, I actually did like the sex scenes, however confused I may have been about why some of them were happening.

Quick playthrough at the moment. 4 Chaps. Have been looking forward to additional chapters since Chap 2. Steady progress and interesting. I like HTML games, this is a storybook choose your path/what scenes kind of game.

Picky community. Current rating is 2.5 stars.

I choose 5 stars for potential and I enjoyed my time playing. Bugs are fixed when they are reported. Short but sweet. There are kink warnings for those who are particular. KCCO developer~

My Rating for is: 3/5

Pros:
+ Nice Gifs
+ Nice Story
+ Hot Sex Scenes

Cons:
- Bunch of Typing Errors
- Errors in Part four (Fixed)

Conclusion:
I,m not really into html games,but this is one of the few that I liked, this game has so many sex fetishes that it is hard to name them all.
You have treason,Shemales, NTR etc. in this one Game.
the scenes have lots of images in them,even though they are with different women in one scene,kinda kills the moment.
The story is overall nicely told,even though with alot of spelling errors, but you still know what it es about.
And what also would be good is if the chapters would be a little longer.
Overall:
Overall a Good game with some flaws in it, but still worth the download.

The game has potential, especially with the active development of what is my first and foremost fantasy kink/interest: getting female characters pregnant. This is optional in the game. Anal and cumshot lovers can avoid it completely (except for a couple of scenes where it's the woman demanding a creampie).

The English translation needs serious work and I personally submitted a list to the DEV in a word file just for Chapter 1. I did not want to do the whole game, because I'd basically be rewriting half the game text.

FYI - I assisted rewrite CH1 - CH 4... I've been very busy writing for another game, but hope to assist with future chapters if the DEV asks...

Pretty good game for a early state.

Good:
- good story
- good placing of videos
- hots girls

Bad:
- short
- choices do not carry over to the next chapter (you fuck your wifes virgin butthole, she never had fucked anal in the next scene)

Neutral:
There are alot defloration videos on web, if you add the virgin tag and deflorate a girl in a game, why not show that in the video, instead of just writing "you fucked her virgin pussy" and in the next scene you fuck her really hard like she isnt a virgin.

Summary: Short but pretty good game. I like the part where you find excuses for your wife to go and harass the girl.

EDIT:
version ch3

Version ch1 was about THE girl but now the last two chapters are not about the girl.

EDIT ch4:
You need to restart the whole save after every new release or just a fix. Is it worth just for a slightly bit new content? Not for me. One more star lost.

Not much content for 2 chapters story-wise, however there are quite a lot of cheating sex scenes, it's definitely very promising. I enjoyed how the MC is more on the "alpha" side of the spectrum, as it is somewhat rare to find that on this site. Only 1 NTR scene as of yet, but it is nicely made.

I, for one, will keep a watchful eye on this game. Can't wait for more.

i think it's promising but there are only 2 chapters and playtime is short for now. ntr scene is good but only 1 scene for now, and its name is 'that girl' but there is only one chapter girl is staring. promising but not much for now