VN - Ren'Py - Completed - That Night In College [v1.0] [TyrannosaurusTeddyBear]

Not the most realistic setting but definitely a hot setting. The characters look fine, if a lot older than what one would expect from college students.

There is a very heavy focus on size and size comparison and a small amount of sph, with a heavier focus on the woman being a size queen, than on the humiliation of the smaller MC.

A good VN if you like the fetishes outlined, else there really isnt anything that makes it stand out other than it being a happy and healthy relationship.

Female: Ugly
Dialogue: Lack of plot to feel realistic
Developers should understand that a good NTR game must have slow persuasive dialogue. The heroine must be beautiful and worthy as she slowly corrupted.
plus, the female should not be easy which seems unreasonable Lack of credibility

Fun, short story about "That Night in College"...
The major negatives I have about this one are personal preferences, so I'll generally leave those out.

+ the story is upfront, content is not avoidable, so don't ask and don't get upset. You'll only have yourself to blame for seeing something you don't want to...
+ story is succinct, but detailed enough to understand the characters.
++ it's refreshing to see a "healthy" relationship depicted in these types of stories with a "supportive" gf for the mc.
+ not an art critic, but it's "easy on the eyes", so good enough.
+ fairly "realistic" looking characters for a porn fantasy game. "Normal" folks aren't so "perfect" looking...lol
++ Elizabeth, hot, but not just talking about the looks (one or two too many random tattoos for my taste, the quote on the wrist. Most are really hot though, I don't know what it is about script on the torso...). She's supportive, willing to indulge in a fantasy, but genuinely concerned about Steven's mental well being... She's clearly not into it just for herself, it's rare in these types of stories...lol

- objectively, while the characters' ages aren't really mentioned, typical "juniors" in college are in their early 20s. I don't buy the two MCs are in their early 20s... Not a big deal to me, they could be mid-late 20s and started college later... just a small negative.
- there are some finer, technical details in the art work and animations that could be scrutinized and improved, but they're good enough for what seems to be a first work, so not worth tarnishing the overall rating.

Overall, very good short work with only a few minor negatives. Excellent potential to build from for future work by the dev.