VN - Ren'Py - The Abyss [v0.1.5] [Black Pearl Game]

The female models are hot, otherwise it's a terrible game or rather a VN, because the player choices are of no consequences. Basically the MC just gets rapped, no matter what she does. Truly terrible.

Wow, was expecting a bad game after reading comments here, but not this bad. The writing is off the charts... in a bad way. Plot makes no sense, I mean, random guy calls you, offers you money to basically rape and poison your friends and you just go with it Malik? Dumb as a rock. And from then on it doesn't get any better. Choices might matter, haven't checked to be honest, I was skipping through the plot from quite an early point, it was that or vomiting over myself which didn't seem interesting to me for some reason.

Character models are decent in the FMC and poor in all the rest. Render quality is subpar in execution, design, lighting, etc. Animations are terrible and not as numerous as they should be by generic modern standards. At least found no bug and it has the walkthrough in it.

So, all in all, hard drop for me.

Missing the "Rape" tag. Entire game is about rape. Will change review if the tag is added, but it's pretty crucial to add the tag that could really mess some players up if they dont know.


Literally all the game is, is to die or be raped. By everybody. Over and over again. And yet, no rape tag. All these people are supposed to be your friends, but they all either rape you (the men) or rape you a little and are super happy all the men are raping you (the women). Would have ended review at first paragraph but not enough characters.

Very nice idea! Good plot, beautiful models. But english is awful, it breaks all the pleasure from the game. Also, lack of content makes the game quite boring. Fetishes are not progressing, despite all the characters are completely up to more stuff.

In general - a good start, but english is something you should really think about and fix somehow.

Visually attractive enough and with a story that at least contains the possibility of being interesting and different, this game is almost impossible to play because the dialogue is so choppy and disjointed that it is impossible to get a feel for any of the characters. The story would also need a lot of work to make it possible for the reader to suspend disbelief.

Some of the problems may be due to poor translation, but even with a perfect translation the game would still not give the layer any reason to choose one option over another, in those very few cases where a decision is even possible.

Bottom line: I can't see any sign that the dev is concerned with making the game interesting to the player, other than some visual candy.

I give 4 stars because it's true there are things I would have liked more, for example when he decides not to drink and dies, it could have been more branched out but it's only the beginning so it's acceptable.
The pictures could be better but the DEV is still early days so they will improve.
And then both the Dev and the language of the game are Italian.
Congratulations Pirate, keep it up.

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Do 4 stelle perchè è vero ci sarebbero cose che avrei voluto in più,esempio quando decide di non bere e muore,poteva essere più rammificata ma è solo l'inizio quindi è accettabile.
Le immagini potrebbero essere migliori ma il DEV è ancora all'inizio quindi miglioreranno.
E poi è Italiano sia il Dev che la lingua del gioco.
Complimenti Pirata continua cosi.