VN - Ren'Py - The Adored Marriage [Ch.1 v0.5] [Simbaclaw]

I won't write about the strengths since others have already covered them
Here are three issues:

• FMC’s facial expressions: At times, they feel exaggerated. For instance, when she laughs, her mouth opens unnaturally wide, or she makes other over-the-top expressions. While her dialogue and behavior are fine so far, and her personality has been good, these facial expressions contradict that. They make her seem like someone who doesn’t take anything seriously. This problem is noticeable in about 10 to 20 renders, but the rest of the expressions are perfectly fine
• The sex scene: There’s only one, and it’s poorly executed. It’s too short, the animation is buggy, and during the blowjob, the FMC’s mouth doesn’t align properly with the MC’s dick, among other problem
• Bugs: There are quite a few bugs. For example, if I choose the red dress, she occasionally ends up wearing a black one in the club

If these three problems get fixed, I’ll bump my review up to 5 stars but If these issues aren’t resolved, I’m afraid I’ll have no choice but to lower my rating to 3 stars

Excellent start from Simbaclaw taking our married couple from boredom to swinging. Early days yet but our dev seems to have set a steady pace and I for one hope there's a lot more to come, 4 stars at the moment but hoping to give the fifth in future episodes.

It is a short part. But I love this begginning of the story. Not so fast and the images are very cool. And finally, the dialogues seen very natural.
This theme is one of my favorites. When a couple start to discover new ways of realating.

Very little content at the moment, but the story is laid out very nicely.

There seems to be a lot of routes that the story could go down in the future, but not too many where it's unrealistic. The story also makes sense and isn't some kind of rushed "cuck me im useless" story.

I hope developer continues working on this, and does eventually have a "cuck me im useless story" with a slow burn.

I'm really enjoying this game! There are so many options to explore, like swinging, wife sharing, hotwifing, and even some cheating elements. maybe mystery netorare and netorase? this all adds to the excitement. I noticed there might be a chance to set up a scene in the bar, which I'm super excited about. It would be awesome to see future couples, random guys hanging out, or even some online dating scenarios!

VERSION: CH1 v0.1
SUMMARY: Solid start to a typical NTR game.

PROS:

1. Nice looking models
2. Renders are generally good quality
3. Story is simple yet kinky
4. Written and structured well with good pacing.

CONS:

1. Not much in the line of cons as of yet, there is too little content.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

• Consider adding more kinks like pregnancy, don't limit the MC's wife only as someone that could become pregnant from another guy but also the MC knocking up another woman.
• Other kinks are always welcome and hopefully the developer does things different in this that the MC is the only one that gets cucked, maybe take the approach of playing both MC and his wife and see how it goes.