It's a decent game for what it is and still in early dev but here's some feedback:
-Writing is solid reads nicely and it's not rambly or whatever. Feels AI generated at times, but I might be just imagining things
-Story is a bit weird I've only gone through the Sophia/Lucy/Solo paths. Solo is fine, kind of boring at times, but mostly fine. Lucy's path feels very good and has a nice flow to it up until the 12-13th time you see her then it goes from gradual, nice and steady progression (which is honestly great) to just feeling kind of rushed I guess, but still fine for the most part.
Sophia's path just feels rushed. The MC just immediately goes with whatever she suggests without question and no real reasoning as to why. It needs some work in my opinion. Within 2 or 3 events you're already blackmailed and the MC doesn't even protest or anything. I get that you're going for "Oh well the MC already wanted deep down so it's fine", but still...
-The ai cg is so far the biggest problem for me... It's VERY inconsistent. The characters don't look like themselves. They don't look like their age for half the pics and look vastly different from one scene to the next. A lot of the times the art breaks the immersion a lot more than it adds. If you need help with ai generated stuff feel free to DM me I could offer some help or go for some real porn mixed in idk up to you really.
Overall it's a solid 6.5/10 game so far for what it is. The storylines aren't anything new and there's been many similar games, but they're well written and they're good for the most part. It's very linear with no real choices past initially choosing which girl's path you wanna take, but I hope that changes in future updates and there can be some more crossover or multiple paths/choices.