The first time I played this was quite a while ago, I don't even remember exactly when, it was basically just a prologue. I played through again when the first chapter came out and it had been changed. After that to be honest I thought it had been abandoned. This is the third iteration of it I have played.
To be honest I think it looks good. The hospital scene at the beginning was a bit off writing wise. The doctor didn't act much like a doctor.
You can tell some changes have been made to the appearance of the models. Another mom with way over sized boobs, not my thing and I swear they got bigger. Sis is definitely more my type. I prefer models who look realistic.
A couple of spoilers ahead.
The biggest problem is after the haunted house part the next day at school there are a couple of glaring continuity mistakes. It acts as though things that happened previously either didn't happen or happened differently such as sis commenting about the MC playing video games all night and walls being thin when she had actually slept next to the MC. Also MC having a flash back and commenting on her having brown hair when he already had flashbacks of her with brown hair, so it wasn't new.
The look and feel of the game also changes. Interactions between the MC, mom and sis all take a different tone. They suddenly treat each other slightly different. It feels as though someone else took over the writing part way through and changed how the characters act and speak.
This is one of those VNs where you have to click on a choice box even when there is only one choice given. That could stand to be eliminated.
On the upside the sleep creep thing is optional, at least so far which is good, I've never been a fan of that. It's just another way of sneaking in nonconsensual sex. It would be nice to have options on fetishes such as anal sex as well. For me some is fine, it depends on my mood but vaginal is preferred.
Over all this has good potential but the continuity missteps need fixed.
To be honest I think it looks good. The hospital scene at the beginning was a bit off writing wise. The doctor didn't act much like a doctor.
You can tell some changes have been made to the appearance of the models. Another mom with way over sized boobs, not my thing and I swear they got bigger. Sis is definitely more my type. I prefer models who look realistic.
A couple of spoilers ahead.
The biggest problem is after the haunted house part the next day at school there are a couple of glaring continuity mistakes. It acts as though things that happened previously either didn't happen or happened differently such as sis commenting about the MC playing video games all night and walls being thin when she had actually slept next to the MC. Also MC having a flash back and commenting on her having brown hair when he already had flashbacks of her with brown hair, so it wasn't new.
The look and feel of the game also changes. Interactions between the MC, mom and sis all take a different tone. They suddenly treat each other slightly different. It feels as though someone else took over the writing part way through and changed how the characters act and speak.
This is one of those VNs where you have to click on a choice box even when there is only one choice given. That could stand to be eliminated.
On the upside the sleep creep thing is optional, at least so far which is good, I've never been a fan of that. It's just another way of sneaking in nonconsensual sex. It would be nice to have options on fetishes such as anal sex as well. For me some is fine, it depends on my mood but vaginal is preferred.
Over all this has good potential but the continuity missteps need fixed.