The game is average in nearly every way. The story and writing aren't anything to really get excited about, at least not in its current form. The character models are slightly above average and there are a few interesting events in the game.
There are two significant problems with the game (aside from most things being average):
#1 - The animations are too fast and don't feel natural because of it. They desperately need to be slowed down by at least 50%. Real people don't move this fast. The problem is compounded by the low frame rate of the animations. They are not only too fast, but quite choppy. Animations need to be at least 20 FPS to look good in my opinion. Between these two problems, it really ruined most of the lewd scenes for me!
#2 - There is a pretty big bug with the x-ray vision scenes. If you save your game while in x-ray vision mode and then hit the 'Return' button from the 'Save Game' menu, half the time you will be in permanent x-ray vision mode with no way to get out of it. When this bug occurs, the screen will never change but the dialog will. I was starring at the same screen of my nude mother all the way through the event where I go to the grocery store and purchase food for my mother. The same bug occurred two other times during the game. The only way to fix it is to quit the game completely, restart the game, and load a save game. I've never experienced this bug with any other Ren'Py game and I've played a lot of them!
I'm generally not a fan of mind control type lewd scenes. It feels like a cheap way of bypassing the corruption element through good writing (the best method). I prefer two willing partners without the use of mind control, drugs, magic, and other means. The best stories, in my opinion, are those with believable corruption that occurs through good story events and great writing! In the game's defense, the corruption magic used is only a "push" and not true mind control.
The voice acting was a nice touch and few games have it (I mean very few), but too many of the lines are poorly acted. It is like reading a line of text with no context, emotion, or feeling. Approximately 25% of the voice acting was good to great, I just wish all of it was this quality! The voice acting is clearly spoken and feels like it was professionally recorded which is a huge plus!
The bullying scene in the girl's bathroom with the MC was probably the best scene in the game in my opinion. It was fun, interesting, and well written.
The game does have a good amount of content.
The dev really needs to re-do all the animations in the game and fix the x-ray vision bug. If he keeps the story interesting and fixes these two issues it is really a 4 star game.
In the game's defense, the dev does slowly improve things in later versions. The prologue really needs to be fixed and improved. It left a bad impression.
There are two significant problems with the game (aside from most things being average):
#1 - The animations are too fast and don't feel natural because of it. They desperately need to be slowed down by at least 50%. Real people don't move this fast. The problem is compounded by the low frame rate of the animations. They are not only too fast, but quite choppy. Animations need to be at least 20 FPS to look good in my opinion. Between these two problems, it really ruined most of the lewd scenes for me!
#2 - There is a pretty big bug with the x-ray vision scenes. If you save your game while in x-ray vision mode and then hit the 'Return' button from the 'Save Game' menu, half the time you will be in permanent x-ray vision mode with no way to get out of it. When this bug occurs, the screen will never change but the dialog will. I was starring at the same screen of my nude mother all the way through the event where I go to the grocery store and purchase food for my mother. The same bug occurred two other times during the game. The only way to fix it is to quit the game completely, restart the game, and load a save game. I've never experienced this bug with any other Ren'Py game and I've played a lot of them!
I'm generally not a fan of mind control type lewd scenes. It feels like a cheap way of bypassing the corruption element through good writing (the best method). I prefer two willing partners without the use of mind control, drugs, magic, and other means. The best stories, in my opinion, are those with believable corruption that occurs through good story events and great writing! In the game's defense, the corruption magic used is only a "push" and not true mind control.
The voice acting was a nice touch and few games have it (I mean very few), but too many of the lines are poorly acted. It is like reading a line of text with no context, emotion, or feeling. Approximately 25% of the voice acting was good to great, I just wish all of it was this quality! The voice acting is clearly spoken and feels like it was professionally recorded which is a huge plus!
The bullying scene in the girl's bathroom with the MC was probably the best scene in the game in my opinion. It was fun, interesting, and well written.
The game does have a good amount of content.
The dev really needs to re-do all the animations in the game and fix the x-ray vision bug. If he keeps the story interesting and fixes these two issues it is really a 4 star game.
In the game's defense, the dev does slowly improve things in later versions. The prologue really needs to be fixed and improved. It left a bad impression.