Wallaky77

Newbie
Game Developer
Jun 24, 2017
17
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is there a chance we can get an update download instead of the whole thing every time ?
In this version, no sorry. But the next time i will make one. I made a lot of modification and i didn't make just an upgrade version. Sorry
 

at16908

Newbie
Mar 21, 2017
42
39
Hey Wallaky77, I'm having trouble running your game on my computer - are there some sort of system or program requirements necessary to get it to function? None of my browsers seem to be able to get passed the initial screen with the "accept" buttons.
 

Davox

Well-Known Member
Jul 15, 2017
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Like to context, but its too early in development to give a proper review

My 2 main points would be

1) As most people have said get a native english speaker on board. No idea how hard it is to edit text but I feel if it was all laid out in say a word document I could fix most of it in 10 minutes.

2) The hyper links that have circles around them need to have the whole circle as the hyperlink not just the text, I clicked in the circle a few times and saw the green highlight but it didn't trigger the hyperlink as I hadn't clicked on the text.
 

Wallaky77

Newbie
Game Developer
Jun 24, 2017
17
111
Hey Wallaky77, I'm having trouble running your game on my computer - are there some sort of system or program requirements necessary to get it to function? None of my browsers seem to be able to get passed the initial screen with the "accept" buttons.
Twine + SugarCube based games use your web-browser's Local Storage area to store the game's data. That warning message is indicating either:
1. You are using a web-browser (old version or non-mainstream brand) that doesn't support Local Storage.
SOLUTION: Update your web-browser or change to one that does.

2. Your web-browser (like some Microsoft ones) doesn't allow local viewed HTML files to access Local Storage.
SOLUTION: Change to one that does.

3. You are using a privacy mode (eg. Privacy, Incognito, Disabled Cookies) that is restricting access to Local Storage.
SOLUTION: Don't use that mode when viewing HTML files created by Twine.
 

Wallaky77

Newbie
Game Developer
Jun 24, 2017
17
111
Like to context, but its too early in development to give a proper review

My 2 main points would be

1) As most people have said get a native english speaker on board. No idea how hard it is to edit text but I feel if it was all laid out in say a word document I could fix most of it in 10 minutes.

2) The hyper links that have circles around them need to have the whole circle as the hyperlink not just the text, I clicked in the circle a few times and saw the green highlight but it didn't trigger the hyperlink as I hadn't clicked on the text.
Sorry jist the text reacts on clicking.
 

at16908

Newbie
Mar 21, 2017
42
39
Well, thanks for replying but I just checked the settings in three browsers: all are updated, have local storage enabled, and are not being viewed in privacy mode so I guess that's that. No other twine game I've played seems to have this problem.
 

Wallaky77

Newbie
Game Developer
Jun 24, 2017
17
111
Well, thanks for replying but I just checked the settings in three browsers: all are updated, have local storage enabled, and are not being viewed in privacy mode so I guess that's that. No other twine game I've played seems to have this problem.
Sorry to hear that :(
 

rykdragon

Member
May 3, 2017
253
326
I like the game and models(milf whit big tits and ass) line is kinky I like that too. I found few bugs. If you go to to the police station he gave us same mission and send you to the DİV and you stuck there. If you arrasted you offer that girl(I forgot her name) when you goto your house you stuck again. If you visit Susan at her cell, you stuck there too.

Few things; You capture Susan after that she newer talk there is no line for her. I want to hear her oppinion and see her mind breaking. You train her at the play room but income newer rises. I want to see more events whit girls and if we talk about Susan after captured her we saw only mindless gifs, it needs a lines about complaint about him, slowly corrupted... I hope we will see that. Good luck whit this game it has a potention.
 

Wallaky77

Newbie
Game Developer
Jun 24, 2017
17
111
I like the game and models(milf whit big tits and ass) line is kinky I like that too. I found few bugs. If you go to to the police station he gave us same mission and send you to the DİV and you stuck there. If you arrasted you offer that girl(I forgot her name) when you goto your house you stuck again. If you visit Susan at her cell, you stuck there too.

Few things; You capture Susan after that she newer talk there is no line for her. I want to hear her oppinion and see her mind breaking. You train her at the play room but income newer rises. I want to see more events whit girls and if we talk about Susan after captured her we saw only mindless gifs, it needs a lines about complaint about him, slowly corrupted... I hope we will see that. Good luck whit this game it has a potention.
The mind breaking will be at the cells, in the next update.
 
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Wallaky77

Newbie
Game Developer
Jun 24, 2017
17
111
I like the game and models(milf whit big tits and ass) line is kinky I like that too. I found few bugs. If you go to to the police station he gave us same mission and send you to the DİV and you stuck there. If you arrasted you offer that girl(I forgot her name) when you goto your house you stuck again. If you visit Susan at her cell, you stuck there too.

Few things; You capture Susan after that she newer talk there is no line for her. I want to hear her oppinion and see her mind breaking. You train her at the play room but income newer rises. I want to see more events whit girls and if we talk about Susan after captured her we saw only mindless gifs, it needs a lines about complaint about him, slowly corrupted... I hope we will see that. Good luck whit this game it has a potention.
Thaks the feedback. :) Just the html file
 

timepants

God of Time (and Pants)
Donor
Game Developer
May 12, 2017
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6,603
It has potential, but it need to be cleaned up writing wise.
 

kronmar

Member
Sep 30, 2018
154
81
Never been a fan of using real porn images. It never really fits to the game. The only time it ever worked for me was back in the 90s I played this game that the actors specifically played roles for and that worked out well. But just grabbing porn to fit to the games text is jarring.
It works when you stay consistent with the same actors, eg. Janet being Janet all the time.
 

Shrekteroni

Newbie
Oct 30, 2018
23
90
How much gay content is there? I haven't played it, but I looked through the images and didn't see anything. Is this a "and you were raped in prison" kind of thing?
 
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Fanley

New Member
Jan 7, 2018
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Hey Wallaky77, I'm having trouble running your game on my computer - are there some sort of system or program requirements necessary to get it to function? None of my browsers seem to be able to get passed the initial screen with the "accept" buttons.
I had the same problem until I realised it was not a real button. You need to click on the link inside of it. Right on the text.
 
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