HTML - Abandoned - The Bad Side [v0.04] [Wa77aky]

First you are just clicking NEXT for 5 minutes then you have a bunch of choices and locations which make no sense to you. The story you were introduced is quite... unbelievable. Text formatting is terrible. This game is basically too much effort with no real plan. I would recommend Dev to start over with a real plan/chart.

So I've played through a big portion of the game I feel, and this is what I think of it so far.

ENGLISH/GRAMMAR- Absolutely Horrible. It was very obvious that none of it was proof read, and some areas of text were completely unreadable. 1/10

STORY- Poorly written, low quality, too fast, and most of all doesn't make any real sense. It's funny to me that this is supposed to be a sort of "revenge story", yet it falls flat on it's face within the first 5 minutes. You start off as an officer with a beautiful wife, stepdaughter, co-workers, and boss, when out of no where some random senior investigator has you arrested, thrown in jail, beaten to a pulp, and sentenced to prison for 5 years. He also cucks you within the first 5 minutes with your boss, and is probably cucking you with everyone else you know during the 5 years you're in the slammer. From what I see you never see your wife or daughter again, and to top it all after you get out of jail you're just like "fuck it, lets go rape some shit".

Let me remind you that this all happens within 5 minutes of you getting in the game. After that, you get a house with a bunch of slave training rooms from some random chick that basically says "hey, go ham" and then BOOM, you have giant a slave den. While I don't mind the slave den itself, the writing so far, along with the fact that you can't even use most of the rooms or equipment makes it very sad and lackluster indeed. After that there isn't much else to comment on story wise as it's mainly just you trying to find people to fuck and enslave, if you fail you have to then pay money, and if you can't do that then you either get cucked, or fucked in the ass. Overall this game seems like its a "revenge game" but really it just tries to fuck you over again and again. 2/10

GAMEPLAY- Also not great, grindy as hell and not fun in the slightest. Like I said before, you can't really do much with your house either. It could be the developer wants this game to be very sandbox like, hence the story not being very in depth, but overall he's done a poor job of it. Also I see this game has quite a bit of NTR and I don't see any way to avoid it. Meaning you're stuck seeing it at some point. 1/10

SEX SCENES- This is one of the only things that I can give at least some points. They aren't the greatest, but not the worst I've seen. The biggest problem with the sex scenes themselves I see is the writing for them could be expanded a bit more for them and they could be decent, but that doesn't really matter much as everything else wrong with the game make getting a sex scene not fun and not enjoyable. Even if the writing was expanded upon for sex scenes, the writing itself would probably be shit and the sex scenes still wouldn't be enough to save this game from every other pitfall. 5/10

FOOTNOTES- Overall I hope this game becomes better than it currently is. Though so far, to anyone who reads this review. This game isn't worth your time in it's current state.

I have a weak spot for real porn games and will pretty much try all of them.
I appreciate that the author actually tries to create something entertaining for degenerates like us.
But this is just a huge construction site. 90% of the locations in the game end in placeholders or blackscreens. Some scripted parts don't properly finish and loop over and over. Considering this is 3 gigs in size and basically has no content boggles my mind.

My advice to the creator is to only implement locations that have a reason to be there at this point of development and ensure that the stuff that is actually there functions properly.

Tried not to pile on shitting on the game text, but


"Dear John!

I was sorry to hear you were in jai, but if i know you will be releasednow. I know your wife and daughter moved out of their house, but i also know that you will go there first, so i put the letter there.

I'm sure you don't know who i am, but i can't tell you much. just ask you to go to the adress on the back of the letter. There you will find a house, use it boldly and dicsover it freely, I'm sure you will like it. You will find instructions on what to do next.

I suggest you go there and follow the instructions, if you want to know who made your life ruined.

Have a nice day and then i will contact you if the time comes.

Your sincerely Wa77aky!"

Even the spelling is terrible. The plot is half-assed, and its a super grindy buggy game that isn't fun. Hell the major plot doesn't even advance. For some reason you have a wife and a kid and then you never see them again.

As for the management aspect of the game, it's just clicking busy work. $ is rng and features such as sleep and energy are optional- you could go into the negative -1000% and have no effect on the game. There is no real upgrade system and hitting the money benchmarks to see more content is stale and boring. There is no reason to gather more characters as the ones you do have work to infinity and have more options.

This game as of v0.031 is a chore. Don't waste your time.

This game is in dire need of a complete re-write. As it is now, it is not readable, thus rendering the game unplayable. I understand that the author may not have English as their primary language. If that is the case, they need to get someone to edit the entire work before the next release.

I found the concept of a police officer being thrown in jail for allegedly not filling a form out correctly completely unrealistic. If you want the officer to go to jail for something they didn't do, have the officer framed for a real crime. I'm sure there are enough police shows out there that can provide a few examples to copy.

To top it off, the game is way too large of a download.

Gotta say one of the best foundations for a Management-Trainer game I have ever seen. The game currently features very shallow amount of content but that is expected from a first release. There is a lot of Gifs and pics for every scene which definitely earns a star for me, seems like the author is going for quality over quantity which I really appreciate

Personally I see a lot of potential in this one and will keep an eye on it!

PS: As a constructive opinion please add different color for the text said by the narrator/storyteller as it was a little confusing when I read it for the first time.