VN - Ren'Py - The Big Step [v0.5] [Partedes]

First of all I'm not fan of 3dcg and definitely don't like female protagonist, also story is pretty generic BUT the dev is aware of one thing: he is making Hgame. Not wasting time with B grade rpg mechanics or stupidly complicated choice based progression... just making hot scenes and he is doing good. Hopefully he won't lose his focus. Phasing is also good atm no need to rush things to kill slow burn and make people short term satisfied or keep dragging around same formula to milk subscribers more. Another thing it excels is, side characters and their scenes are also working , they don't function to linger the story like almost every other games in here. This is a good example how a Hgame should be made.

The only problem that I have with this game is, you don't really have any choices to make. It would be nice if we could choose who gets to be with whom. Otherwise good stuff.

The story progress is fine, you have the traditional "everyone is a degenerate" theme going on, the omega naive girls stepping into a caricature of an adult world. As I said,I would really like to have some choice in this game.

VERSION: v0.5
SUMMARY: Pretty impressive with some new ideas I liked.
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.

1. Model Visuals..................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General Visuals................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐
4. Character (Persona)............... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
5. Story Quality & Pacing............ : ⭐⭐⭐
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue........ : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics...........: ⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & General Quality.........: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
9. Sounds & Music.....................: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
10. H-Content & Fetishes.............. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Most female models and main MC are rather good looking and designed well.
2. General renders and world are nicely fleshed out, and quality is also good.
3. Writing is structured and reads well.
4. Dialogue is good, though cheesey because of the story.
5. Sounds are great, the lewd sounds are good as most of the sounds and music. Though my capitalist mindset is that the dev can add even more especially ambient or environmental sounds.
6. Kinks are good, there are several and some are part of the scene like urination in the bathroom. Pregnancy seems to be a thing also, what else will the dev have in store
7. Play-time is fair and quality of it is good, we can always do with more content, but thats just the song of most players. Quality though is good and that matters over quanitity anyway.

CONS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Story is pretty much nonsense, but works well for this corruption setting and how the AVN is structured. So not a CON, but not a good story in terms of intrique or complexity.
2. Opacity setting for the dialogue box would be nice, as it improves the UX.
3. Some choices seem to be there for sake of messing with the player more than functional, this is because it seems the main FMC is not corrupted enough to act on the choice, but why have it then?

OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)

• The corruption driver of this game is pretty good, the MC and some of the other characters being shy and naive fuels the players desire to "corrupt" them
• The choices the player gets, that are not accecible is a little jarring. I am sure I chose most if not all of the "naughty" options, this usually nets the most scenes. Still some choices are locked due to, what I can only assume is lack of corruption, but where would I get the corruption points otherwise? Or is this some troll at the player?
• The way the AVN plays is interesting, having not one protagonist but multiple, at least, thats the first impression you get. When in actual fact the actual MC is YOU the player, who gets to shape several of the characters during your playthrough. This i found the most enjoyable and I really enjoyed the developers way of interacting with the characters. The most interesting or best is the way the player "talks" to the FMC, the actual main character. During the gloryhole scene there is a moment where the 4th wall gets broken and the FMC reacts to the players desires which is actually brilliant!

TLDR:

Pretty impressive AVN here, it does most things a corruption game does, but what it does that is very good and unique is how it pulls in the player directly, especially the primary FMC interaction with the player. Otherwise here are some decent kinky stuff and some fun elements to this AVN. I highly recommend to support it.

A very good corruption game. The different threads of the story get a bit jumbled towards the end, and I lost interest in the whole 'possessed by a goddess' story, but all in all the story is hot, well written and with decent renders.

this DEV knows how to make a good VN, that include good and unique characters, u feel the eroticism, plenty of sexy scenes and plenty of girls. but its the main girl that is the best. naive and hot. surely theres this "all dudes are perverts" but so far its not extreme, its done well. and hopefully it stay in this level. comparing with other VN this need 5 stars as most "similar" VN on this site are not at that level, they can learn from this DEV.

Brilliant game!
An easy 10/10 for me.
Story, characters, humor, scenes are just perfect.
Do yourself a favour and not just play it but absorb it and follow it.
So far there haven't been too long a wait between updates which shows the dev is passionate about their project.

Wow, this game is almost perfect. Extremely naïve gal, sometimes oblivious to the point of retardation, but even though its not the most realistic scenario, the writing is just so good, that you just sink in, reading everything and playing from start to finish (The only scene I skipped was the lesbian scene with the redhead girl and the black one, it was just pointless and unattractive).

Also standing out are the top notch renders, and of course the two main protagonists who are extremely hot, Samantha and Aleksandra...

Btw, DID I say that I really loved the writing?! The dave is so humorous for example, the blond is getting cum all over her face, and suddenly its all slow motion, and the music score is the sound of silence by Simon and Garfunkel. These are the things which clearly prove that this is infect art, and a game which gives its players complete entertainment.

Thank you Dave, you have my support and gratitude. Please continue to go with your craziness, listen to yourself, you know what you are doing, it is your creation.

This is the one of the best games I have played so far, excellent characters, different personalities and a lot of kinky stuff along the story, slowly granted corruption game where we can expect a lot in terms of story and renders. this is definitely a must try game!

Hmm....i like the game and to see how Sam got step for step self-reliant is fun. She is a little naive but not too naive ( like the scene with the painter and dont drink the coke ) and i think the like slowly the attention from all ( girls and boys ) imao the scene with cherry in the toilet too fast or Sam is curious . I hope Alexandra ( i dont think they is the bitch if they showing off ) ) help Sam or Sam help Alexandra ( and a girl/girl action between this hot girls and perhaps her sexy teacher too are a dream ) I like Sam is innocent but it is simple with words they believe all ( it is a shame i think Sam is more clever to see the truth but on the other side they is more curious and will things do like with her mother a other relationship ) So, the humour in this game is good ( like eating the pizza with the special sacuce , thinking the first gropping customer eat a piece too , a revenge from Sam ) , i like it, the art and the story is good. But honestly, the scene with the painter and the lotion with hypnose , so boring, better if Sam is willing to do things with him by her own choice imao. I hope in the future they change not in a slut like in other games but Sam like to have sex with girls and man or they find true love with the gym owner ( or perhaps with Alexandra but i know it is sad because it is not mainstream ) I think Sam can be a true girlfriend with Alexsandra because Sam has a big heart is not lukewarm like Alex other friends.

I reviewed version 0.3: this has great visuals and a good story. Can't wait for the next update. Gallery images do not do it justice, images get way better (and hotter) very soon into the game/novel. Choices are currently limited so it's more a VN than a game (not a problem imho, but just so you know what to expect).

Very strong start with a decent amount of content for it being v.3. Good corruption game a decent amount of different likable characters. Definitely worth a try if you're looking for a corruption game. Story is decent as well.

Partedes really understood the assignment. Best developer by far in my books. Can't wait to see what's next in this. The slow burn is incredible so far with still decent content. Different types of girls for many tastes. Just incredible job so far.

How can I even start? About a game haven't finished yet, and not have the top quality render overall?
First is the writing in this game is neutral - very good when you compare with another "Corruption-genre". Sometime it's force but that's how you compromise to cause the "scene" happen. For me, it's never a weak point, just don't rush it too much. Building emotions is how you get ppls enjoy a porn game, dev do a good job.
Second is how you see in the game, not one POV but 2 - that's make the feel change in the game, in a good way. Especially when it's connect with time.
Third is how this game is not grindy at all, thing happen and they gave you choices. There is no corruption points system to make the game artificially longer.

If the game continue to this direction - it's surely my best game this year.

Partedes is seriously one of my favorite authors ever.
It's like every word written is meticulously designed to give you the biggest boner of your life
And don't even get me started on the visuals - Artistry! Pure artistry!
And this game is fun and engrossing and weird in the best way possible.
Looking forward to future updates!

I must say, this is a masterpiece! I am so happy to have found this gem! What is it to like: A large variety of both male and female characters, not the typical plastic stereotypes often seen. A linear story with optouts for the weakhearted (or nonpervs ) instead of parallel branches (at least this is MY preference). A VERY sexy story with a lot of teases, expectations, interruptions and surprising twists. A few animations (quite simple, but it works!). My message to Paredes, who well deserves support, is: keep going, my soul and my body want more!

One of the best new games 2025!

• Girls are very good looking and hot.
• The plot is really good and very promissing.
• Pretty funny dialogs and pictures.

I personally can't wait to see another episode!

I really like the characters and the graphics. Epecially the main character. The story ist not very new, but it has interesting turn. BUT - I think the corruption of the characters happen way to fast (wearing wide clothes and hoodies at the beginning aund beeing fine to wearing skimpy clothes and feeling fine beeing touched by several man two days later). I prefer a slow proggress of corruption.

[v0.2] It got a lot of constellation ideas yet fluctuates between good ones and stupid porn logic – it isn't composed. MC's starting point is the angel trope, therefore you can stretch the corruption and create a high contrast, however, just about every character turns out to be a pervert ... so that was that.

+ funny moments, especially with Emma and how she lost her V-card
+ Vic - the pussy "collector"
+ small MMF scene, better than nothing!
+ future BBC content looks promising
+ glory hole!
+ simple corruption story without walls of boring text and unnecessary drama
+ 4 different POVs. I would say we have 4 FMCs
+ generally game is not boring. I didn't feel the urge to hit alt +f4 and move on

- cocblocking
- music appears randomly only few times during the game, also doesn't suit most of the scenes
- no gallery
- a bit disappointing teasing/seduction

Not a lof of content yet, but game has potential for amazing gangbang scenarios. Waiting for Sam and other girls to become really slutty.. 4 stars

Starts good enough but soon evolves into old, fat and ugly perverts after young girls. F95 seriously needs Ugly Bastards tag so I can avoid it. Still a good effort, nice renders, good verity of boob sizes and different types of beauty. Humor is bit over the top and gets tireing after a while. Here's hoping for less ugly pervs. I'll give it 3* for now.