VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Breaker [v0.5.1] [Corrupt King]

i liked it very much, maybe sometimes it was too fast of a meet and fuck but not for every character, i really loved the breast expansion scene, there s not many games out there that use it with that level of hugeness and with her (the little sister) it seems to be at a ok-level of dialogue; can t wait for next updates and more breast expansion scene

This is a pretty good game if you like the premise. Hscenes are pretty hot and set up well. There's not a whole lot of build before an Hscene but I don't mind at all. You'll meet a girl and within 5 mins you'll fuck her. Not super realistic but it's a porn game so who cares. But besides that, the story is pretty entertaining.

I will say this game is missing two big things and that's a gallery and music and/or sound. The game is completely silent and would be so much better with sound, even just background music. Also, there is no gallery which is a shame.

Apparently, all the art in the game is stolen. I really don't care at all. I want to give this game a 4/5 but I'll give it a 5/5 to balance out the reviews getting mad about the stolen art.

This was pretty lame. Just reading reading reading, no choice at all.
and it's all about fucking as many fat ladies as possible.

even making a small loli into a fat grown up.

I did give it a chance it seemed interesting. but.. come on.. it's not even original art.


Weird.... that's what I think if this game.

Pros:

1- The artwork, but of course, it was made by professionals after all.
2- The English, while cringe-inducing at times, is fairly well written.

Cons:

1- Story is the usual fuck-fest one, the protagonist is an ex-convict who was involved in human trafficking and drug-dealing, the first thing he wants to do after his liberation is to fuck some girls, from there on you can already guess the direction this will go.
2- Characters, unlike their original counterparts, have barely any build-up, they meet and a little time afterwards they fuck, that's it.
3- The assets are misplaced at times, making for a very jarring experience.

kinda fucked up but effective and satisfying smut/porn game.

8.3 out of 10 : visuals - could be better but still feels attractive/gets the job done, personally i like more rendering where it looks more 3d (like warlock and boobs is a great example or my girlfriend is a naughty teacher)

8.1 out of 10 : erotic context/story - story/situations mostly adds to the visuals

8.8 out of 10 : pacing - great opening scene, good follow thru into following scenes. look forward to updates and hope the game builds up into a powerful climax/ending content.

9.7 out of 10 : grind/barrier to content - almost none

overall 9.2 out of 10

P.S. if i can make one personal criticism, the younger sister character pre-transformation had kinda a disgusting looking vagina and stuff. felt kinda like a hiccup in the game but post-transformation she was a pretty good character.

There not many game i actually legit want to pay for an there was one it was so hard to get it started mainly cause i know some of your very talented artist do it to do it and that wat i love about this game and you then again i just love the game so much to it that i cant wait to see it grow

Awesome game, great art and finally a game not for soy boys. It's still a bit short but what is there is good fun. The author should beware of splitting the game into too many different paths - multiplies the work he's gotta do.

For me I am really Enjoying the game sore far and I hope there is more to come. while I know some people are not a fan other peoples art being used I really don't mind if it is done well(which it is) plus I really like the art of those Japanese visual novels, but I tend to find it that I do not enjoy the pace and gameplay of them, so for me with this game I get to experience the art in a more enjoyable package for me.

v0.2 review

Wanna wank to stolen art? This might do it for you.

Otherwise give it a pass.

Pros
- The english language is well done and while the dialogue is at times cringeworthy, it's all fairly well written.
- The game doesn't make you wait for fapping material, you get into it right away, plot be damned. (also a con depending on your point of view)
- The art (another pro / con) while appearing as if it might be stolen and sometimes not logically following other art styles in the game, is all well done.

Cons
- Plot, or lack there of. I'm a bad guy, im gonna fuck chicks and give them drugs rararararar.
- unrelatable characters. Tying into the plot none of the characters follow any real world consistency at all. "Hi we just met, fuck me 85 times in a night with your horse dick, cum in my married cheating slut womb, then fuck my giant cow tits please!"
- not so much a game as just a visual novel / wank fest. It wouldn't be too bad if you could set the game on auto with a very fast read speed and then slow it down for the sex scenes, but that's not how it works. Thankfully there's not a WHOLE lot of plot that's not related to fucking anyways.


Ultimately this isn't a bad visual novel in any way at all. It just needs to reach the right audience, that of someone looking to be the ultimate bad guy type stud who cucks everyone and randomly transforms, corrupts, and fucks every woman he meets. It's also just not very good over all.

Give it a shot if the tags appeal to you, you might like it.

PROS:

+Okay storytelling. Story has potential, albeit very generic.
+Adult scenes are okay. The scenes are considerably good even factoring the several issues that i will state in the CONS section below.
+Gameplay is okay. I played v0.1 at the writing of this review; and as far as i can see, the developer seems to be aiming for a standard visual novel game where there is little no none versatility given to players for gameplay. You are following the developer's novel.
+There's a variety of girls to choose from and a variety of kinks included.
+If you're looking for a quick wank, this game is for you

CONS:

Oh boy, here we go....

-Characters and designs are great. Wait... "Why is this in the cons section?" you might ask. That is because almost all assets of this game are either stolen or ripped. You can tell by the differing artsyle and on every character and the blatant recoloring of hair and skin of the characters in several scenes. If you also look closely you could see where the developer just pasted the MC's face on an existing model (watch the neck and jawline of the H-scenes), and the obvious censored and uncensored adult scenes. The artsyle and character is great because it is from another game or an already existing CGI comic.
-I understand that the MC is the way he is due to the concept of the game. But it is really hard to relate to a convicted criminal charged for human trafficking and drug dealing who is also a massive sexual predator.
-Dialogues are eye rollers
-Game is very silent. There's no hint of music and SFX.
-If you're not into Corruption, this game might be jarring for you
-If you're not into NTR or Cheating, this game might be jarring for you
-If you're looking for a well-deserved awaited wank, after investing time in story/characters playing, this game isn't for you

I might be biased on this review because i'm an artist myself. What i absolutely hate more than people stealing art and not giving credit and recognition to the original artist, are people who blatantly edit them and then proceeds to claim it as their own. The artist/developer obviously has talent, that i can very much tell. He can obviously recolor skin and hair to a believable degree and adjust lighting and shadows realistically, but why he chose to rip already made art and characters as assets for his game and not just create his own, that i do not know.

That's pretty much my problem with this game. Other than that, the story, gameplay, and overall vibes of this game is going on a good direction.

2/10 I have a lot of issues with this game but it has potential.

Good artstyle
not bad story
I liked the way the story was put together but still in a game there should be options to choose from

Many people talk about this art to be copied and I don't know from who or where
I think every game is unique so therefor I rate this game 7/10

Nice art and fun history.
The game is still poor in content but as it is the first version can be tolerated, but we will see the next updates ,
the game still needs to be better developed, but for the beginning of development it's ok

Gonna give this 5 stars to balance out the rating a little as I'd hate either the developer to become discouraged and stop the development or people see the low rating and not give this game a try. The game is by the developers own admission far closer to a kinetic novel than a visual novel so the lack of decisions is forgivable especially for an early version of the game. I personally find the story to be very funny (no idea if that was intended), as I enjoy the absurdity of the main character being simultaneously one of the worst possible criminals in the world and still being able to leave prison and immediately fuck any women he wants 5 seconds after meeting them. The art is taken from others games yes, but seeing as the creator doesn't appear to be taking any patreon or any other sort of revenue from others peoples art its again forgivable as far as i'm concerned. The developers should probably just add a little bibliography or reference list of all the games art used and it should be fine so long as they aren't profiting off others work. Would rate it 3.5 - 4 stars off this first release but I want balance out the rating as i said.

TLDR: It's a pretty crazy and funny story about a criminal taking over a small town through corrupting most the women off of pure plot convenience alone, worth a go if you're just looking for a little bit of fun escapism.

You shouldn't take the art form other hentai game, shame on you whoever makes this game. If you think no one will notice, then you were wrong. Make your own game dammit. If anyone plays this because you like the arts, I recommend finding the original source material.

The character's are terrible cliches and there's simply no game. You can watch this entire thing in like 90 seconds by simply clicking. There is no engagement at all. Additionally, I'm pretty sure the dude says he was in prison for human trafficking.