It's still an early release, but this game has potential. There are a bunch of things that are really well done in this VN, but there are a couple of things preventing me from giving the game a higher score (though with a little polishing, this could easily jump up a star or potentially two).
PROs:
* The renders are good and the girls are all quite attractive (though I'm not a huge fan of the sister's look, but that's 100% personal preference and not a judgment of the dev's rendering). I haven't noticed any weird facial expressions or odd body positioning, which can be found in a lot of games.
* The writing is for the most part error free, with good English and spelling. I tend to be a little OCD with that stuff, so I was happy to not encounter any jarring mistakes or typos.
* The MC is not a creepy pervert, an asshole, or an idiot. He comes across as a pretty normal, decent guy. Having the MC's sister, mother, and aunt as LIs is obviously far from original, but in too many similar games, MC is constantly creeping on his relatives, coercing them into sex acts, or sexually assaulting them in their sleep. There is none of that so far in this game, thankfully. He inadvertently catches a few peeks here and there, but isn't a creep about it, and is not spying on anyone.
* Similarly, the MC's relationship with his sister is refreshingly normal. In most games of this genre, the sister is either a raging bitch or painfully naïve and childish, but MC's sister is neither. The relationship isn't adversarial or creepy, which is a big plus.
* The story is clearly going to be a slow burn. There is only one "sex scene" (which I will get to shortly), and it's obvious there is going to be a lot of story/relationship development before MC starts getting sexual with the LIs. I prefer this to having sex scenes thrown in early and often with no buid-up.
Now for the CONs:
* Although the writing is clear and mostly error-free, the conversations between characters are often awkward. They aren't cringey or uncomfortable per se, but they don't often seem to flow smoothly or feel like natural conversation. This is really a minor quibble, as a little polishing could easily fix this.
* There are, however, a few dialogues which are needlessly repetitive. It gets tiring to read MC and his Mom repeatedly criticizing the sister for liking to read. Having the MC tease her about her reading at the beginning is fine- it doesn't need to be repeated over and over. Similarly, the Mom's conversations with the Aunt are all basically minor variations of the same conversation: the Mom has a secret which has caused her to develop a drinking problem, her husband doesn't believe whatever the secret is, and she wants to be honest with her kids and tell them about it, so they will understand why she's been acting like such a dick. I don't know why this same conversation needs to be repeated over and over. It's not like the reader is going to forget, and honestly these dialogues start to feel like filler.
* Lastly, my biggest issue with the game, and the primary thing keeping me from giving it a higher score, is the last scene in this update (Episode 2): the dream scene. One of my absolute biggest pet peeves in these games is when random sex dream sequences are inserted unnecessarily into the game. The scene comes out of nowhere, has no connection to the story or characters, and feels like the dev just wanted to shoehorn some type of sex into the episode. I'd much prefer there be no sex scene at all than a random dream scene like this.
By and large, this feels like it could turn into a very solid VN with only minor polishing.