VN - Ren'Py - The Cursed Camera [v0.3] [Glass Prison Games]

The Cursed Camera .3

UGH. Had to FF through a lot of S*&&
1 more dev treats MALE MC like DIRT every chance he gets! (forced FEMDOM [NOT TAGGED], MC mind control, more)
Relationship Dialog needs work.
[Example: "Julia (Julia (mom)) Ooooh mistress... I cannot... he's my-"]
Occurs many times w many chars
Also needs humiliation tag;
"imposing will doesn't matter" [choices have no effect]

MC should be Mind controlling someone *ELSE*, not some NPC MindC him.
2* (only b/c decent pics, I've seen much worse...)

It's a good start. I hope it gets regular updates since it does have potential. The first posting is a little short, but it is pretty engaging.. I'll wait and see how the next postings are. Fingers crossed.

One of the better Avns i enjoy. Good story with high quality scenes. Can't ask much more from a avn. Thank you for updating and keep up the good work! Hot chicks with a variety of choices on who you want to court. Win win!

great visuals, intriguing story, interested to see how the branching works but would like clarity on the "cheating" and "swinging" aspect. Hoping MC is the master of his domain and there isn't (or is avoidable) ntr.

so far, 2nd release is on point.

The first version is very promissing. There are some issue that need to be fixed, but the developer is serious in listening to users and solving these.
I love the premises of this game and look forward to playing more of it.

Good:
Story is coherent. Visuals are good enough.

Bad:
MC is handsome man, but has mental state of a teen creep. Rare game where i dislike the MC.
Story has no interesting hook. MC just moves from one shitty situation to another.
Most of the other characters act like young teens. Other characters were so annoying that i didn´t care if they would be dead in next picture. Lots of sexy pictures could have kept me interested, but there wasn´t enough.

So pervert MC use magic to make his family a sex slaves -story. +mandatory mafia/FBI. 2/5