VN - Ren'Py - The Dance with Fire [v0.0.3] [MoonFire Games]

While the game is still obviously at a very early stage it has a graphical style that is a bit different from other things I have seen out there so I gave it a fair shot. I like Ava and the girls, the bar wench being my favorite so far. The story shows promise. I recommend giving it a look at the very least.

I tried it. It was a very boring narration, and after two minutes I just started scrolling through the entire text. The models are terrible. In my opinion, there are too many unnecessary elections. The only plus is lesbian content.

Brief review of version 0.0.1

- I will not mince words. I understand and appreciate the work that was done, but it needs more attention to detail.
- Some examples: Floating wine(?) glass in the room; Piano scale and legs, the whole piano thing really; the grip on the swords, both the angles and the hand positions; the disappearing hammer; mentions of a cape that doesn't exist; Crimson banners that are white............. these are just the obvious ones.
- Graphics are maybe not the strongest part of this (the maybe is just to soften the blow). The hairs are atrocious. The images are way too grainy. I could go on, but, nah...
- The story. Well, it's nice and all, but we haven't really progressed.
- The writing style isn't bad, but, since it goes into details the graphics don't show, it becomes an antagonist instead of a participant.

All in all, I'd grade this 1 in 5. The one single point is for the Lesbian scene, even as poorly done as it was. That "thing" they squirted... come on...

This is only the very early beginning. But so far, the game is very promising! Nice renders, good guidanvce of the user and most of all (at least for me) a dating sim with female protagonist and lesbian content. If you take into consideration that this is very early on and you like female protagonist dating sims with lesbian content,m then this game is for you!