V1.0 (like a version number means much as some go from 0.1 to 0.9 and then to 0.10 hahahaha yeah they failed math those cheeky chappies who code)
mc is sweet or sweetheart but mostly sweaty?
i mean i am all for inclusion but having an MC with a body fluid issue is a little out there
few times the wrong person speaks, which is a little immersion breaking, like the missing words where you have to guess the right one (which is the game part i guess?).
kinetic tag is also required
being able to full screen preview the images would be nice.
otherwise it's not bad. not trying to be more than it is and doing those basics well enough. seems organic so might be either decent writer or actually real convo that may have been converted or just real. who knows? who cares? incest is just an added spice like pepperoni on your cheese pizza......unless it involves any of my real family, which is not an exciting prospect.
trust me on this as i have seen them. not saying big but widescreen vision is a requirement.
the ugly tree got a wicked amount of hits in as we all fell out of that tree too.
a little care on the typing and coding and this could be a solid learner's project.
i definitely get a sense that it could be the cause of a few jackson pollock fanarts
my screen is already dripping with my latest.....
