VN - HTML - The Diary [Ch.1.01] [AyanaFujisawa]

  1. 5.00 star(s)

    DigiurgeCreations

    Classic cult episode of Cool Devices (Yellow Star) Reimagined in a VN, much props to the creator for bringing this classic back to life in their own way. While I agree that the artwork isn't up to par with the original, it still suffices and Ayana is by far one of my favorite hentai/anime characters of all time with her innocent schoolgirl (pigtail/uniform) vibe and her big teen tits being not out of the realm of realistic, but big enough to fulfil big tit fetishes.

    My points of opinion:

    1. Fantastic! The creator of the VN added a prologue that comes full circle at the end of version 1.1, leaving us with a cliffhanger that has us wanting to see this continued. This prologue was not part of the original.

    2. The creator of the VN takes us through the original story, but makes some additions (as in the backseat of the car scene) and extras that you don't get in the original OVA, keeping it fresh and interesting.

    3. The game shows multiple perspectives (so far only we only get one) which will add to the depth of the experience once the other perspectives are completed.

    4. With only Chapter 1, the VN offers enough content to leave you full satisfied with the promise of much more to come!

    5. Although the sex scenes are extended and done, some things are left out of the original in the VN that I would have liked to see, while other things such as her pain are described, which makes it realistic, but I would have liked to see the aphrodisiac of the yellow star become more obvious, along with her acceptance of the feelings of pleasure where she actually begins to enjoy things rather than just despising the acts being done to her. Do this, while maintaining her reluctance, and you have a recipe for enjoyment, as rape isn't everyone's cup of tea, including myself. If she wasn't such a great character, then I'd probably pass on this game without her actually enjoying it. So to the creator, perhaps add in the aphrodisiac aspect and her enjoying it reluctantly and this will be much better.

    6. While I prefer Renpy for VN's, the HTML is a classic approach and lends to the feel of this being a classic from the past. My main issues with the html version however is the UI overlaps in areas and doesn't allow us to minimize the main menu. You also cannot use the << button, perhaps it is disabled for now? Either way, I prefer Renpy over HTML, but it is still okay.

    7. Nothing better than a continuation of a original masterpiece ended way too shortly. I agree that the original may have left us wanting more, especially in the sex scenes with the animations being poorly done (with two or three images being repeated), but if the creator of the VN can capitalize on improving the sex scenes and animations as well as continue on where the original left off (of course changing the fate of the step fathers end), then we are all LUCKY to have this and all should support this creator in keeping this project alive. Please go subscribe!

    I gave 5 stars instead of 4 because this is truly a project that deserves support and attention as you don't see anyone else continuing or adding to an already cult classic from the past like this. The main character Ayana truly deserves a continuation as she is by far one of my favorite all time characters.

    I do, however, feel like the creator still has some improvements to make. There are a few misspellings and if they could improve some of the animations, then I feel like it would be just that much better.
  2. 2.00 star(s)

    eman85358

    Story: (1)
    Story is very taboo, so if that is for you, go for it. She pretty much just gets raped the entire time.
    Art: (2)
    Art transitions from Hentai to game are pretty decent so i bumped up the star for consistency
    Fun: (1)
    just hit next the entire time. replay-ability is low
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    zedascove

    Good shit. This is how porn games should be written and presented.

    I was definitely not expecting this to be so good because games with that old anime look usually are utter crap, but this one is quality stuff.

    This feels like playing an actual good doujin(which is a rarity because even good doujins are very hard to come by, let alone a good game inspired by one).
  4. 3.00 star(s)

    kinglionheart

    Wow this is nostalgic! Cool Devices was one of the first hentai I ever saw and the Yellow Star episode was the best one. This game is a fan remake of that episode. It has a new prologue, a new ending, and a lot of expanded or new sex scenes. The art seems to be hand-drawn to look like the anime and the story is told mostly through the girl, Aya's POV but it does have other character's POV in certain scenes. The story is generic about a man using drugs to rape and blackmail a girl but is still well-written enough to be enjoyment.

    A lot of enjoyment for me came from knowing the anime. For those who does not know the anime, this game is still good. If you like the game, try find and watching the anime. It is still of the best hentai animes ever made.

    Good
    - Art looks simple but great
    - There are some animations.
    - The story is generic but still enjoyable.

    Bad
    - No sounds
    - The POV change is a annoying. You have to first watch the girl's POV and then you have go back to see the other character's POV.
    - There is scene select or jump to chapter feature. If you want to replay a scene you have to use Previous or Next button to go to change the scene one by one.