VN - Ren'Py - Completed - The Edge Of [v1.0] [Hangover Cat]

Great start so far! I'm a fan of these two stories approach NTRman does it well too. I will check back in on this when it has more updates because for now it is just a taste! 4 stars until it gets further along or consistent updates. keep up the good work bro cant wait to see where this goes.

Drawing: 9/10.
Story: 9/10.
Writing:9/10.

I like it; I like the story ; I wait what will happen next and I hope there will be some choices to make. I love when first play is with protagonist's point of view only so I hope if there is more Cuck or NTR options or it is possible to choose if we want to see the partners point of view.

Drawing: 9/10.
Story: 10/10.
Writing:9/10.
UI: 8/10 (I would do less overlay writing but it is subjective)
Overall: 9/10.

Can't wait what will happen next and I hope there will be some choices to make. I love when first play is with protagonist's point of view only so I hope there is only this option or it is possible to choose if we want to see the partners point of view.
Also would be nice to be able to change names. (If it is already possible, then my bad )

I like the story so far. I like the point of view of the story. There are some minor details to be fixed, like sometimes facial expression does not match the text but not too obviously. I was just said that first update didnt have much content. It ends in a cliffhanger

I am really looking forward to next update.
Keep up the good work.