VN - Ren'Py - The Fall of Camelot: The Betrayal of Guinevere & Lancelot [Part 2] [AllForOne124]

I was totally thrown off by the fact that this isn't even really a game.
You go in expecting some interaction, but it's just a glorified slideshow where you mindlessly click next.
It’s super disappointing when a title is marketed as a game but offers zero player agency; you're just stuck on rails the whole time.
And don't get me started on the audio design, which is unintentionally hilarious.
The sound effects, especially during the climax moments, sound so goofy that they completely ruin the mood.
Trying to get through the story is a test of patience because the writing is just a wall of cringe.
It was so dull and awkward that I found myself mashing the skip button just to get it over with.
The visuals scream "low-effort AI," and the spicy scenes are about as generic as they come.
Everything happens way too fast, so there's no buildup or reason to care about what's going on.
Plus, the way they set up the main character is just weird and off-putting right from the start.
Honestly, it’s not even worth keeping installed for a quick session; just save your bandwidth.

The story is actually pretty well written and got me engaged with the characters and world. The NTR is straightforward but hot, and the art is pretty standard AI stuff that serves its purpose and can hopefully be improved as the game continues development.

What I was most impressed by was the amount of content in this first release, there is actually a really long story here with a full NTR arc included. I've gotten used to VNs with spaced out, minor releases with endless fucking teasing but this one tells a complete story while promising more content as the rest of the legend is told.

I'm really curious what the other parts that are planned are going to focus on, I hope they will keep up with the Guenevere NTR while expanding the world and cast more. I think it helps that the source material is rich and well established, it allows for a lot of NTR themes to play out in creative and interesting ways within the overall story.

Short, yet effective and to the point. And long enough to even feature a decent build-up. I like the setting and the NTR premise. Its actually almost canon

Yes, it is (as HangoverCat calls it) 'Fast Food NTR' - but done in a good way, with a lot of CGs, decent corruption elements and okayish writing. Not a mastapiece but decent enough to have some fun with it. Also its Ai CGs - some have a problem with that - I do not. So that is that.

I am not sure - but if this game is the devs first one, this is the way to go - start small, actually finish stuff, get feedback, become better... Good luck to the dev and his journey.

Ugh, I installed this and got bored of the barrage of cringy text story right away.

I was a little take n aback by the "hero" being small cocked like that and being cucked by Lancelot, but that was about it. You get over it quick.

The art looks AI generated, the story (as much as I could stand to read before madly skipping through it) is quite boring, the sound effeects (especially the cumshot one) are just laughable.

The pace is super fast and you get a lot of sex scenes quickly, but they're very generic so far and nothing standing out about thebedroom scenarios.

Also it's very obviously just an interactive graphic novel than a game, which somehow I didn't expect.

Would give it a miss. Not even good for a quick wank imho.

Honestly, I think the story is well-written; it's not overly complex, but it's to the point and coherent enough to provide a quick, enjoyable time. It's worth noting that this first version has quite a bit of content for a first version; it's possible that it's a short story given the pace of events.
Story: 3.5
Visuals: 4
Pacing: Fast