VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Falling Reloaded [Ch. 6] [WhiteBear]

Cool take of lucifers story but adding more interesting elements and story along the way. character models suddenly look older in recent chapters which is strange since goddesses and angel don't age but willing to accept it since story is solid so far. wonder how azazel and samael will be introduced later and guessing micheal will be the ending arc but the only one we have seen so far is azazel and lilith so we will have to wait and see whats up

so i just played the game and i really liked
the story is good and i love the theme with angels/demons of the story/ the LI beautiful the MC good too , visuals very good
overall its a good vn and it was very enjoyable for me.

im very enjoying this game the story is REALLY COOL it makes me really into the game man with nice graphic also hope this game continue till the end thankyou for making this game really awesome !

Wasted time of my life.
Dev kills the most liked love interest, then forces the player to endure 4 chapters of idiotic highschool drama and porn mansion bullshit, combined with ruining the appearance of the other forced LIs.
Extremely disappointing, especialy with how great the game began.
Graphics are good in the beginning, but get worse over time.
Characters devolve into sitcom-niveau.
Only pro so far: wasn't forced to have sex with a single one of these.
Engrish was manageable.

Quite a great game. it has a lot of action and twists.
The MC and models look very nice.
On the down side not enough sex or any at all I hope the dev makes up for it.

Good Points
+ Story was interesting in the early parts of the game.
+ MC's design is pretty cool/badass.
+ Women/Girls look hot/sexy.

Bad Points
- After the early parts of the game storytelling becomes weak, and it's lost all that interesting vibe.
- The thing about Ghost is quite nonsense and annoying.
- MC was cool at first, but later his character development is kind of ruined, and in the current story he becomes someone unlikeable.
- This game has tons of women/girls, but... Have no sexual content with them at all! The game keeps introducing you to new hot, cute, sexy, girls/women, yet gives you no action with them, all you have is some boring kisses and only one grinding scene... We see tons of scenes where lewd things should happen, tons of scenes MC should have intimacy with the women/girls, yet despite all that tension nothing happens, that just makes no sense. Like seriously there are even scenes where females put their pussy in front of MC like it's nothing... Yet nothing happens... How is that supposed to make any sense?
- This game is two and half years old, and let me tell you it does not even feel like a game developing for a half year, content is not even close to being developed for two and half years at all...
- Despite the game having a lot of problems, like not having any real content at all, DEV does not try to fix the problems, instead, they change existing models to something worse... Makes sense I guess?

For The End
This game is a hot mess... It's pretty clear the game had or still has the potential to become a 4-5 stars rate game, yet all I can see is DEV's of the game forcing themselves to ruin that potential, they seriously need to reconsider a lot of things or this game is done for.

Review for 0.6

Positives:

+ High quality renders
+ Matching music
+ Powerful MC whose behavior we have partial influence over
+ Ability to reject girls

Negatives:

- All the girls are bimbo with fatass or just fatass:
The proportions are terrible, they have such huge fatass that it's impossible for their legs to hold them upright. That's the level of pulling them with a crane through holes in walls.
- I see an ugly fat woman on the screen and read "MY" thoughs how beautiful she is
- Invented friends(mental illness) one even takes over the MC's body and we have no control over what he does.

Neutral:
- An engaging story at the beginning, changing over time to playing house with your sisters and mommy, which you may be angry with at first, but end up being a good little puppy.
- I can't say anything about the sex scenes, I don't know if the ones in the game are there at all because I rejected all those fat women.

All this time and still no worthwhile lewd scenes. Not to mention the major downgrade in models and writing. I had high hopes for it a few updates back, but now I am not even slightly interested in continuing to play this mess of a "game"

This VN / game starts with a bang and then nose dives into the depths of disappointment almost immediately after playing prologue. Though the unique story from the prologue piqued my interest, dev quickly shuts it down with new updated story plot and updated tempo, consistently creating a sense of lingering dissatisfaction.

Not only is the plot creativity poor, but also the plot sequencing, Li introduction and dialogues are terribly done.

The story started off really strong. Angel cast out of heaven, wings stripped, powers gone, and tortured for centuries. Everything was good until Earth. I lost interest when you're forced into living with the women. Really saw no point in going further.

The MC is a powerhouse in hell. Then you're turned into a nice compliant lap dog with no ability to get angry with the one that dropped ya off at the door step of a demon king. LOL.
You do get a decent "body guard" in hell though

The MC has zero hatred for Raph, Emma or Azel. Not even a choice to rebuke them for what happened.
Then you just go with the flow like a good little puppy. What is the reason for this? Just grab ahold of them and copy them powers and then portal outta there.
Where's Nyx? Is she only stuck in hell?
Why have choices if they don't allow you to do anything? ( outside of killing demons)

So with saying all of that
Renders are decent
Ladies are sexy. All of them
Story is ok

Summary
I'm skipping this one. I lost all interest when the MC was cast into the depths of brooding and sulking. Here, have another whiskey and pout some more.

I started off kinda interested in the plot (first 5 minutes). I kill a baddie, meet a few cuties, things are going in the right direction. Meet a few more cuties (we are now at the point were additional cuties start making all previous cuties very 2D). Meet more cuties (what?). Everyone is staring to run together (have I met this cutie already because she looks familiar). Add a few more cuties. Jesus, for all the cuties I have met, I can't remember touching one boob. Have I touched a boob? Add more cuties. Come on! I have been tricked, for each additional cutie added, I forget that I am not doing anything lewd. The whole thing is getting very verbose. I am bored and am not getting an erection when I meet more cuties on my first day of college. When did I start going to college? Forget this. There should be a 5 female model maximum rule in Ren'Py. Add more than five female models with dialogue, you have to eliminate one before you can add another.

Looks pretty interesting so far, in my honest opinion it starts off a bit weak and then builds up quite well. Didn't really like how the family initially reacted to the MC coming back into their lives but as the story unfolds it explains a lot. Looking forward to how it will plays out going forward.

The renders are pretty high quality and the girls have a lot of personality apart from looking good.

This is a difficult one. The renders and writing are good but the latter took a dip in recent updates. The main character makes some decisions which seem out of place considering how he was previously. Some of this could be attributed to his Mothers power but in some cases its a deus ex machina for plot not really being cohesive.

There's also no real sexual content so if thats your real reasoning for playing these games i wouldnt touch this one. Me personally i couldn't careless about the scenes and i often find them causing devs to add scenes just for the sake of adding them with no regards to its appropriateness. The story although disjointed has me intrigued still and some plot holes can be remedied in future updates.

The main thing that caused alot of people to turn on the dev was at the beginning it appeared to go down the route of a revenge power fantasy when it did a complete 180 in character.

Dont drop your head dev

The only positive attribute about this game is those dark and grim renders and a badass looking protagonist. However, looks can be deceiving. This is true for this VN also, as neither the prologue matches the rest of this game plot, nor the badass looking MC, who is actually always wimpy.
The MC is shown suffering from a BETA syndrome in front of MILFs. His PTSD that is as predictable as the story writing misses natural flow of emotions and rationality.
From being a wingless angel tortured for centuries and finally making his mind set for revenge and redemption, immediately ends up being bullied by a series of MILFs into a wet beaten dog of a college student forcibly paired with the same person who left him behind to his miserable fate.
In the recent updates, it's unclear who's is the actual main character (protagonist) as body swapping now happens pretty much at will of an entity named "Ghost", who was supposed to be a manifestation of MC's latent power as explained in the beginning.

The concept of hell, heaven, demons, angels, devil and god are all messed up due to ambiguous narration, confused mind and poor script continuity from writer's end. As a player you have zero control over the plot outcome, as all options lead to bad or worse storytelling.

Father is set to be antagonist, however mother, sisters and allies are equally irredeemable as they get severely pushed forward as main "Love Interest" despite being repulsive. The only likable character and best suitable love interest, was killed off even before any romantic attachment or tender feelings of care could be imagined. Yet she keeps haunting for some odd reason and makes the already whining MC suicidal.

Writers and development crew needs to first sit down and create a clear plot story with added plot sequence before mindlessly trying to blame poor performance on "Game Getting Leaked" beyond paywall. As, if only paying customer finds out about you how will you attract traffic and generate new patrons..? I'd suggest, moving forward with prologue plot story (including some action scenes demonstrating copied abilities also H-scenes) and getting rid of everything from EP - 2 Reloaded. Since, student life and beaten whimper doesn't suit at all. Also read your own dialogues before claiming Mother, Sister and Nyks are potential Li characters.

This is for V0.5
I really want to give this game a higher rating. It has huge potential and an incredible premise, but is unfortunately let down by a slight lack of polish.

The good:
The premise. An Angel is left stranded in Hell for unknown reasons, and tortured for centuries. He breaks free and goes on a rampage. That is a killer set up, with so many opportunities for great story-telling.

The models. They're hot, and with some cool variation. Plus, hot Angels? Count me in. The Demons and other denizens are likewise cool, but could use a little more variety.

The Lore. The world the dev has created borrows a lot from established mythology, but also adds a lot of interesting unique elements. It's a great backdrop to the story.

What can be improved:
Renders. They look so good most of the time, but again and again there are clipping issues with clothing. All that is needed is 30 seconds with the healing tool in photoshop to fix them, and it'd make such a difference.

Choices. For a rage-filled Kingslayer, the MC is remarkably inconsistent. His anger at losing someone he just met and going on a rampage contrasts oddly with his "well, she was just doing her job" reaction to the person who set him up for centuries of torture without hope of relief. That's just one example, and I can understand that the writer wants to create a closeness between the characters, but it needs to be consistent with the characters involved. There are a few other choices like this that could use some polish to make them work better.

Spelling and grammar. Five minutes with spellcheck would have solved most of this.

Overall, I think it's got awesome posibilities, but is let down by attention to detail. With such a rich world to play in, there is an opportunity to create a great game, but at the moment it needs a bit more to live up to it's potential.

Review For The Falling (Chapter 5)
I was initially intrigued by this game after reading the overview and decided to give it a try. However,it failed to entertain me in the slightest. The prologue showed promise,with the main character's adventures in hell,but the game completely ruined the story and turned it into a boring mess.
The pacing was all over the place,making it difficult to invest in the characters. Additionally,the game forces you to forgive your family for abandoning you in hell for centuries,which is completely stupid. The main character's guilt-tripping was also frustrating to watch. The lack of sexual content was disappointing,and the teasing dragged on for too long.
The only redeeming quality was the main character's design. This game could have been better if the developer had focused on a coherent story and included more sexual content.
At its current state,it's not worth playing.

Best VN ever ! Deep & incredible story.
Models are good, character are very deep . The characters psychology is very interresting. There are some misterious things that I need to discover. Thank you for your great job !

I like your renders, but I did not get the story. On first updates it was interesting to see what going on. But after I saw God it was done for me. Come on, what was the point to go that way?
For those who are waiting for sex animations, tillchapter 5 you have nothing to see.

The only good things are the models but the models alone can't save the game. The plot is boring and cringy, edgelord stuff. After some point the entire game arc change and it feels more shit. The Dev keep changing the models and other stuff, good stuff but lower contents every release. (Finished every update in 2/8 mins). Don't get me on the sex scenes. There is hardly any, I played alot of slow burn games but not as bad as this one lol. It like those dumb landlady game where you keep grinding and hoping Dev finally add sex scene this time lmfao.

Well Writen Story
Good Character Design (female) almost all female look attractive 80% (and have a blonde JILL) its look like the same but still so pretty with Curves Enchament
The story is interseting and i like to follow wheres this story end

Improvement
Maybe add more soundtrack or visual effect so some scene dont too quite, It well support scene more important to the story

For the Future
Will Be alot H scene or Romance Scene each character
its already chapter 5 and still only have 2 sex scene with emma and angela, hope theres more chapter left so dev can add scene little by little

My opinion
Reworked MC Design (changes Hairstyle or skin, or Heals wound with Raphael Power)
Resurrect Inessa

IT HAS A LOT POTENTIAL

ITS MY TIER S VN