3D-Daz the family secrets part 1-4(Marshall 77)

which character is your pick

  • Monica

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  • Julia

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Marshall 77

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the family secrets
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felix face some problem from his a opponent, the problem he cause is both inside the family and out in the ring. but he will find a secret between his mom and dad. will he be able to make both of these problem a good thing for him



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the family secrets
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felix face some problem from his a opponent, the problem he cause is both inside the family and out in the ring. but he will find a secret between his mom and dad. will he be able to make both of these problem a good thing for him



part 1:

support me: P1121248838

tags: incest,milf,ntr,impregnation,blowjob,footjob,threesome(mfm),creampie,deepthroat,virgin
Honestly, it's a bit of a strange start. The mother sleeps with other men, and the father is okay with it, and then they go have sex together. Why do they even tell their kids that the father is a cuckold? Lol



I have a question, what are these houses assets?
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Marshall 77

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Honestly, it's a bit of a strange start. The mother sleeps with other men, and the father is okay with it, and then they go have sex together. Why do they even tell their kids that the father is a cuckold? Lol



I have a question, what are these houses assets?
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his wife feel obligated to do something like that because the permission he give her. they tell the kid so they don't have to go hotel and if they see some men late at night come and goes in their house/the parents room they don't feel shocked or scared, but as felix says: now it's more scarier than not knowing.
as for the houses assets its
1stBastions Neighbours: Front Drive
 
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I personally like how this story is progressing. I have some straight forward criticism. English doesn't seem like your first language. So I really appreciate you putting it English. It can't have been easy. However, some work needs to be done to make it more conversational. Of course you aren't required to do this. It's readable as it is. But you are trying to tell a story as well as add visual appeal. It helps to be able to reach your audience and this is a great start. But please don't feel that you have to do something to correct grammar or make it feel more natural. It is porn, after all. I would normally offer a re-write, to keep the tone, and critical talking points in place but with a more natural form of conversational English. But I've been extremely busy lately and I don't have time to take on more projects. But there are lots of us out there who want to see projects like these appease and be successful. Reach out and ask around if you feel you want help to make this and even more saucier, naughtier story or even work your next project as well.
 
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Marshall 77

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I personally like how this story is progressing. I have some straight forward criticism. English doesn't seem like your first language. So I really appreciate you putting it English. It can't have been easy. However, some work needs to be done to make it more conversational. Of course you aren't required to do this. It's readable as it is. But you are trying to tell a story as well as add visual appeal. It helps to be able to reach your audience and this is a great start. But please don't feel that you have to do something to correct grammar or make it feel more natural. It is porn, after all. I would normally offer a re-write, to keep the tone, and critical talking points in place but with a more natural form of conversational English. But I've been extremely busy lately and I don't have time to take on more projects. But there are lots of us out there who want to see projects like these appease and be successful. Reach out and ask around if you feel you want help to make this and even more saucier, naughtier story or even work your next project as well.
thanks you are right english is not my first language. i'm glad that you like this. thanks for offering. i will try to make it better for the next chapters