A decent AVN that is held back by three major weaknesses.
On the plus side the story and writing are good overall. The game has plenty of sex scenes which a lot of visual novel authors seem to forget about.
Three major weaknesses:
Character Models & Renders
Character models and renders are several generations old and it shows. The author opted for 2010 era character models when much better ones are available. There's no charm or advantage to doing this IMO aside from faster render processing. Perhaps the author can't afford good hardware to render the game on, don't know. The visuals are a weak point of the game. It's difficult to get immersed in the sex scenes when the character models look terrible.
Harem & Love Interests
Instead of creating deep and meaningful characters the author chose to throw new love interest after new love interest at the player at hyper speed. Good writers create a small cast of characters and develop deep and meaningful relationships with each of them. Not so here, instead, in order to keep the story new and fresh, the author opted to throw new love interests at the player instead of developing deep relationships with them. So many authors make this mistake. Perhaps they simply don't have the necessary writing skills to develop deep and meaningful characters so their only option is to throw new love interest after new love interest at the player on a continual basis. This results in all the love interests blending together and being forgettable. By the time the story cycles back to love interest #20, it's been too long and I don't even know who I'm talking to anymore.
Choices
Few choices in the game. The few that are there are minor and don't have a real impact on the story. Most are asking if you want to see a bonus scene or not or call someone by a different name. The author basically made a kinetic novel and added a few minor choices and called it a visual novel. The game is a kinetic novel and linear in near every way aside from a few minor choices added in as an afterthought. The player has no choices on who to add to his harem or add as love interests.
Summary
Overall, I applaud the story and the high amount of sex scenes but can't overlook the three major weaknesses of the game which brings it down considerably.
On the plus side the story and writing are good overall. The game has plenty of sex scenes which a lot of visual novel authors seem to forget about.
Three major weaknesses:
Character Models & Renders
Character models and renders are several generations old and it shows. The author opted for 2010 era character models when much better ones are available. There's no charm or advantage to doing this IMO aside from faster render processing. Perhaps the author can't afford good hardware to render the game on, don't know. The visuals are a weak point of the game. It's difficult to get immersed in the sex scenes when the character models look terrible.
Harem & Love Interests
Instead of creating deep and meaningful characters the author chose to throw new love interest after new love interest at the player at hyper speed. Good writers create a small cast of characters and develop deep and meaningful relationships with each of them. Not so here, instead, in order to keep the story new and fresh, the author opted to throw new love interests at the player instead of developing deep relationships with them. So many authors make this mistake. Perhaps they simply don't have the necessary writing skills to develop deep and meaningful characters so their only option is to throw new love interest after new love interest at the player on a continual basis. This results in all the love interests blending together and being forgettable. By the time the story cycles back to love interest #20, it's been too long and I don't even know who I'm talking to anymore.
Choices
Few choices in the game. The few that are there are minor and don't have a real impact on the story. Most are asking if you want to see a bonus scene or not or call someone by a different name. The author basically made a kinetic novel and added a few minor choices and called it a visual novel. The game is a kinetic novel and linear in near every way aside from a few minor choices added in as an afterthought. The player has no choices on who to add to his harem or add as love interests.
Summary
Overall, I applaud the story and the high amount of sex scenes but can't overlook the three major weaknesses of the game which brings it down considerably.